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Published: 2014-06-10 20:27:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 559; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 4
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I love the composition and I feel that this crop is much better than the first version of this picture. I think the first version of this picture should have been in black and white and this version should have been in color. That might just be because I have already seen what the color since post look like and I really like the combinations of blues.
Despite my love of the colors, I feel that in this black-and-white second version of this picture makes it easier to read the womanβs emotion from her facial expression.
The lighting in this picture is really great, the picture is perfectly balanced and Iβm captivated by all the texture detail that I can see in the picture. Great job!
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Thank you for taking the time to critique my work, it is much appreciated.
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you`re so very welcome, Peter! Β
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I like the classic tones of this black and white version but I think I prefer the color version a teeny bit more 
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I always appreciate any feedback, thanks John!
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Well I wouldn't take her on 
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I'm with you there, thanks Lawrence.
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Glad you like it dear!
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I sure do my friend
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Thank you Jenny, she does look mischievious!
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That's the word I was looking for.
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I think so Gloria, thank you!
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What's with the 'licious?
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licious is something cute my big verybad brotherlicious.
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Alrite my little troublemaker sisterlicious, if you say so.Β Β
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You should try it sometime. CallΒ Richardlicious. He'll luv you Long time.
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Dam woman...she's Jamaican not Asian. Get the accent right
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What?? Hell no! The guy will disown me!Β
It's not like he owns me or anything.
But it won't matter to him, cause he'll disown me anyway!
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Aww, it is OK. He disowned me many times cause of my Pictures. Call him asslicious. I'm so mad now. haha
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