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freed at last.darkness tells its wicked tales,
but i am not afraid.
the man in the mirror speaks;
a ghost, and yet he is there.
i sense him.
i see him at last.
i know his breath, its icy sting
that once left destruction
in its wake.
rise to the surface now, dark brother.
let the two become one at last.
through a glass dimly,
i gaze upon the past and
look ahead toward the future.
all these things iβve done.
the human cowers from the killer;
the killer cowers from the human.
emotion and murder;
bloodlust and visceral sentiment.
shall the two find a meeting place?
shall the two forge a bond?
the killer feels; the human knows
the bloodstained hands are his.
rise to the surface now, dark brother.
let the two become one at last.
a web of lies untangled,
the truth contained therein.
that he is i and i am he,
that the steely gaze of the wicked
comes from the same eyes i possess.
the cunning falsehood; another life
lived to exonerate the other.
but the reflection knows its source
and cannot deny it any longer.
you caused me to feel,
you caused me to bleed,
and now, a ghost i cannot be.
no longer in denial, here i am.
rise to the surface now, dark brother.
let the two become one at last.
as i shake and quiver,
i taste the blood and smile the devilβs smile.
as i shake and quiver,
i love with passion never tapped.
with selfless care, so wantonly i wear its marks.
i am my own worst enemy no more.
no more shall i delude myself.
i love to taste the world in all its flavors.
i love to hear the world scream
in both pain and pleasure.
dualistic creature.
angel and devil; saint and sinner.
one in the same, forever, amen.
be stilled no longer.
be quieted no more.
i have seen the assassin
and he is me.
rise to the surface now, dark brother.
let the two become one at last.
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Comments: 21
PhantomThiefVier [2008-12-04 16:36:07 +0000 UTC]
My minds rarely conflict, one does what it wants and the other gently guides, but they have been known to be at odds before.
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LNIN9 [2008-11-09 06:13:35 +0000 UTC]
you paint beautifully good sir....
but apart i (we) shall remain....
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peterdawes In reply to LNIN9 [2008-11-12 05:37:14 +0000 UTC]
as many times as they try to connect, they repel. but, try to connect, they do.
thank you very kindly, friend.
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frisca-freak [2008-10-15 19:36:56 +0000 UTC]
i know that feeling all too well...
another amazing poem! looking forward to reading more
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peterdawes In reply to frisca-freak [2008-10-16 09:47:15 +0000 UTC]
thank you, my dear.
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peterdawes In reply to blucrimson [2008-10-16 09:47:48 +0000 UTC]
you are too kind. many thanks.
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believeeverything [2008-10-15 03:16:47 +0000 UTC]
a feeling that i think most people experience at one time in their life, although possibly not to the same extent as you. its nice to read work that is dark and powerful, a nice change from the usual even though you write wonderful pieces regardless of the topic
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peterdawes In reply to believeeverything [2008-10-15 03:53:41 +0000 UTC]
thank you very kindly.
i do try to insert the occasional thought of a different tenor in the midst. you all are gracious to read what i present either way.
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sandmanno3 [2008-10-14 22:45:11 +0000 UTC]
Wow... powerful, dark, and... smells like copper
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peterdawes In reply to sandmanno3 [2008-10-15 09:23:14 +0000 UTC]
one of the best scents in the world.
thank you very kindly.
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Kathryn-777 [2008-10-14 22:10:28 +0000 UTC]
I can't remember a time when I wasn't tugged and pulled between the two. There is indeed two within me! Well done and it paints a vivid picture!
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peterdawes In reply to Kathryn-777 [2008-10-15 09:27:47 +0000 UTC]
a common condition. we each do that which we know we should not and feel the pull to do it again. (relish the enjoyment of it, even.)
with me, though, the problem is that if i get too swept up in it... many people die.
thank you very kindly, dear.
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Kathryn-777 In reply to peterdawes [2008-10-15 21:30:31 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure Peter...yes I can imagine that giving in has an entirely new dimension in your case...
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Guitar-Child [2008-10-14 21:06:11 +0000 UTC]
Heh, there have been two minds in this body for as long as I can remeber . . .
Great work as always, love.
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Malandante [2008-10-14 18:29:34 +0000 UTC]
It sweeps you and takes you on a ride you have no control over. I love it.
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peterdawes In reply to Malandante [2008-10-16 09:48:10 +0000 UTC]
what a compliment! many thanks.
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peterdawes In reply to DarcKnyt [2008-10-16 09:48:30 +0000 UTC]
quite so. such is the case for us all.
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