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plotqueen — Haiku No. 3
Published: 2010-07-01 14:50:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 273; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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The smell of your skinColours the air I'm breathing
Until my head spins
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That's really awesome. I love the idea of a smell coloring the air. 
...and I still can't critique it. Haikus are critique-proof, I swear!
-Cori
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well, they're so short, and the format makes them odd to begin with.
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True, they're just too short.
-Cori
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