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EDIT:Hair fixed.
((Supposedly lol))
Anyway, I should be working right now. Commissions and stuff. Buuuuuuuuut, well, I was distracted. YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE.
Anyway, the actual story really wasn't that great, but I was actually just chilling on /tr/ when it was posted for the first time. Which I thought was pretty durn cool. Plus it was pretty visual; and I've wanted to draw Crys for awhile. Haha, now I just need a hack that stars Silver, eh?
...huh. Actually, that would be pretty cool. If you find one, please note me!!
((Also, this is the first art I've done on my new laptop!!!))
I was smart enough to copy and paste the story into word when it was posted. :3
With HeartGold and SoulSilver's release earlier this year, I tried looking for a copy of one of the original games, Crystal, to buy online. I hadn't played this game in at least 7 years. It strangely went missing when I moved house as a kid. I saw the cart eBay. There wasn't much information, or even a picture, but it had no postage and packaging price and only cost a dollar, so I was hardly losing anything if it didn't really exist.
When the game arrived, it wasn't in its original box, but instead, the cartridge alone was just wrapped up. It looked like a Crystal cartridge as it was shiny, slightly see-through and blue, but it lacked the sticker in which the game title is print on. However, I still put it in my pink Game Boy Advance SP. Pink as I am a girl, of course.
I switched the handheld on. There was a loud beeping sound, then the game began as normally. Once the menu screen was open, the only option was New Game, as it had never been played. The cartridge sure ddn't seem in that condition though.
So, I clicked new game. Instead of starting out with the Professor's speech, it skipped straight to somewhere that didn't exist in these games. Or at least, it looked like the place.
It was the Pokemon Mansion from the original games. The Pokemon Mansion on Cinnabar Island. The same Cinnabar Island that no longer existed.
I was the girl character, as I wanted to be, but I had no choice in this. On close inspection, her hair seemed a different color from what I originally remembered. It was a dark purple, and she also didn't have her hat any longer.
I walked around the building. It wouldn't let me up the stairs. The only other thing was a bed. I walked towards it and a scientist came along. He told me to rest, so I laid on the bed. The screen suddenly went pitch black. It stayed this way for a while. Before this transition, there was pure silence, but after, there was loud high pitched noises, which almost sounded like screams. It was hard to tell though, as the sound was in 8bit.
When my character woke up, the plase was covered in patches of red; blood. The character herself was drenched in it too. I tried to walk around, but I couldn't. The scientist seemed to have disappeared, also.
I pressed all of the buttons to try and get something to work, and on pressing select, my character walked out of bed. Only, she was still in the bed at the same time. And unlike before, instead of walking, she appeared to float.
I pressed start, and my character turned into a ghost pokemon's menusprite. This shocked me slightly. I walked out of the door, when I suddenly teleported into Lavender Town. There, in the middle of town, was a gravestone. I clicked the "A" button to check it. It said "R.I.P. CRYSTAL". I opened up my menu, and looked at my trainer card. The sprite of the trainer had turned into that of a Misdreavus', and as I though, the player's name was "CRYSTAL".
The scientist came up to the tombstone, and it suddenly disappeared. He seemed to run at twice the speed of a normal game character.
My character, without my control, floated after him. As soon as she entered a patch of grass, a random encounter appeared. Only, this encounter was hardly "random". The Pokemon was Mewtwo. Instead of attacking, a few lines were written.
"You let them get you, didn't you, CRYSTAL?"
There was a yes and no option, I just clicked no, as I was unsure of what was going on.
"Don't lie to me! I can see what they did! Look at yourself." After this, the game paused for a few seconds, then the "battle" continued. "You're just an object of science, like me. I'm not real, and neither are you. You were just made out of a tiny bit of DNA from something else, and when you weren't perfect, they killed you. Would you like to seek revenge?"
I clicked no again, and I was sent back to the field, with Mewtwo still following my character.
I walked until the scientist appeared again, and suddenly, my bag screen came up with the only item there being "Knife". I clicked it, and pressed use. Suddenly, the screaming noise appeared again, and the screen went black.
Suddenly, the screaming got louder and more frequent. When it stopped, I was in the radio tower. A text box appeared.
"Why did they destroy our home? We were meant to be here... Everyone who destroyed are home is gone. Everyone in the world is gone. We killed them all. We got revenge like you. Now all the world is gone."
Suddenly, the screen went white, with my character still there. "Everything is gone. You also killed us. You're the only one left. Why did we kill people? Why did you help? Now, you must get what you deserve!"
The character was replaced with a patch of blood, and then the game froze. I have never picked up this cartridge again. It gave me nightmares.
~End
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Comments: 420
dasher50 In reply to ??? [2013-08-14 21:14:11 +0000 UTC]
Crystal:HEY IS THAT CAMERA POINTED AT MEH!!!!!?????
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Gamergirl224 In reply to ??? [2013-08-06 02:28:01 +0000 UTC]
OMG!
This must be why she didn't appear in Pokemon Heartgold/Soulsilver! D:>
Those bastard scientist! D:<
Poor Crystal. T^T
Love the drawing it really shows how her spirit escaped her body. ^w^
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lol2365 In reply to ??? [2013-07-31 21:21:53 +0000 UTC]
Hah LOOKS LIKE WE NEED DUN DUN DUUUUUUNNNNN
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Arthur55623 In reply to ??? [2013-07-25 22:12:01 +0000 UTC]
Okay then how the hell did it connect to the fucken pic?
