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Plugin848y — Hulk, Spidey and Wolverine Battle Artist
Published: 2011-11-28 16:50:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1173; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 0
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This is my Battle Artist colouring competition entry [link]Original pencils by Joe Madureira
Inks by here [link]
Colours me!
Let me know what you think, I'm pretty proud of this, I think is by far my best entry so far
Debs
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This is nice u should be proud of your piece. I see where u have shadows and tones my only suggestion would be to try and push the features of the muscles a little more make them a little more prominent by this I mean if u were to see these guys nude your would see bone and muscle structure. And since spandex rules the super hero world it's basically nude Heros under colorful underwear and a little more shadows to push those muscles and so forth would really make this picture pop. As far as backgrounds and stuff I have nothing to say about those cause I can never find a satisfying medium for me nothing ever really seems correct. But very nice job reminds me if some old school stuff from when I was younger
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Thanks so much for the feedback 
I'm proud of my colour choices, now I just need to get on the rest of it to really up my game
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Im glad I made you laugh 
Im with ya on upping my game I have a long road ahead of me as well cause no matter what I dish out Im always getting pounded in Battle Artists.
Hope you post the defined one when your done would like to see it.
Keep up the good work cause it noticable and I will see ya around on BA for sure.
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Thanks very much
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This looks ok really, however, (I don't want to come across unsympathetic and bitchy -it's not my intention at all-) these are flat colours. I mean there's not variation of tones. If you put a black and white filter you'll see what I mean. There's not volume, no lights and shadows. That's why it's flat.
I know you're happy about this, and negative comments are never welcome, but I like it when people pay attention to what I do and try to say something constructive about it, and that's what I'm attempting to do here. I also entered the "battle" and I left comments and many pieces that I liked because all artists deserve the attention and the recognition for what they've done.
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Lol I wondered who you were for a second and then see we're facing off 
First off, thanks for the feedback, I like to learn
However, I think to say that it's "flat" is unfair, to put the WIP and this side by side you can see that that isn't the case at all, there are shadows and highlights for each colour, sometimes several layers of them. Shadow and light are things that I find difficult, but there's clear shadowing and highlighting in there.
I tend to not make the highlights and that all that bold at the moment, I'm a lot more muted in my colour choices and while that's something I'm working on continually I feel I struck the right balance with this one for my skills at the moment
Debs
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When I wrote the comment I didn't know we were going to be opponents!
Having fun and being happy with my work are the MOST important things when I paint. So I understand that you're satisfied with your work and it makes you proud. When I started I felt the same about my works, but now that I have more experience I don't even want to look at them
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I hear you
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Cheers, I don't think I will, but it's fun to try anyhow
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Thanks very much!
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you're welcome!!!^^
i do believe you!!! you can be proud of yourself!!^^
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