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Description EDIT:
Hair fixed.

((Supposedly lol))
Anyway, I should be working right now. Commissions and stuff. Buuuuuuuuut, well, I was distracted. YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE.
Anyway, the actual story really wasn't that great, but I was actually just chilling on /tr/ when it was posted for the first time. Which I thought was pretty durn cool. Plus it was pretty visual; and I've wanted to draw Crys for awhile. Haha, now I just need a hack that stars Silver, eh?
...huh. Actually, that would be pretty cool. If you find one, please note me!!
((Also, this is the first art I've done on my new laptop!!!))

I was smart enough to copy and paste the story into word when it was posted. :3

With HeartGold and SoulSilver's release earlier this year, I tried looking for a copy of one of the original games, Crystal, to buy online. I hadn't played this game in at least 7 years. It strangely went missing when I moved house as a kid. I saw the cart eBay. There wasn't much information, or even a picture, but it had no postage and packaging price and only cost a dollar, so I was hardly losing anything if it didn't really exist.
When the game arrived, it wasn't in its original box, but instead, the cartridge alone was just wrapped up. It looked like a Crystal cartridge as it was shiny, slightly see-through and blue, but it lacked the sticker in which the game title is print on. However, I still put it in my pink Game Boy Advance SP. Pink as I am a girl, of course.
I switched the handheld on. There was a loud beeping sound, then the game began as normally. Once the menu screen was open, the only option was New Game, as it had never been played. The cartridge sure ddn't seem in that condition though.
So, I clicked new game. Instead of starting out with the Professor's speech, it skipped straight to somewhere that didn't exist in these games. Or at least, it looked like the place.
It was the Pokemon Mansion from the original games. The Pokemon Mansion on Cinnabar Island. The same Cinnabar Island that no longer existed.
I was the girl character, as I wanted to be, but I had no choice in this. On close inspection, her hair seemed a different color from what I originally remembered. It was a dark purple, and she also didn't have her hat any longer.
I walked around the building. It wouldn't let me up the stairs. The only other thing was a bed. I walked towards it and a scientist came along. He told me to rest, so I laid on the bed. The screen suddenly went pitch black. It stayed this way for a while. Before this transition, there was pure silence, but after, there was loud high pitched noises, which almost sounded like screams. It was hard to tell though, as the sound was in 8bit.
When my character woke up, the plase was covered in patches of red; blood. The character herself was drenched in it too. I tried to walk around, but I couldn't. The scientist seemed to have disappeared, also.
I pressed all of the buttons to try and get something to work, and on pressing select, my character walked out of bed. Only, she was still in the bed at the same time. And unlike before, instead of walking, she appeared to float.
I pressed start, and my character turned into a ghost pokemon's menusprite. This shocked me slightly. I walked out of the door, when I suddenly teleported into Lavender Town. There, in the middle of town, was a gravestone. I clicked the "A" button to check it. It said "R.I.P. CRYSTAL". I opened up my menu, and looked at my trainer card. The sprite of the trainer had turned into that of a Misdreavus', and as I though, the player's name was "CRYSTAL".
The scientist came up to the tombstone, and it suddenly disappeared. He seemed to run at twice the speed of a normal game character.
My character, without my control, floated after him. As soon as she entered a patch of grass, a random encounter appeared. Only, this encounter was hardly "random". The Pokemon was Mewtwo. Instead of attacking, a few lines were written.
"You let them get you, didn't you, CRYSTAL?"
There was a yes and no option, I just clicked no, as I was unsure of what was going on.
"Don't lie to me! I can see what they did! Look at yourself." After this, the game paused for a few seconds, then the "battle" continued. "You're just an object of science, like me. I'm not real, and neither are you. You were just made out of a tiny bit of DNA from something else, and when you weren't perfect, they killed you. Would you like to seek revenge?"
I clicked no again, and I was sent back to the field, with Mewtwo still following my character.
I walked until the scientist appeared again, and suddenly, my bag screen came up with the only item there being "Knife". I clicked it, and pressed use. Suddenly, the screaming noise appeared again, and the screen went black.
Suddenly, the screaming got louder and more frequent. When it stopped, I was in the radio tower. A text box appeared.
"Why did they destroy our home? We were meant to be here... Everyone who destroyed are home is gone. Everyone in the world is gone. We killed them all. We got revenge like you. Now all the world is gone."
Suddenly, the screen went white, with my character still there. "Everything is gone. You also killed us. You're the only one left. Why did we kill people? Why did you help? Now, you must get what you deserve!"
The character was replaced with a patch of blood, and then the game froze. I have never picked up this cartridge again. It gave me nightmares.

