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czaren [2010-04-07 14:04:33 +0000 UTC]

I like the angle! <3
She has really nice hair~ ♥

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vanityfair [2010-04-01 01:33:20 +0000 UTC]

Here's my honest criticism. Don't worry, I won't be too harsh. I really love her face. She has a lovely face. I think what really calls my attention is her hair. I love how it flows. This is just a suggestion, you don't have to follow it for the next one, it's totally up to you, but I would add more detailed strand to the hair to make it look more natural. Like it were silk underwater. I have to say that I'm not too crazy about the color scheme, it's too pale for my taste, not enough contrasts. But that's just me. Personally, I'm not too crazy about pastel coloring. All in all, you can do a second version of this. There's a lot of room to improve since the way I look at it, it doesn't feel that you are finished with this. It's more like you are just half-way done.

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