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Art, Paul, Ni (C) ~PMiller1Touhou (C) ZUN
And Will Make an Walfas-Like.
Ni: Nothing like an Good old tea after an incident,
If you ask Me it look like was trying to hard.
Alice: Well, It was something have in deep inside of me.
It seem like I need to get all out.
Paul: Yeah, You really need it, and it kindder fun being on the Black Side of the Morality, Not moust to go there, but still fun.
Alice: So now what, what become off to My doll.
Paul: Yeah, You not going to...
I mean Alice really did what're an independently doll.
Ni: No, Reimu side that she understand, she going to use some of them for Market used.
Alice: I see...
Ni: Well, anything make a Good donations for her.
Ni: Infact May you boyfriend get you one for a give.
Alice: W-- What? He not My boyfriend, Paul tell her that.
Paul: Er... Yeah, I'm not...
Ni: I'm just kidding.
Alice: Well... This wasn't funny.
[Good Ending]
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Comments: 32
kidowa [2010-10-17 01:14:06 +0000 UTC]
I have to say that was a very Touhou-like ending. also, the series was great; it was humorous and interesting; and, how you did the spells were appealing.
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kidowa In reply to PMiller1 [2010-10-18 08:43:24 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. Well. In my opinion, Paul's evil need some more work. The plan that Paul and Alice came up with was brilliant; but, they made two mistakes.
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PMiller1 In reply to kidowa [2010-10-18 08:52:03 +0000 UTC]
Well Paul is more of an Unaligned, He isn't Evil, Just Going along with Alice Plan.
And What Two Mistakes is that?
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kidowa In reply to PMiller1 [2010-10-18 11:07:28 +0000 UTC]
Oh! I understand his position in the plan, now.
The Mistakes:
ONE: allowing Ni to leave to the Hakurei Shrine.
TWO: not having a Sub-Plan (a plan used as a distration from the real plan)
Well, Mistake TWO applies more to the EVIL mindset; so, it doesn't matter to Paul that much.
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PMiller1 In reply to kidowa [2010-10-18 11:22:36 +0000 UTC]
One: Yeah, Thay really need make Lock Barrier for Ni too.
Fridge Logic: Wait, If Ni is Reimu Sister, The How did she get past the [Hakurei Lock Barrier] if she would have the Hakurei Bloodlind?
Hand Wave: It a Force Field to block Reimu, Not a Force Field that block the Hakurei Bloodlind.
Two: Well Yeah, Paul did take Reimu, But that was another Plan, Not The Real Plan from the That Plan.
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kidowa In reply to PMiller1 [2010-10-19 09:55:36 +0000 UTC]
I see.
Well, you can disregard Mistake Two. I reread the beginning to see what Alice's plan truely was; And, I realized that she was using a Sub-plan the entire time. Alice's sub-plan was the incident; since her true plan was "to see who is the best and power in Gensokyo", Her plan actually succeeded.
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PMiller1 In reply to kidowa [2010-10-19 10:12:52 +0000 UTC]
That and get back from her for what Reimu did in Mystic Square.
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sethb1 [2010-10-16 12:59:23 +0000 UTC]
YAY good end!..that means she beat the game on normal with out using a continue XD Great drawings you got there...it really fits the dialog
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PMiller1 In reply to john-the-kitsune [2010-10-16 12:04:03 +0000 UTC]
I don't know really.
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john-the-kitsune In reply to PMiller1 [2010-10-16 12:06:42 +0000 UTC]
Reimu and Ni get turned into dolls xD
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ChaosOverlordZ [2010-10-16 07:09:50 +0000 UTC]
Zero:ah what a happy sceen. Well time to kill them all
*picks up chaosblade while whistling bohemion rapsody*
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PMiller1 In reply to ChaosOverlordZ [2010-10-16 07:14:45 +0000 UTC]
*Somekind of Force Field Stop you the way, (And you don't even Know it)*
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ChaosOverlordZ In reply to PMiller1 [2010-10-16 07:16:30 +0000 UTC]
*slashes through force field by accedent with the sword while singing*
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PMiller1 In reply to ChaosOverlordZ [2010-10-16 07:21:38 +0000 UTC]
*Another Force Field Stop him the way again.*
*And Then One told TZ to stop playing with His World*
(( ^ Will You Stop Trying to Mess MY STORY up ~ChaosOverlordZ ))
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ChaosOverlordZ In reply to PMiller1 [2010-10-16 07:26:33 +0000 UTC]
the story is tecicaly over so im not realy messing with it.... Unless theres an ex stage, I have no intention of messing with it and if you will look I havent done any side bits to it so I have been respecitng that wish.
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PMiller1 In reply to ChaosOverlordZ [2010-10-16 07:31:05 +0000 UTC]
I don't like it whene you Made Zero trying to Killing Me (or Ruining the Moment) in the Comments.
And Yes, Thay Will be a EX-Stage, Once *sethb1 is done with his Sidestory.
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ChaosOverlordZ In reply to PMiller1 [2010-10-16 07:34:06 +0000 UTC]
its just Zero being Zero. its not tecicaly part of the story.
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ChaosOverlordZ In reply to PMiller1 [2010-10-16 07:36:15 +0000 UTC]
besideds there has been rather little Zero vs paul latly.
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PMiller1 In reply to ChaosOverlordZ [2010-10-16 07:41:33 +0000 UTC]
You are Right about that.
How a Silliness Game where you take it Seriousness (But Paul Don't)?
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ChaosOverlordZ In reply to PMiller1 [2010-10-16 07:45:03 +0000 UTC]
how about D&D stly story featuring them Zero whould be the class "awsome Chaos knight" and paul " whimpy mage"
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PMiller1 In reply to ChaosOverlordZ [2010-10-16 08:00:15 +0000 UTC]
How about PokΓ©mon?
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ChaosOverlordZ In reply to PMiller1 [2010-10-16 08:06:09 +0000 UTC]
well I will leave that up to you as your the big role playing fan, or atleast you make yourself out to be one.
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PMiller1 In reply to ChaosOverlordZ [2010-10-16 08:13:00 +0000 UTC]
Well I haven't get Black and White, So No Isshu PokΓ©mon, And No Legendary PokΓ©mon.
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PMiller1 In reply to ChaosOverlordZ [2010-10-16 07:56:09 +0000 UTC]
And Again, Paul is the Power as Zero.
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PMiller1 In reply to ChaosOverlordZ [2010-10-16 07:53:10 +0000 UTC]
Zero, Chaosic Evil, Great Warpon Fighter
Paul, Lawful Good, War Wizard
Thene Who get to be the Game Master?
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