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Phoenix-Cry — Tooth and Claw, part 1 SG-1

Published: 2006-11-13 03:04:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1784; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 5
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Description Just a quick opener. I figured that if I didn't start this story soon...I'd never get around to it.


NOTE: The time frame of this one is somewhere in Season 5.



Tooth and Claw

Part I




“Well so far I’m unimpressed.” Jack growled.

“Jack, we’ve been here less than thirty seconds.” Daniel countered. “Sam and Teal’c haven’t even made it through the Gate yet.”

Daniel waved his hand at the active wormhole just as Teal’c stepped through, followed quickly by Sam. Jack looked them over, looked around at the heavily forested world, and then back at Daniel.

“Okay, we’re all here...can we go home now?” Jack asked seriously.

“The Tok'ra seem to believe this world has suddenly become important to one of the Gou’ald that they watch.” Teal’c stated. “Should we not explore it?”

“No.” Jack said firmly. “If the Tok'ra think it’s so important *they* should be exploring it.”

“Sir, they don’t have the resources.” Carter pointed out. “They asked us to come here as a favour.”

“I’m getting sick of doing them ‘favours’.” Jack said sourly.

“Jac...” Daniel started.

“Half and hour, then we’re going home.” Jack said firmly. “Carter, send the MALP back through.”

“Yes, Sir.”

Sam went over to the DHD and dialed the Gate back to the base. Daniel looked around the immediate vicinity and when he found nothing of interest he started to wander off down the path that led away from the Gate.

“Daniel,” Jack called “where are you going?”

“Half an hour isn’t much time to explore an entire planet, might as well get started.” Daniel replied over his shoulder.

“Teal’c go with him...try to keep him out of trouble.”

Teal’c nodded and headed down the path that Daniel had taken. Sam watched the active gate snap shut just after the last of the MALP slip through the event horizon. Turning around she found Jack looking generally irritated.

“Something wrong, Sir?”

“Yeah...we’re wasting our time here.”

“You think the Tok'ra have sent us on a wild goose chase.” Sam smiled.

“The thought crossed my mind.”

“I doubt they would do that. If the Gou’ald are interested in this planet, there must be something here.”

“It’s the ‘if’ part that concerns me.” Jack looked around.

“Colonel?” Sam asked in concern.

“I don’t know.” Jack answered the implied question. “I just have a bad feeling about this place.”

“You say that about a lot of planets.” Sam chuckled.

“And notice how often I’m right.”

“Jack?” The radio squawked in Daniel’s voice. “We found something.”

“What is it?”

“Ruins. An altar of sorts.”

“Alright, Carter and I are on our way.”

“Okay.”

“Daniel?” Jack asked.

“Yeah?”

“Don’t touch anything.”


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Comments: 25

GeneralEisenhower56 [2011-09-21 17:54:49 +0000 UTC]

and like a child daniel won't heed the good advice, and as we all know unknow artifacts magical or technological, we shouldn't toch them. well nice picture and i can guess what now will hapen

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Phoenix-Cry In reply to GeneralEisenhower56 [2011-09-21 22:50:53 +0000 UTC]

Daniel has to touch!

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Luthlaya [2008-07-18 18:07:04 +0000 UTC]

Oeeehhh, this souds interesting....

By the way, I know that title, do you happen ot watch 'Doctor Who'? Cause its the name of one of the episodes.

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Phoenix-Cry In reply to Luthlaya [2008-07-18 20:18:56 +0000 UTC]

I never finished this story. I'm a bad girl.

I don't want Dr. Who, but since 'Tooth and Nail' is a common phrase I'm sure 'Tooth and Claw' is as well.

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Drac0nis In reply to Phoenix-Cry [2008-09-01 21:22:52 +0000 UTC]

never finished huh?.. well I bet big bucks that Danny will touch something that he shouldn't have XD

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Phoenix-Cry In reply to Drac0nis [2008-09-01 22:52:00 +0000 UTC]

Yup, pretty much!

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Drac0nis In reply to Phoenix-Cry [2008-09-01 23:33:15 +0000 UTC]

Well.. it's not like he hasn't gotten into trouble on ALOT of episodes because of that reason.

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Phoenix-Cry In reply to Drac0nis [2008-09-02 01:49:13 +0000 UTC]

yup

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Catprog [2006-11-19 04:38:54 +0000 UTC]

They do not send the MALP back(I don't think). They leave it so they can communicate with the SGC

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Phoenix-Cry In reply to Catprog [2006-11-19 06:12:19 +0000 UTC]

I needed it gone, and I need them separated. This way I could kill two birds with one stone. Jack's in a hurry, he figures it will be one less thing to deal with when they go to leave. I didn't state that in so many words, but I can if it will make ya happy.

Call it artistic license

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Catprog In reply to Phoenix-Cry [2006-11-19 07:07:46 +0000 UTC]

Thats fine

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Phoenix-Cry In reply to Catprog [2006-11-19 16:59:17 +0000 UTC]

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AriMacc [2006-11-15 01:35:05 +0000 UTC]

Dont touch anything. Well be right back after these messages.

Sorry, thats the first thing that popped in my head when I read that besides the word AWESUMZ!

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Phoenix-Cry In reply to AriMacc [2006-11-15 01:47:50 +0000 UTC]

Heehee! thanks! Hopefully inspiration will strike and I'll get another chapter done tonight.

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AriMacc In reply to Phoenix-Cry [2006-11-19 01:30:07 +0000 UTC]

Hopefully. Well I guess not the same night you posted the reply since I replied to the reply 3 days later. Wow...I type real cornfusin

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Phoenix-Cry In reply to AriMacc [2006-11-19 06:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah....I have just *not* had time for such things! I"m going to try very, very hard to get another chapter in tommorow. But now of course you've reminded me that I need to finish Egypt as well.

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Jonas-Shifu [2006-11-13 15:51:41 +0000 UTC]

Haven't I read this somewhere before?

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Phoenix-Cry In reply to Jonas-Shifu [2006-11-13 15:54:24 +0000 UTC]

It is a remake.

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Jonas-Shifu In reply to Phoenix-Cry [2006-11-13 15:55:06 +0000 UTC]

Ah! There you go then.

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Phoenix-Cry In reply to Jonas-Shifu [2006-11-13 15:56:39 +0000 UTC]

I'm rewriting my first SG fic 'Metaphorsis' with an actual plot, rather than just the silly short story full of puns that it used to be.

At least I'm hoping too...I don't have a good idea of how I'm going to pull this off yet.

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Jonas-Shifu In reply to Phoenix-Cry [2006-11-13 16:12:09 +0000 UTC]

How about a long story full of puns?

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Phoenix-Cry In reply to Jonas-Shifu [2006-11-13 16:25:34 +0000 UTC]

Heehee.

Are you a pun lover?


I used to be. I sent out ten puns to my friends hoping that a few of them would make people laugh. Sadly, no pun in ten did (read that out lound...you'll get it).

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Jonas-Shifu In reply to Phoenix-Cry [2006-11-13 18:01:34 +0000 UTC]

Not really, but they're unavoidable.

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LeonaWindrider [2006-11-13 06:36:24 +0000 UTC]

Daniel not touch anything? ROFL yeah right...

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Phoenix-Cry In reply to LeonaWindrider [2006-11-13 13:30:51 +0000 UTC]

Jack has to try, right? Heehee.


I honestly have no idea where this story is going, or how I'm going to pull it off. ...a challange.

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