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Oh well.
What did I say about drawing faster? Well, fuck it, I'm just glad I'm over with this chapter :'D
I re-drew the first 5(!) pages about 3 times, and i was never satifsfied with the result! Even now I think I could have done better, but meh, I've spent enough time on this.
This took me 11 DNA4 pages, by far the longets update until now, and the most painful to draw ;w; I tried some new styles in the last couple of months, and I'm quite comfortable with it, and it looks a bit more detailed xD Another issue in this is the paneling, how are you supposed to draw FRIKKIN DIALOGUE SCENES NGHHHHH without lots of faces and white space? And it won't be over with scenes like this, whyyyyyy
Aaaanyway, it's good to update again, have some crappy nuzlocke to burn your retina with, daddy issues and fluff-ass dog things included. I know some of you hoped I'd catch Tito, but nope, Norman needs him for his gym business, but this won't be the last time we see any of these people, hinthint~~
Hope you enjoyed (duh) the new strip, the next chapter will be a lot longer, and will probably cover the whole petalburg woods arc up until Rustboro, finally something will happen! Oh, and maybe we get a new catch
So far, have a nice day!
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Comments: 38
PitchBlackEspresso In reply to Silval58 [2014-11-29 22:27:51 +0000 UTC]
don't tell her or she might bite you though
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Silval58 In reply to PitchBlackEspresso [2014-11-30 03:22:25 +0000 UTC]
Hmmmm.... *glomps her anyway*
*Vivi bites my leg*
...still worth it!
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StarVeeWolf [2014-06-01 21:34:36 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh this is a lot of improvement! I really like this nuzlocke, it has reat art, great characters, and great plot :3 I really can't wait to see how far you'll takethis nuzloke!~
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PitchBlackEspresso In reply to StarVeeWolf [2014-06-15 09:42:05 +0000 UTC]
i'm so glad i improved lol thank you very much once more for taking the time to read this thing, i'm glad you enjoyed it and i'll try not to disappoint for the future!
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Jenniej92 [2014-05-22 10:00:19 +0000 UTC]
this is just an adorable page! and the diagloge looks really good!
love the fluffy zigzaggoon!
cant wait for the next page!
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PitchBlackEspresso In reply to Jenniej92 [2014-05-26 20:24:51 +0000 UTC]
thanx! yay for fluffy zigzagoon
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TheWhiteScatterbug [2014-05-08 10:47:06 +0000 UTC]
Aww, seems like I'm through for now
Well, to sum my impressions up: You really do a great job on the character's characters (lol).
You spent really a lot of effort in the different person's character development which makes your comic really adorable and interesting
But because of that the story progress isn't that much, but who cares
Also, your very good at drawing expressions
I can't wait to read more, until then
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PitchBlackEspresso In reply to TheWhiteScatterbug [2014-05-10 21:01:27 +0000 UTC]
lol there's actually the first part of chapter 5 already up, i forgot to put the link in the description, so much for my absent brain :dummy;
but thank you for taking your time and read my stupid comic, i'm glad you like it so far! my philosophy is that in a pokemon related comic the pokemon should have at least half of the screentime, so that's what i try to do and to give them some traits to make them at least somewhat memorable x3 (also they're much easier to draw than humans so that's a plus)
and i know, it's pretty slow, but hey, a journey isn't supposed to be completed in a day, right? right?
... at least we're (almost) at the forest, somewhen this year we might even get a badge (if she makes it that far)
as i said, i'm glad you like it, and i hope not to disappoint in the future!
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TheWhiteScatterbug In reply to PitchBlackEspresso [2014-05-11 11:50:15 +0000 UTC]
Great, gonna read it of course now
You're very welcome, but I should thank you for a great way to spend my free-time, I'm really enjoying itx)
I think you're absolutely right about that, I mean it's a Pokemon comicxD (And yesxD)
Yup, I just thought to bring it up, because I wanted to tell a you a fair criticism.
Yeah, I'm looking forward it Keep it up!
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AquaticBandage [2014-04-08 03:02:00 +0000 UTC]
I'm lovin' this.
I'M LOVIN' THIS.
The way you ended this page. It's perfect.
