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Published: 2005-01-22 04:32:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 2782; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 23
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Description Not quite sure this counts as "sci-fi", but here it is anyway. ^_^
It's an ESPer I threw together for the RPG I'm working on. After I scanned it, I found a million things wrong with it. Her right arm (her right, not yours) was WAY too long. I shortened it TWICE.
Anyway, I'm pretty happy with how it came out... do you think it will look good in an actual published rulebook?

"You're your own biggest critic."
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Comments: 9

GEOvanneGEO [2008-04-24 02:42:33 +0000 UTC]

cool, but dont you mean PKer? since shes using pk

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phoenixsamurai In reply to GEOvanneGEO [2008-04-30 00:57:00 +0000 UTC]

ESPers have a variety of psychic powers. Telekinesis just happens to be one... but the term "ESPer" is a generic term for anyone with psychic powers (i.e. "ESP"). Yes, I realize ESP technically just means having a "sixth sense" but I didn't invent the terms! ^_^

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rachaelm5 [2005-01-25 02:02:27 +0000 UTC]

It'll look good, but really, both arms are quite a bit too big...

Please don't mind me too much; I'm a demonic critic. I really do like the arrangement of the floating objects, and the proportions of the rest of her body are well-balanced.

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phoenixsamurai In reply to rachaelm5 [2005-01-25 14:36:06 +0000 UTC]

OK... then I guess I'll shrink the arms... ^_^;

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ChoiYugi [2005-01-22 12:46:18 +0000 UTC]

muu, i wanted to color it ;;

this is rather interesting, the objects floating around the girl like that. her feet may look small but it could be just perpective.

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phoenixsamurai In reply to ChoiYugi [2005-01-22 15:59:47 +0000 UTC]

Anyone who wants to color it, go ahead! I'll post the colored version(s), and whichever one gets the most "votes" will go in the color version of the rules.

^_^

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MariP [2005-01-22 09:38:23 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I am pretty sure it will look good in the rulebook

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chibikenshin [2005-01-22 08:55:32 +0000 UTC]

If he doesn't colour it, I will.

OOooooo...floaty things!

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zahra [2005-01-22 04:55:42 +0000 UTC]

Yay I am glad you are posting more art mister boyle! I think it looks good, though I agree with you about the arm. Also, the feet look a bit small.
Are you going to color this? I think it looks great

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