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Description EDIT:
Hair fixed.

((Supposedly lol))
Anyway, I should be working right now. Commissions and stuff. Buuuuuuuuut, well, I was distracted. YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE.
Anyway, the actual story really wasn't that great, but I was actually just chilling on /tr/ when it was posted for the first time. Which I thought was pretty durn cool. Plus it was pretty visual; and I've wanted to draw Crys for awhile. Haha, now I just need a hack that stars Silver, eh?
...huh. Actually, that would be pretty cool. If you find one, please note me!!
((Also, this is the first art I've done on my new laptop!!!))

I was smart enough to copy and paste the story into word when it was posted. :3

With HeartGold and SoulSilver's release earlier this year, I tried looking for a copy of one of the original games, Crystal, to buy online. I hadn't played this game in at least 7 years. It strangely went missing when I moved house as a kid. I saw the cart eBay. There wasn't much information, or even a picture, but it had no postage and packaging price and only cost a dollar, so I was hardly losing anything if it didn't really exist.
When the game arrived, it wasn't in its original box, but instead, the cartridge alone was just wrapped up. It looked like a Crystal cartridge as it was shiny, slightly see-through and blue, but it lacked the sticker in which the game title is print on. However, I still put it in my pink Game Boy Advance SP. Pink as I am a girl, of course.
I switched the handheld on. There was a loud beeping sound, then the game began as normally. Once the menu screen was open, the only option was New Game, as it had never been played. The cartridge sure ddn't seem in that condition though.
So, I clicked new game. Instead of starting out with the Professor's speech, it skipped straight to somewhere that didn't exist in these games. Or at least, it looked like the place.
It was the Pokemon Mansion from the original games. The Pokemon Mansion on Cinnabar Island. The same Cinnabar Island that no longer existed.
I was the girl character, as I wanted to be, but I had no choice in this. On close inspection, her hair seemed a different color from what I originally remembered. It was a dark purple, and she also didn't have her hat any longer.
I walked around the building. It wouldn't let me up the stairs. The only other thing was a bed. I walked towards it and a scientist came along. He told me to rest, so I laid on the bed. The screen suddenly went pitch black. It stayed this way for a while. Before this transition, there was pure silence, but after, there was loud high pitched noises, which almost sounded like screams. It was hard to tell though, as the sound was in 8bit.
When my character woke up, the plase was covered in patches of red; blood. The character herself was drenched in it too. I tried to walk around, but I couldn't. The scientist seemed to have disappeared, also.
I pressed all of the buttons to try and get something to work, and on pressing select, my character walked out of bed. Only, she was still in the bed at the same time. And unlike before, instead of walking, she appeared to float.
I pressed start, and my character turned into a ghost pokemon's menusprite. This shocked me slightly. I walked out of the door, when I suddenly teleported into Lavender Town. There, in the middle of town, was a gravestone. I clicked the "A" button to check it. It said "R.I.P. CRYSTAL". I opened up my menu, and looked at my trainer card. The sprite of the trainer had turned into that of a Misdreavus', and as I though, the player's name was "CRYSTAL".
The scientist came up to the tombstone, and it suddenly disappeared. He seemed to run at twice the speed of a normal game character.
My character, without my control, floated after him. As soon as she entered a patch of grass, a random encounter appeared. Only, this encounter was hardly "random". The Pokemon was Mewtwo. Instead of attacking, a few lines were written.
"You let them get you, didn't you, CRYSTAL?"
There was a yes and no option, I just clicked no, as I was unsure of what was going on.
"Don't lie to me! I can see what they did! Look at yourself." After this, the game paused for a few seconds, then the "battle" continued. "You're just an object of science, like me. I'm not real, and neither are you. You were just made out of a tiny bit of DNA from something else, and when you weren't perfect, they killed you. Would you like to seek revenge?"
I clicked no again, and I was sent back to the field, with Mewtwo still following my character.
I walked until the scientist appeared again, and suddenly, my bag screen came up with the only item there being "Knife". I clicked it, and pressed use. Suddenly, the screaming noise appeared again, and the screen went black.
Suddenly, the screaming got louder and more frequent. When it stopped, I was in the radio tower. A text box appeared.
"Why did they destroy our home? We were meant to be here... Everyone who destroyed are home is gone. Everyone in the world is gone. We killed them all. We got revenge like you. Now all the world is gone."
Suddenly, the screen went white, with my character still there. "Everything is gone. You also killed us. You're the only one left. Why did we kill people? Why did you help? Now, you must get what you deserve!"
The character was replaced with a patch of blood, and then the game froze. I have never picked up this cartridge again. It gave me nightmares.