And dat linoone~
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PitchBlackEspresso In reply to AquaticBandage [2014-04-12 23:48:01 +0000 UTC]
*le gasp* THANK YOU <33
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Iiyume [2014-03-17 17:46:39 +0000 UTC]
Nahw, Norman, just let your kid do what she loves~ ;w;
That's such an angry looking Linoone o__o Sure hope that's not who they'll have to face when they reach Norman's gym
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PitchBlackEspresso In reply to Iiyume [2014-03-22 12:12:22 +0000 UTC]
if things were that easy ;W;
well, i guess she was just worried, thatswhatagoodparentissupposedtodorightnormaaaaan *blank stare*
and we shall see about that (if vera even makes it that far)
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YamaDoragon [2014-03-13 09:29:01 +0000 UTC]
Vivi...that is one furious Linoone. *shivers*
Great update, like always! New characters, discussion, great faces and reactions. You're really good at the latter.
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PitchBlackEspresso In reply to YamaDoragon [2014-03-16 11:33:19 +0000 UTC]
yes, yes indeed.
and thank you, i'm trying to get out of my comfort zone, it's frustrating, but worthwhile
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Jenniej92 [2014-03-12 14:53:18 +0000 UTC]
ooh such a nice update <3
love the fluffy Tito
Great work on the dialoge, it really flows nicely
good job dear!
cant wait for the next one!
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PitchBlackEspresso In reply to Jenniej92 [2014-03-16 11:32:40 +0000 UTC]
thank you!
i love him too ;w; <33
dialogue is stressing, but i'm glad it worked! hope you'll like it
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Jenniej92 In reply to PitchBlackEspresso [2014-03-20 08:42:50 +0000 UTC]
i really worked <3 great job!
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Krisantyne [2014-03-10 13:22:44 +0000 UTC]
Damnnnnn, more family issues. Seeing how much time you spend on that, the whole plot around it will be epic.
That was a pretty unpleasant page for Vera, but on the bright side, her hair looks flipping fantastic in the new style. xD
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PitchBlackEspresso In reply to Krisantyne [2014-03-16 11:31:45 +0000 UTC]
in my headcanon it's pretty epic, and not only the family plot but it's gonna take more fillers to get to the cool parts
yeah, i made her cry twice, but she got fabulous hair, so at least that's something...?
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Krisantyne In reply to PitchBlackEspresso [2014-03-16 22:14:01 +0000 UTC]
Yes that sounds great, if the author calls it 'pretty epic', it's actually SUPER EPIC.
Oh yes, the pain of getting to the cool parts... But when you look back, you see that the 'filler' is cool, too, because you put your heart into it. uwu
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Lion-Oh-Day [2014-03-09 19:50:52 +0000 UTC]
Daddy issues the gen.
For talky scenes you could try shifting the camera angle, like instead of showing their faces you show their hands, their feet or something like that.
Try it out see if you like that ^.^
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PitchBlackEspresso In reply to Lion-Oh-Day [2014-03-16 11:30:22 +0000 UTC]
confirmed!
that's what i tried to to, but another idea would be to simply shorten them i put too many informations at once, next update wil have a bit more action (and pokemon ahdfbksjdn)
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Lion-Oh-Day In reply to PitchBlackEspresso [2014-03-16 17:46:15 +0000 UTC]
Well shortening could happen. But then you run the risk of not having any pauses and constantly rushing into things.
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KitsyArts [2014-03-09 19:17:25 +0000 UTC]
WOOP UPDATES I LOVE THEM LOL THIS PAGE GAVE ME FEELSSSSSSSSSS
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PitchBlackEspresso In reply to KitsyArts [2014-03-16 11:29:33 +0000 UTC]
feels here
feels there
feels eeeeeeverywhere
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KitsyArts In reply to PitchBlackEspresso [2014-03-16 16:40:56 +0000 UTC]
feeeeeeels and dudes in mini skirts~
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emmerlaus [2014-03-09 16:59:57 +0000 UTC]
GREAT! A UPDATE !!!!
Thanks for that !! Yin is very wise, for a little caterpillar Pokemon
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PitchBlackEspresso In reply to emmerlaus [2014-03-16 11:28:58 +0000 UTC]
i'm glad to finally get to update too :'D
and yes, yin is my little wiseman, not long until i'm finally going to do something with him <3
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Chibi-Therruna [2014-03-09 16:57:19 +0000 UTC]
Whoa Pitch...so awesome ;O;
Teh Awesomenes and cutenes.... //dies//
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Chibi-Therruna In reply to PitchBlackEspresso [2014-03-16 11:36:22 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome Pitch <3
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