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Pia-sama — RD Chapter 5 P05 (fixed -_-)

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Published: 2015-03-08 21:37:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 35277; Favourites: 354; Downloads: 192
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Description Why... why i cannot get more pages done in less time!!!

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The beginning

Previous (P04)

Next (P06 )

MLP and characters belong to Hasbro.

Story/script by FFB TheFlimFlamBros
Art by Pia-chan (me)

Background Lineart by Heimo HeimoBauss

Greyscale Coloring by Blazewingsthunder
Guns by Pabloracer1
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Comments: 93

residentmk2 [2015-09-27 10:34:05 +0000 UTC]

need to "stay in bed"  spike do not go to sleep
 if y get that joke %&& y that

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Anybronym0ti0n [2015-03-31 16:34:11 +0000 UTC]

Spike's making his move.

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CartoonMetalWarrior [2015-03-15 17:59:34 +0000 UTC]

Spike needs to watch out what he's doing with his right hand/claw .

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midnightterror1 [2015-03-14 04:42:59 +0000 UTC]

Fluttershy wants the D and im not talking about dragons  but something's finally going right for him!

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writingbubble [2015-03-12 23:19:19 +0000 UTC]

love AJs design too by the way!  
sucks that I have to wait for the next pages though  
but oh well! 

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HJSDGCE [2015-03-12 15:23:13 +0000 UTC]

I'm gonna guess that everyone won't take it too lightly when they do reach the cafeteria...

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karkovice1 [2015-03-11 12:53:15 +0000 UTC]

"Kill me now."

I wouldn't be surprised if Fancy Pants did just that.

And with the design of Spike's tail, it also surprises me his pants don't constantly fall to the floor.

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Istarian In reply to karkovice1 [2015-08-19 05:50:02 +0000 UTC]

It wouldn't be too hard to have a reinforced hole there (if the tail is just another appendage) or another tie/button if not.

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ColonelBSacquet In reply to karkovice1 [2015-03-13 19:21:27 +0000 UTC]

It's not like Spike had any say in the matter. :-P

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jyroman53 [2015-03-10 20:56:34 +0000 UTC]

Troubles incoming !

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Valronic [2015-03-10 18:17:38 +0000 UTC]

Doesn't it bother her that her friends are ruthless killers?

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Pia-sama In reply to Valronic [2015-03-10 19:23:58 +0000 UTC]

They're not so why should she?

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ColonelBSacquet In reply to Pia-sama [2015-03-13 19:26:46 +0000 UTC]

Not ruthless killers? Rainbow Dash, apart being a really obnoxious person so far, just killed five security guards (confirmed) plus all the others aboard the big Patrol Boat. Not to mention Rarity literally flipping the entire boat upside down and drowning the entire crew, most likely.

If that is not being a ruthless kiler, then what is?

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Valronic In reply to Pia-sama [2015-03-10 19:36:22 +0000 UTC]

I guess I misunderstood the earlier pages.  Rainbow especially didn't seem to express much remorse.  I will read them again.  Maybe its just me.

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TrueFrenzy In reply to Valronic [2015-03-10 20:57:16 +0000 UTC]

Just because someone seems like a rutheless killer doesn't mean she is a rutheless killer.

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Valronic In reply to TrueFrenzy [2015-03-10 22:16:28 +0000 UTC]

No... its made pretty clear that she is.  Ch3 pg9 depicts rainbow as rather heartless.  Rarity's reaction to getting her boot damaged is no better from a moral perspective.  At least rainbow only targeted threats.  Rarity either killed everyone on that boat or left them to the mercy of the sea.

I'm not saying that darker themes are bad in and of themselves even for a My Little Pony comic.  The art is great and the story is good enough to keep me looking forward to the next page.  I am a fan of this.  However, I think Fluttershy being so seemingly kind, without even commenting on the conduct of her dearest friends is...a valid nitpick. 

Its still very near Fluttershys into so any amount of moral introspection isn't something that anyone should ask for this early, from this character.


Honestly, I wouldn't even go this much into it if Pia-sama hadn't stated that they aren't supposed to be perceived this way.  Again maybe I'm the only one who sees it like this but, in my opinion, as they are depicted thus far... Rarity and Rainbow are cold. (im not too sure about Applejack)

Rarity looks like a sociopath and rainbow comes across as a jaded psycho.  I know they aren't displaying traits that are far off what the show depicts but when you add the entire taking sentient life thing... that change in context really changes what these characters are.

   

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darsh1989 In reply to Valronic [2015-03-14 04:47:47 +0000 UTC]

You are quite right, they both kill with less hesitation than one puts into deciding breakfast. They are either mercenaries or pirates who kill without mercy or regret. It's not even up for debate considering they attacked a ship without provocation and proceeded to murder everyone on board. Except Spike of course, after all the show must go on. It would stand to reason that for Fluttershy to so casually be the friend and accomplice of these murderers than she too must be way off the deep end. Though she probably won't be and there will be some contrived reason for them to not seem like villains, my money is on them being part of some resistance to overthrow Celestia.

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hillbe In reply to Valronic [2015-03-13 22:10:41 +0000 UTC]

In combat If it's an even fight you no doubt messed up in the planning dept. Nothing heartless about it.

