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peterkopher — A Kiss...
Published: 2006-07-01 19:00:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 82; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Two warm lips, briefly brushingToo damned fleetingly.
Two warm lips, sweetly touching
Too enticingly.
Two warm lips - gently, moistly and with loving
Too excitedly.
Two warm lips, barely trembling
Too endearingly.
Two warm lips, impishly pressing
Too forbiddenly.
Two warm lips, knowingly parting
To wait - in vain...another kiss.
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Comments: 17
Tis very beautiful. ^^ I am wierd. I liked he way that you used the "two___ , too____" Because it just made it seem more interesting to me. o.o
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No prob ^_^ It's true.... *forgot what she said on accident besides the two too's thing*
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too hard to remember the two previous messages 
Thank you!
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YAY! You is awesome ^_^. And I am special (side note: me and my friends joke about it a ot) But I am loveled for it
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I still forgot many things... but sure.. O.o..... >.>;
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Thank you - I can never repay your most timely fav!
:Rose: 
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Damn! I've been glomped! How do I get even?
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I like this very much. It lets the reader feel the spectrum of nervous "first" emotions. Nice work.
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Thanks...it was written during a VERY tough time in my adult life.
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