~End
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Comments: 420

DreamLandWarrior In reply to ??? [2012-05-01 22:37:19 +0000 UTC]

Is this a true story?!

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Polyhexian In reply to DreamLandWarrior [2012-05-07 03:51:00 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't know, I didn't write it.

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DreamLandWarrior In reply to Polyhexian [2012-05-07 04:07:35 +0000 UTC]

k

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Wolf-chanOokami In reply to ??? [2012-04-18 19:40:11 +0000 UTC]

Lol, I remember that pic from a creepypasta pokemon slideshow tribute!

And gotta admit, that story is pretty shocking. O_o"

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NekohimeSekushi In reply to ??? [2012-02-24 18:58:30 +0000 UTC]

Owo Meow??? Demon Neko is sad and confused. Ittai nani...but good story. I enjoyed it...very much so.

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InvizableDragon In reply to ??? [2012-02-03 20:35:23 +0000 UTC]

Red would not put up with this shit.

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AnimeArtist154ever [2012-01-26 01:39:56 +0000 UTC]

Hello Crystal *touches Crystals ghost*

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Randomanimelover123 In reply to ??? [2012-01-17 23:28:44 +0000 UTC]

Thus I will not sleep tonight...

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Aisheyru-Fox In reply to ??? [2012-01-06 06:04:09 +0000 UTC]

HO. LY. COW. That is freaky.

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mercifuljonathan In reply to ??? [2011-12-27 00:30:15 +0000 UTC]

[link] i promise it's funny

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mercifuljonathan [2011-12-27 00:29:33 +0000 UTC]

[link] click!

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Hickerbop [2011-12-17 14:43:10 +0000 UTC]

Hi.
I have some kind of pokemon OC trainer.... the name is Harioku:
Harioku: Hai!
Me: Not right now, harioku......

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z4tf2derp [2011-12-02 23:20:42 +0000 UTC]

DAMN ----____----

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aliciahedgehog747 [2011-11-05 19:10:48 +0000 UTC]

lol kinda reminds me of angelica from rugrats

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aliciahedgehog747 In reply to ??? [2011-11-05 19:06:17 +0000 UTC]

gee how creepy

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X-the-Fox In reply to ??? [2011-11-03 23:13:54 +0000 UTC]

XD my computor wont let me fav it!

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Dorminchu In reply to ??? [2011-10-29 19:22:31 +0000 UTC]

Click this.
[link]
Now look at the picture.
Now, read the story.

I just robbed you of sleep...hopefully...
He...eh...Eh...hE...EhEhEhEhHHEEH!
Yup. I'm a crazy woman...

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FlowerLighthouse In reply to ??? [2011-10-29 01:37:52 +0000 UTC]

I want the game oxo

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RGB64 In reply to ??? [2011-10-23 00:44:18 +0000 UTC]

They're all gone! They're all gone, even!

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domibryanz In reply to ??? [2011-09-26 15:36:44 +0000 UTC]

cool

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tinokika In reply to ??? [2011-08-23 11:50:59 +0000 UTC]

Its just me, or this reffers to Kris beign replaced with Lyra? Well the scientist is possible maker of game, and he killed her. Oh sorry its just my thought..... Wrong thoughts I quess "sigh"

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Polyhexian In reply to tinokika [2011-08-23 17:27:20 +0000 UTC]

This came out looooooooooooooong before HG/SS was out- I think it came out before it was even announced actually.

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RabbitVal In reply to Polyhexian [2012-07-02 20:55:29 +0000 UTC]

But it mentioned HG/SS at the start,
"With HeartGold and SoulSilver's release earlier this year, I tried looking for a copy of one of the original games" It says so

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Polyhexian In reply to RabbitVal [2012-07-05 04:05:59 +0000 UTC]

...That's an ENTIRELY different story. That's Lost Silver. This story predates that by awhile, it just didn't get popular until after LS came out.

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tinokika In reply to Polyhexian [2011-08-24 05:55:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh sorry! I was just thinking....

