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Published: 2007-02-01 02:26:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 187; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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my first art on this site, wow....Related content
Comments: 12
TeaTimePessimist [2007-02-06 01:55:22 +0000 UTC]
I really like this, the shading is very nice! The only thing I see is that the neck looks a bit too big compared to the rest of her body. But still very nice!
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McCallicatStudios [2007-02-02 20:29:40 +0000 UTC]
I love the shading. I don't think there's anything I can say that hasn't been said, soo...
I really like the style! I love her lips for some reason. And nose. Generally, her profile.
Very pretty! And welcome to DA!
~MC~
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Oriwhitedeer [2007-02-02 20:16:24 +0000 UTC]
ahh purportions, my mortal enemy. Really the only thing you need to work on is the head, other than that the body looks great
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GuardienOfThePyre [2007-02-02 18:23:00 +0000 UTC]
Nice shading, love the ray of light...
The mermaid's proportions out though. Her head's too big for starters, even for a styalised depiction. Or maybe the body's too small, it wants to take up much more of the page I'll pass the chest and waist not being in line as it is her posture, but it looks uncomfortable with the side-on face, 45 degree shoulder/chest and near-front waist. The way you shaded, I'm not sure if the tail is going sideways or backways. It could almost be frontway as well, by the way the end is pointing but the fin looks like it's the underside. On the same token, it can't be going backwards because then it'll be shadowy like the left arm.
Love the detail on the face though, great proportions there. The eyes are just beautiful
Hope I'm making sense, and please hit me back if you need any clarifications
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pixie-929 In reply to GuardienOfThePyre [2007-02-02 18:44:43 +0000 UTC]
thankyou so much....this is the first time someone has actually given me helpful advice....u r smart!
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GuardienOfThePyre In reply to pixie-929 [2007-02-02 18:47:03 +0000 UTC]
ahh no... not smart... I don't think...
lol
glad it was helpful tho
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