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Published: 2008-03-25 12:39:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 294; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description long, languid strokes of
fingertips on porcelain
memorizing skin
she wrinkles her nose and laughs
saying, 'stop that, it tickles'
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Comments: 15

Kira73 [2008-07-01 01:19:40 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful. It spoke to me because of the cuteness at the end. All intimate moments need that cute factor.

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peterdawes In reply to Kira73 [2008-07-01 02:52:26 +0000 UTC]

i couldn't agree more.
it seems to be the distinguishing mark
between intimacy
and lust.

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dark-dragon-wings [2008-04-02 09:17:43 +0000 UTC]

i think you captured the essence very well. agian this is bubbly cute and random ^^ but me likies

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peterdawes In reply to dark-dragon-wings [2008-04-04 03:49:55 +0000 UTC]

One of my better memories.

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dark-dragon-wings In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-04 03:52:57 +0000 UTC]

lmao - one could say that

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Zer0Hawke [2008-03-26 21:46:21 +0000 UTC]

Adorable and sweet - I really love it! ^_^ It made me smile - I need that after the coursework I'm currently going through, so thanks!

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peterdawes In reply to Zer0Hawke [2008-03-27 01:50:21 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure, dear.
Thank you kindly for the favorite.

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Zer0Hawke In reply to peterdawes [2008-03-27 09:11:17 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^_^

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LeonieSainteVire [2008-03-25 14:24:01 +0000 UTC]

Denise-Tanka poems are short, lyrical poems structured in 31 syllables. They are generally 5 lines arranged in a two part form, the first part in 5, 7, 5, syllables, and the second part in 7 and 7. Most importantly, they must convey feelings and emotions in a way that that is felt so deeply as to suggest they are beyond words.

Peter...I have rarely had the pleasure of reading someone with your ability and command over the written word. And I would say you have readily mastered Tanka.

Fingertips on porcelein...I see it...feel it.

Wonderful.

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peterdawes In reply to LeonieSainteVire [2008-03-26 23:56:43 +0000 UTC]

I am delighted it was as tactile as I had hoped it would be. And I have a bit of work to do in mastering it, but playing with the haiku has gone a long way in helping. You are gracious, dear.

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denlm [2008-03-25 13:29:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm not familiar with tanka, so cannot comment on the form. I loved the visual though. Memorizing skin was my favorite line.

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-03-26 02:52:00 +0000 UTC]

Look at how much we learn from Helen Keller.

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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-03-26 11:22:39 +0000 UTC]

I can never hear that name now without thinking of Jason with a smile. Ask your lady friend to explain, if need be.

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-03-27 00:27:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I am quite familiar. Hence the citation.

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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-03-28 12:45:14 +0000 UTC]

I should have known.

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