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Polyhexian In reply to tinokika [2011-08-24 06:05:48 +0000 UTC]

no hahaha it was a good thought
poor timing is all

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An0therRand0mPers0n5 In reply to ??? [2011-08-03 04:54:39 +0000 UTC]

Ahh creepypasta featuring my favourite pokemon game...
well done!

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RaInBoWkAt123 In reply to ??? [2011-06-28 14:51:39 +0000 UTC]

Haha! I remember this now!
Oh, good times~ My first creepypasta... oh, how I hated myself after that. But it was well worth it!...right?

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AhsokaTanoFan2 In reply to ??? [2011-05-19 17:59:26 +0000 UTC]

humans pay the price for destroying Tower... Very good ghosts do...
Great job!

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TimTamChimchar In reply to ??? [2011-04-20 13:37:49 +0000 UTC]

I read this in the dark at 11:30am. No joke.

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jay1164 In reply to ??? [2011-04-16 18:09:04 +0000 UTC]

So, what the hell would of happened if you said 'yes' to both of the questions?
I'm pretty sure it would be bad either way.

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Polyhexian In reply to jay1164 [2011-04-16 18:15:46 +0000 UTC]

I dunno. o3o

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FagonStar In reply to ??? [2011-03-24 19:39:13 +0000 UTC]

I am going to have some very nice dreams tonight. :'D

/is made out of creepyness

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Polyhexian In reply to FagonStar [2011-03-24 21:25:52 +0000 UTC]

Muahahhaa

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FagonStar In reply to Polyhexian [2011-03-24 22:13:34 +0000 UTC]



/demonic laugh

LOL

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SolariSeto In reply to ??? [2011-03-16 20:13:24 +0000 UTC]

Well that wasn't very enjoyable.

:I

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Chibi12 In reply to SolariSeto [2011-11-26 22:07:30 +0000 UTC]

It was very enjoyable.
:I

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emberwing12 In reply to ??? [2011-03-05 08:15:49 +0000 UTC]

wow....i would LOVE to play this......

good way for me to vent my anger.....

and mostly,i like killing ppl.in games,anyway.>B)

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Tibby-san [2011-02-23 05:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Can I ask to make this into a Game?

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Clowbi In reply to Tibby-san [2011-02-25 20:45:27 +0000 UTC]

I WANT A COPY

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Tibby-san In reply to Clowbi [2011-02-25 20:54:12 +0000 UTC]

DannehBoi said the following:

Oh, that story. Well, theres many things in it which I think might be too far out of my league to acomplish. Who knows. If my script editing skills improve, then I could give it a shot...


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That's what he told me. Plus it'll be more like a move but of the game. lol.

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Polyhexian In reply to Tibby-san [2011-02-23 12:39:29 +0000 UTC]

I didn't write ti, so go ahead. :Y

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Tibby-san In reply to Polyhexian [2011-02-23 15:32:14 +0000 UTC]

: D Thank you.

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AzureInu In reply to ??? [2011-02-04 07:28:08 +0000 UTC]

I think "Tarnished gold" is a creepypasta about silver x3(haven't read it yet myself I plan on reading it the morning but I think it's about silver.)

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Polyhexian In reply to AzureInu [2011-02-05 00:49:35 +0000 UTC]

You would guess correctly, haha.

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AzureInu In reply to Polyhexian [2011-02-05 03:09:38 +0000 UTC]

Yush! 83 I read it this morning and it was pretty cool ^^ To bad, like most pokemonpastas,everyone died(besides mewtwo)xD
What'd you think of it? *is curious*

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Polyhexian In reply to AzureInu [2011-02-05 03:25:58 +0000 UTC]

Well, the thing is, everyone dieing is a cliche now... but this was one of THE first pokemon creepypasta written. Before it was popular. So it was really not cliche yet and I approve. Also, it was sent to me through an anonymous email called 'NO_HOPE@hotmail.com"
I love it.

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AzureInu In reply to Polyhexian [2011-02-05 19:29:33 +0000 UTC]

Wow one of the first? that is so cool! 8D
Oh wow "No hope"? xD that is awesome!

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ComatoseCritic In reply to ??? [2011-01-29 03:39:20 +0000 UTC]

When I first saw this, I thought it was the new SS/HG character killing Crystal x)

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SSBB1998 In reply to ??? [2011-01-24 23:44:52 +0000 UTC]

Psshaw If you think THATs Creepy, read Pokemon Creepy Black

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