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Polyhexian In reply to Arthur55623 [2013-08-01 17:28:28 +0000 UTC]
the story is literally in the description do you know how to read
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Arthur55623 In reply to Polyhexian [2013-08-01 19:37:08 +0000 UTC]
Yeah i read it but i still don't get it, is it like her ghost?
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Anime-Greek [2013-07-24 12:08:02 +0000 UTC]
Felt like it went straight to the point :/ but I still love it!! ^o^ Just when I thought I was done with the Pokemon Creepypastas ._. so many...
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BENdrowned908 [2013-07-19 21:28:18 +0000 UTC]
When I saw it I was like okay a creepypasta then I was like I just wanted to punch my laptop. DX
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Creator-Kami [2013-02-10 00:35:29 +0000 UTC]
Silver related pastaaaa~? Try Tarnished Gold ;D
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dasher50 In reply to Creator-Kami [2013-08-14 21:12:50 +0000 UTC]
Shit.Lost Silver is about Gold.And Tarnished Gold is about Silver.Wow.
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Creator-Kami In reply to dasher50 [2013-08-14 23:25:48 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I noticed that a while back. xoD
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Polyhexian In reply to Creator-Kami [2013-02-10 08:35:46 +0000 UTC]
I assure you, you would never have had the opportunity to have read that pasta had it not been for my contributions to its popularity.
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Creator-Kami In reply to Polyhexian [2013-02-10 14:31:18 +0000 UTC]
Oh really? That's awesome. D:
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lol2365 In reply to Creator-Kami [2013-07-31 21:22:34 +0000 UTC]
what about the hacked white. a hacked pokemon white ds creepypasta
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lol2365 In reply to Creator-Kami [2013-10-16 18:04:50 +0000 UTC]
da opposite of cursed black
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BridaleeBee [2013-01-08 02:19:03 +0000 UTC]
This is so cool! I love Pokepastas!
~Green*Star
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honeyfern2345 In reply to BridaleeBee [2013-03-09 04:34:07 +0000 UTC]
whenn i saw the signature
~Green*Star
i thought souleater,
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creepyfanfcition In reply to honeyfern2345 [2013-04-25 21:02:25 +0000 UTC]
RIGHT Black* is so funny but cool
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honeyfern2345 In reply to creepyfanfcition [2013-04-25 21:49:16 +0000 UTC]
XD
black*star : I AM GOD FEAR ME!
evreyone : 8shrug and walk away*
black*star : *sweat drop* I WAS JUST KIDDING DONT LEAVE ME!
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creepyfanfcition In reply to honeyfern2345 [2013-04-26 18:11:59 +0000 UTC]
HAHAHA right!
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lol2365 In reply to honeyfern2345 [2013-07-31 21:25:17 +0000 UTC]
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honeyfern2345 In reply to No1fan15 [2013-04-02 07:44:18 +0000 UTC]
guess what, on feralheart i rp with friends SOULEATER, OH YEAH! XD
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PlatinaStar In reply to ??? [2012-12-03 14:47:18 +0000 UTC]
Cute story!
(Not kidding, not being sarcastic either. I'm serious. It's sweet.)
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Morlord In reply to ??? [2012-09-29 19:45:12 +0000 UTC]
Ooookay ? itΒ΄s creepy but cool !
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SirStarshine In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 01:05:51 +0000 UTC]
I grew up with creepy, so I gotta be honest. This wasn't it.
It was too short, there was no suspense, and the most "chilling" part was the black screen, followed by Crystal suddenly turning into a ghost. It needs some kind of emotional substance.
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Polyhexian In reply to SirStarshine [2012-09-08 04:34:31 +0000 UTC]
Agreed. I don't like this one either; however, at the time I made this, there was perhaps a grand total of ten pokemon related creepypasta in existence. I was merely enjoying the subject material before there was an adequate pool of interest.
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Talesfangirl [2012-08-17 21:37:53 +0000 UTC]
So your the one that made this? Nice job on it! though its TOO creepy for me to favorite
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DemonBlud [2012-08-02 01:16:47 +0000 UTC]
i cannot be scared, but that was decently creepy
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NightmaresForAlice In reply to ??? [2012-07-08 01:38:02 +0000 UTC]
Great story! *thumbs up*
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invertqueen7 In reply to ??? [2012-06-27 04:39:42 +0000 UTC]
wow...so the CRYSTAL creepypasta was ab out how they made a copy of the original CRYSTAL but it came out wrong?
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YellowCaballero999 In reply to ??? [2012-06-23 14:46:49 +0000 UTC]
Wow creepy story i like this it adds the essence of creepyness i'm speechless on how good it is
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Miki-Alazne In reply to ??? [2012-06-11 05:13:19 +0000 UTC]
So Crystal was a clone like Mewtwo and killed everyone because they killed her right? If so then this is awesome, but also sad~
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Inkin-Oddity In reply to ??? [2012-06-03 19:51:45 +0000 UTC]
Ilove the story!
Ps: This is one of the most famous pokepasta drawings out there!
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LittleMiki2 In reply to ??? [2012-05-12 23:51:03 +0000 UTC]
never touching another pokemon game. EVAR.
....
EVAR.
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