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EDIT:Hair fixed.
((Supposedly lol))
Anyway, I should be working right now. Commissions and stuff. Buuuuuuuuut, well, I was distracted. YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE.
Anyway, the actual story really wasn't that great, but I was actually just chilling on /tr/ when it was posted for the first time. Which I thought was pretty durn cool. Plus it was pretty visual; and I've wanted to draw Crys for awhile. Haha, now I just need a hack that stars Silver, eh?
...huh. Actually, that would be pretty cool. If you find one, please note me!!
((Also, this is the first art I've done on my new laptop!!!))
I was smart enough to copy and paste the story into word when it was posted. :3
With HeartGold and SoulSilver's release earlier this year, I tried looking for a copy of one of the original games, Crystal, to buy online. I hadn't played this game in at least 7 years. It strangely went missing when I moved house as a kid. I saw the cart eBay. There wasn't much information, or even a picture, but it had no postage and packaging price and only cost a dollar, so I was hardly losing anything if it didn't really exist.
When the game arrived, it wasn't in its original box, but instead, the cartridge alone was just wrapped up. It looked like a Crystal cartridge as it was shiny, slightly see-through and blue, but it lacked the sticker in which the game title is print on. However, I still put it in my pink Game Boy Advance SP. Pink as I am a girl, of course.
I switched the handheld on. There was a loud beeping sound, then the game began as normally. Once the menu screen was open, the only option was New Game, as it had never been played. The cartridge sure ddn't seem in that condition though.
So, I clicked new game. Instead of starting out with the Professor's speech, it skipped straight to somewhere that didn't exist in these games. Or at least, it looked like the place.
It was the Pokemon Mansion from the original games. The Pokemon Mansion on Cinnabar Island. The same Cinnabar Island that no longer existed.
I was the girl character, as I wanted to be, but I had no choice in this. On close inspection, her hair seemed a different color from what I originally remembered. It was a dark purple, and she also didn't have her hat any longer.
I walked around the building. It wouldn't let me up the stairs. The only other thing was a bed. I walked towards it and a scientist came along. He told me to rest, so I laid on the bed. The screen suddenly went pitch black. It stayed this way for a while. Before this transition, there was pure silence, but after, there was loud high pitched noises, which almost sounded like screams. It was hard to tell though, as the sound was in 8bit.
When my character woke up, the plase was covered in patches of red; blood. The character herself was drenched in it too. I tried to walk around, but I couldn't. The scientist seemed to have disappeared, also.
I pressed all of the buttons to try and get something to work, and on pressing select, my character walked out of bed. Only, she was still in the bed at the same time. And unlike before, instead of walking, she appeared to float.
I pressed start, and my character turned into a ghost pokemon's menusprite. This shocked me slightly. I walked out of the door, when I suddenly teleported into Lavender Town. There, in the middle of town, was a gravestone. I clicked the "A" button to check it. It said "R.I.P. CRYSTAL". I opened up my menu, and looked at my trainer card. The sprite of the trainer had turned into that of a Misdreavus', and as I though, the player's name was "CRYSTAL".
The scientist came up to the tombstone, and it suddenly disappeared. He seemed to run at twice the speed of a normal game character.
My character, without my control, floated after him. As soon as she entered a patch of grass, a random encounter appeared. Only, this encounter was hardly "random". The Pokemon was Mewtwo. Instead of attacking, a few lines were written.
"You let them get you, didn't you, CRYSTAL?"
There was a yes and no option, I just clicked no, as I was unsure of what was going on.
"Don't lie to me! I can see what they did! Look at yourself." After this, the game paused for a few seconds, then the "battle" continued. "You're just an object of science, like me. I'm not real, and neither are you. You were just made out of a tiny bit of DNA from something else, and when you weren't perfect, they killed you. Would you like to seek revenge?"
I clicked no again, and I was sent back to the field, with Mewtwo still following my character.
I walked until the scientist appeared again, and suddenly, my bag screen came up with the only item there being "Knife". I clicked it, and pressed use. Suddenly, the screaming noise appeared again, and the screen went black.
Suddenly, the screaming got louder and more frequent. When it stopped, I was in the radio tower. A text box appeared.
"Why did they destroy our home? We were meant to be here... Everyone who destroyed are home is gone. Everyone in the world is gone. We killed them all. We got revenge like you. Now all the world is gone."
Suddenly, the screen went white, with my character still there. "Everything is gone. You also killed us. You're the only one left. Why did we kill people? Why did you help? Now, you must get what you deserve!"
The character was replaced with a patch of blood, and then the game froze. I have never picked up this cartridge again. It gave me nightmares.
~End
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Comments: 420
Polyhexian In reply to Tibby-san [2018-01-02 22:26:35 +0000 UTC]
It looks great! It's not my story, though.
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Dreammer-Bey [2016-08-11 15:09:11 +0000 UTC]
AHHH AMAZING POKEPASTA , scary but pretty good creepypasta and character
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Diamond-Ruby-Crystal [2015-06-24 17:02:26 +0000 UTC]
Can somebody explain it to me?I didn't understand the pasta.