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TheFlimFlamBros In reply to Valronic [2015-03-11 00:48:18 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't look TOO much into it, there's still a TON of story left, we're still in arc 1 bro. Secrets will be learned, truths uncovered, facts instated. Who knows? Perhaps it seems this way, but has anyone really asked if they enjoy it? I guess what I'm trying to say is be patient, please. You may or may not be pleasantly surprised :3

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LiquidBrickz [2015-03-10 16:37:03 +0000 UTC]

Just found this today, 3/10/15... what have i been missing OMG... I cant wait for the next page!

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Windspeed8 [2015-03-10 15:26:27 +0000 UTC]

Fluttershy is sooo sweet, I just love her    

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Vakama95096 [2015-03-10 09:42:59 +0000 UTC]

I have a feeling they have open the briefcase by now....Spike is gonna be sooo dead

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Kyoshi001 [2015-03-10 02:31:36 +0000 UTC]

nicely done pia-sama. 😁 👍👍👍

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zaiali [2015-03-10 01:02:17 +0000 UTC]

I like this comic

and I really like your fluttershy. 

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tyruvelp [2015-03-09 23:58:29 +0000 UTC]

"Why... why i cannot get more pages done in less time!!!"

because we would not get this level of awesome detail if you went any faster

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LiquidBrickz In reply to tyruvelp [2015-03-10 16:37:24 +0000 UTC]

agreed!

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thepixeldragon15 [2015-03-09 21:10:34 +0000 UTC]

Relax Pia, just take all the time you need.

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Sturmlion1 [2015-03-09 20:36:08 +0000 UTC]

His hand in the last panel...so close to heaven...

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AccountNew [2015-03-09 18:45:57 +0000 UTC]

God, I love this comic line.

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darsh1989 [2015-03-09 15:58:46 +0000 UTC]

It would seem "bootylicious" can now be tacked onto Fluttershy's list of positive qualities.

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Pia-sama In reply to darsh1989 [2015-03-09 16:02:28 +0000 UTC]

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tyruvelp In reply to Pia-sama [2015-03-10 00:01:12 +0000 UTC]

chubby is ALL the right places 
positive junk in the trunk (and bonnet(s) - lol) 
(sadly i ran out at this point) 

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nerevars [2015-03-09 14:50:18 +0000 UTC]

Watch your hand Spike.

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ChaoticNote [2015-03-09 09:36:31 +0000 UTC]

The panel order is kinda confusing on this one. =/

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ahmadsyar In reply to ChaoticNote [2015-03-10 17:26:44 +0000 UTC]

yeap, confusing

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nerevars In reply to ChaoticNote [2015-03-09 14:50:08 +0000 UTC]

Me too.

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Somvold [2015-03-09 09:13:40 +0000 UTC]

Won't hold my breath on Spike's luck from improving otherwise great collaboration as always from all of you.

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CCB-18 [2015-03-09 08:21:02 +0000 UTC]

Wonder who we'll meet in the Cafeteria? Derpy? Doctor Whooves? The Cutie-Mark Crusaders? Zecora? Maybe even Twilight Sparkle! (But I have a feeling Pinkie Pie wille definitely be there)

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tenabrus [2015-03-09 05:44:52 +0000 UTC]

Spike may have survived the bullet but in the condition he's in will he survive Pinkie?

edit: Or even worse, Rarity seeing him with his arm around Fluttershy...

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ColonelBSacquet In reply to tenabrus [2015-03-13 19:29:48 +0000 UTC]

His arm around Flutters'? What's the big deal? It's not like Spike and Rares' are dating, at this point, right?

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Phaedrolous In reply to tenabrus [2015-03-09 07:05:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh, he is gonna need a few bags of ice for his head.

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DanvilleBengal In reply to Phaedrolous [2015-03-11 23:38:22 +0000 UTC]

Which head?

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BlueLightning21 [2015-03-09 05:39:35 +0000 UTC]

Standing up so soon after being shot through the brain! I'll give this Spike one thing- he sure is resilient!

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VorinCMH [2015-03-09 04:42:55 +0000 UTC]

I really love this can not wait for more.

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NellzDaBlackKing [2015-03-09 04:34:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh Spike, if you think you're feeling pain now, it's gonna be way worse when you meet Pinkie...

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Ronofarr [2015-03-09 04:26:17 +0000 UTC]

Cafeteria = Pinkie = Stress = pore Spike.

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hillbe [2015-03-09 02:48:55 +0000 UTC]

Rarity has a heal wound , She wont be able to play footsie with Spike......

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ColonelBSacquet In reply to hillbe [2015-03-13 19:30:14 +0000 UTC]

Play footsie? What do you mean?

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hillbe In reply to ColonelBSacquet [2015-03-13 22:06:14 +0000 UTC]

under the table two ponies will touch toes and caress each others hooves (as everypony else sits clueless of the other twos desires )

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RadicalDishonesty [2015-03-09 02:18:20 +0000 UTC]

I'm unsure why Spike is thinking "kill me now."

And... he didn't remember them saying they're going to cut off the briefcase? Concussions are bad for you.

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