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peterdawes — Through the Seeing Stone
Published: 2009-08-24 03:18:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 508; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 1
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Description within the mirror of self-examination
there lies the truth of all i see before me,
the clever acts orchestrated by those
with myopic wisdom, who would call
the innocent a traitor.

cast aside, the loyal from the camp.
relegated to little more than a rumor,
and i shed crimson tears in response
for his honor, the banner i now defend
with heart and soul intertwined as one.

who would make a martyr a villain?
who would warp and twist reality
into the charlatan charade i now watch
with fists clenched and eyes
brimmed with tears?

who would shed the blood of the blameless?
silver lies spilling from the cup to be
lapped up by gold-plated tongues,
while peels of laughter ignore the wounds
of he who stood and bled with honor.

let not the ignorant be tricked.
the smoke and deceit, the venom
belonging not to him, but to those
who stabbed caesar with the
weapons fashioned by wicked hands.

the poet speaks his peace.
through the seeing stone, he watches the folly
and with bitterness he hones the dagger,
words meant to defend the one
he has come to love the most.
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Comments: 18

BlueEyedMelody [2009-11-13 23:37:49 +0000 UTC]

wow!!
I love this

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peterdawes In reply to BlueEyedMelody [2009-11-14 04:07:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you very kindly!

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LACYDRAWERS [2009-11-03 01:15:09 +0000 UTC]

WOW!!!
Your ability to weave a web with your words is amazing....

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LeonieSainteVire [2009-08-29 00:34:33 +0000 UTC]

::claps::ravo, mon ami! It is such a pleasure to see you once more!

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ZomaS-M [2009-08-26 04:57:37 +0000 UTC]

Very... clever? I don't know, I don't pretend to work as well with words as you do Peter. But it is very powerful.

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HoldingBackTears [2009-08-26 03:00:56 +0000 UTC]

Well damn if you didn't do it again, Peter.

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AndromedaII [2009-08-24 20:00:40 +0000 UTC]

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AnimadellaRosa [2009-08-24 12:27:15 +0000 UTC]

Powerfully worded, which in turn brings on a powerful image. Bravo Peter!

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Malandante [2009-08-24 07:21:29 +0000 UTC]

This is amazingly put

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Ferelwing [2009-08-24 05:48:00 +0000 UTC]

Very well written hon! Very well written.

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TheseKrimzonFlames [2009-08-24 04:29:10 +0000 UTC]

Ok, wow, I love this. may I ask what inspired it?

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peterdawes In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2009-08-24 04:31:47 +0000 UTC]

*chuckles* a... ah... personal situation, you could say. cannot give much in the way of details, simply is what it is.
hello, brother... it has been entirely too long since i have asked about what is going on with you.

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to peterdawes [2009-08-24 04:38:36 +0000 UTC]

I noted you the other day to check on you.
How are you my friend?

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peterdawes In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2009-08-25 06:35:30 +0000 UTC]

*smiles* i am faring much, much better in recent days than i had for a while. things are assuredly looking up.
*slaps forehead* and i read the note, with the intention of responding, but something distracted me before i could act on it. damn. i am sorry about this. but i am very appreciative of you checking up on me. it feels good to be missed.

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to peterdawes [2009-08-25 14:04:03 +0000 UTC]

Things happen

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Cytea [2009-08-24 04:17:06 +0000 UTC]

i really like

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peterdawes In reply to Cytea [2009-08-24 04:22:22 +0000 UTC]

*smiles* thank you, dear.

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Cytea In reply to peterdawes [2009-08-26 18:03:28 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome

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