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CasedyArtisticTeddy In reply to Diamond-Ruby-Crystal [2015-08-22 18:45:29 +0000 UTC]
I think I can
Crystal was nothing more than a lab rat for the scientists AND Mewtwo.And she was attending a program at Cinnabar Island(at least what I think)((I guess they were testing a new pokemon antidote or trying to turn human into pokemon(lolwut) (or even worse: putting human organs in whatever antidote that they're working on.Sounds ridiculous sure, but its the least we got))) And she died eventually. She came back as a ghost (I cant explain why her ghost is a pokemon tho) Trying to find the scientists who killed her. She later arrived at lavender town where her tombstone was planted. And then Mewtwo appeared. It asked Crystal to seek revenge, though that wasn't the reason why she wanted to find them.(from the players perspective) Mewtwo later manipulated crystal(psychically) into killing the scientist AND the entire the other humans(somehow lol) ((I guess Mewtwo wanted revenge on the humans but it knows if it does anything, it would be captured.So it manipulated Crys pour soul to do such a thing)) When she did it, she was teleported to the radio tower. Mewtwo confronted her for 'what she has done' and wiped her soul out from existence.I guess Mewtwo wanted ALL humans to suffer.
All Humans To Suffer
And I couldn't explain crystal's purple hair. Guess she just had a hairdo lol.
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Diamond-Ruby-Crystal In reply to CasedyArtisticTeddy [2015-08-22 19:55:06 +0000 UTC]
Now I get it.Thank you very much!^^
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CasedyArtisticTeddy In reply to Diamond-Ruby-Crystal [2015-08-22 19:57:59 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure^^
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invertqueen7 [2014-10-18 00:53:27 +0000 UTC]
I hate it that this isn't more popular...sure, it's a Poke-pasta, but it's kinda god and should be more well-known.
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ZuesKillerProduction [2014-01-24 23:31:09 +0000 UTC]
3/10
Apparently either Tom became a trans-sexual, or Twitchy was reincarnated as a girl.
Good thing you evacuated it, so we can laugh at it!
XD
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Polyhexian In reply to ZuesKillerProduction [2014-01-24 23:36:17 +0000 UTC]
Why is there a - in between trans and sexual? As well, transexual is not the the proper term, it's transgender. To avoid confusion with terms like homo and heterosexuality, because transgenderism is not a sexuality. ...who is tom?
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ZuesKillerProduction In reply to Polyhexian [2014-01-25 00:36:31 +0000 UTC]
Actually, "Tom" is a recurring gag in Yuriofwind's "Bullshit Creepypasta
Story time" reffering to authors using clichés to try and scare people.
(Ignore text here) time" reffering to authors who use clichés
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Polyhexian In reply to ZuesKillerProduction [2014-01-25 03:51:08 +0000 UTC]
that sentence was loosely constructed and confusing
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ZuesKillerProduction In reply to Polyhexian [2014-01-25 20:37:48 +0000 UTC]
Blame tablet keyboards.
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Polyhexian In reply to sappyforest [2014-01-12 21:31:00 +0000 UTC]
not really
it's just a pretty bad story
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zawhweh In reply to Polyhexian [2014-04-01 02:29:42 +0000 UTC]
you could have done a lot better, maybe I can rewrite the story
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Polyhexian In reply to zawhweh [2014-04-01 11:41:02 +0000 UTC]
I didn't WRITE it. I found it on the internet. And even if I had, don't you think saying you could rewrite someone's story better is REALLY fucking rude?
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sappyforest In reply to Polyhexian [2014-01-12 21:33:11 +0000 UTC]
He story, yeah, but the style is half decent.
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Cookieking2000 [2014-01-05 18:02:14 +0000 UTC]
poor crystal if only i was there but at last I dead because of green the meanie
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Cookieking2000 In reply to Cookieking2000 [2014-01-05 18:02:45 +0000 UTC]
oh well at least now hes with me
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darkusadalisk [2013-12-06 16:39:16 +0000 UTC]
OH MY GOSH SO TERRIFYING IT LOOK THAT REALLY HAPPENED you wined a fan
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FangOfDrknss [2013-10-29 01:53:46 +0000 UTC]
So, anyone know any actual good Creepypasta stories with Crystal in it? So far, I've only found one, and that was about Lyra killing Crystal.
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zawhweh In reply to FangOfDrknss [2014-08-22 03:31:14 +0000 UTC]
really what was the name it orcan you put a link to it.
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FangOfDrknss In reply to zawhweh [2014-08-27 20:31:08 +0000 UTC]
krystalberri.deviantart.com/ar… It focuses more on "you" the player, than anything else though. Only closest thing I found to this, was this fluff story where the game forgets Crystal ever existed, and Lyra not only replaces her, but is the only one that can see her.
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Polyhexian In reply to FangOfDrknss [2013-10-31 03:02:05 +0000 UTC]
no
ask yourself a question: is it pokemon?
if the answer is yes then you can conclude it is a bad story
pokemon creepypasta has been ruined. there is not a single good idea left out there to be written.
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Sandvich33 In reply to Polyhexian [2014-11-04 00:34:49 +0000 UTC]
Debatable. The field's still wide open for various opportunities to come out ablaze. You just got to keep looking.
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LuvArt2345 [2013-10-11 21:52:14 +0000 UTC]
Drawing was cool... Creepypasta? Could have been better. But hey, you're still a better artist than me :3
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werewolfrune [2013-09-12 13:14:18 +0000 UTC]
Uhh...it wasn't really that scary...
I would have loved to see something a little different from a lot of other creepypastas,
But, that's okay! It still is an okay creepypasta.
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Polyhexian In reply to werewolfrune [2013-09-12 22:12:50 +0000 UTC]
it was bloody terrible
this is years old
this was before pokemon creepypasta was even a thing
there was like this and lost silver and that one with the lighthouse and that's it
why
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