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PhiTuS — Practice with Fighting Moves
Published: 2009-10-11 03:39:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 357; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 7
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01) Jumping Front Kick to Back Kick (Edited)02) 540 Tornado Kick
03) Superman Punch (Edited)
04) Jumping Back Kick (Edited)
05) Shin Kick to Roundhouse
06) Axe Kick To Roundhouse
07) Shoryuken (Edited)
08) Shovel Hook
09) Flicker Jab
10) Jumping Stomp
11) Flying Armbar
12) Tomoe Nage
13) OD's Fetus Punch
14) Triple Roundhouse Combo (Edited)
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Comments: 20
I know I must've screwed up something up there, so if something doesn't make sense, let me know.
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01) It looks like his second kick lost momentum when he landed because both legs are down, so it looks a bit forced. Try to keep his leg still above his waist (maybe extended, but I'm not 100% sure about that) so it can just fall on its own and swing its way up with the momentum it got.
04) The first kick barely looks like a kick. Try making the leg that's making the kick bend its knee downwards just a liiittle bit and his spine arch the other way. That way, he can pull his leg back once he jumps.
And before he jumps, make him extend the supporting leg a bit towards the floor and make him release the kick AFTER he touches the floor. Otherwise, the kick just doesn't look stable. In real life, you'd just fall on your face.
If the second kick was meant to be a mid-air kick, just keep the supporting leg drawn back and figure out a way to make him land after he does the kick.
07) Just make him fall slower after the punch.
14) Make him lift his knee up just a frame before the first kick. It's awkward to have two roundhouse kicks with one leg without spinning, so it's best to make the first kick a shin kick.
Right after the second kick, make him land like he's preparing himself to perform the 540 tornado you animated. Then, just... well... pretty much animate the 540 tornado.
That's all it, the rest is fine.
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CORRECTION: 04) "... after he kicks, make him release the final kick..."
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ah shit, I fucked up again. SO LAME.
Let me get my shit together.
After
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Damn it, Brian. You know I can't see this shit in my inbox.
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Sorry brah. By the way, it looks good now, except that the first one looks like he slides across a little bit when he lands. You did good.
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The superman punch is a bit sluggish and awkward. Maybe if the frames with him in mid air had his torso arched back (with the non-punching arm still forward), and if he released the punch just after touching the floor, it would look like he had more windup and more power.
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Alright, edited. How bout now?
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Yup, looks good to me. I can look at the rest of the stuff carefully if you're in the mood for more critique, but it's pretty good either way.
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Cool.
Maybe I'll resubmit it with buttons and shit so you can see it better.
But later.
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I can screw around with it using the right click options. I'll leave a separate comment for anything else I happen to spot. If you don't get one, then I have nothing to say.
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sorry about the fail, by the way. You may block any unnecessary comments... or keep them FOR THE WORLD TO WITNESS.
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/me swings cape.
*HISSSSSSSSSS*
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The best part is that it's usually said in less than a second.
FFFF shit that reminds me I have to make something awhdoaiwhdaoih
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