~End
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Comments: 420

Polyhexian In reply to ??? [2011-01-25 00:05:41 +0000 UTC]

...First off, I DIDN'T think this one was creepy. At all. I expressly mentioned I didn't like this pasta, it just had sentimental value.
Second, I am more well versed in pokemon creepypasta than... anyone else on the net. I read Black back in August.

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SSBB1998 In reply to Polyhexian [2011-01-25 23:41:33 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaandd??

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Polyhexian In reply to SSBB1998 [2011-01-26 00:11:02 +0000 UTC]

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SSBB1998 In reply to Polyhexian [2011-01-26 02:14:31 +0000 UTC]

Sorry..

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CupcakeDisaster In reply to ??? [2011-01-21 20:52:46 +0000 UTC]

Woah, amazing! That is the best Pokemon Creepypasta i have ever read! Oh, and the picture is amazing too.

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Polyhexian In reply to CupcakeDisaster [2011-01-21 21:04:13 +0000 UTC]

I really didn't think this one was very well written. Lost Silver is so much better.

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CupcakeDisaster In reply to Polyhexian [2011-01-21 21:26:31 +0000 UTC]

Everyone has opinions.

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hidanismyjashin In reply to ??? [2011-01-13 06:27:44 +0000 UTC]

I would just like to say, this is my favorite picture on the internet. c:

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Polyhexian In reply to hidanismyjashin [2011-01-13 21:12:50 +0000 UTC]

KYAAA >///<

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DJ-Skylark In reply to ??? [2011-01-05 07:43:52 +0000 UTC]

I love this. Vengeful ghosts are kinda really awesome.

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bunnyscream67 [2011-01-04 00:44:02 +0000 UTC]

what is creepypasta...

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Polyhexian In reply to bunnyscream67 [2011-01-04 00:46:28 +0000 UTC]

Creepy is derived from copy and pasta from paste; it means scary/disturbing/unsettling copy poasta, which is basically a story that gets passed around on the internet with an anonymous author.

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bunnyscream67 In reply to Polyhexian [2011-01-08 06:40:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks, i'm new to this stuff!

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Kaeru-Hime-Chan [2010-12-19 16:46:05 +0000 UTC]

THAT SMILE!
I like it.

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Duchess-Pandemonium In reply to ??? [2010-12-19 14:36:32 +0000 UTC]

The perspective is <3

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Princessnapped In reply to ??? [2010-12-19 04:25:09 +0000 UTC]

iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii don't think I commented. Did I? if I did, I'm sorry for commenting twice. :'DD

Anyway, this picture is AMAZING! *W* And I'm so glad you copy'n'pasted that, 'cause it was so fun to read~! X3

And I enjoy the effect of 'ghost' Crystal staring up at you while poor ol' real Crystal is dead on the ground. D:

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Ultramagnuo In reply to ??? [2010-12-03 06:21:35 +0000 UTC]

Hey wait a minute, that girl in the picture is real. She's the Glitch City ghost.

[link]

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Polyhexian In reply to Ultramagnuo [2010-12-03 12:47:35 +0000 UTC]

.......Well, poo, I wish I had known that earlier.

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ChertheSketcher In reply to ??? [2010-12-01 06:54:04 +0000 UTC]

*Looks at picture and then reads stroy*

That's fine, I wasn't planning to sleep tonight anyway. But seriously though, the pic and story are awesome, but they both freak me out BIG time...

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Vespahive In reply to ??? [2010-11-28 03:15:27 +0000 UTC]

My icon serves as a great reaction picture to creepypasta.
I wish they gave more clues. D:

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Sammi-The-FF-Freak In reply to ??? [2010-11-20 17:05:30 +0000 UTC]

That is the CREEPIEST thng I've heard in a long time.

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BlargZan In reply to ??? [2010-11-18 05:35:17 +0000 UTC]

Brrrrrrr.......... that story was Chilling.... now i don't want to go to sleep...

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Sharmanix In reply to ??? [2010-11-13 09:28:08 +0000 UTC]

Did you make this up or is it real? BTW love the story, v. creepy and moving....

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Polyhexian In reply to Sharmanix [2010-11-13 13:45:10 +0000 UTC]

I didn't write it, I just copied and pasted. c:

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Sharmanix In reply to Polyhexian [2010-11-13 18:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh... where from?

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jacmanda In reply to ??? [2010-11-03 01:10:53 +0000 UTC]

poor crystal...but good history xD

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BlindKakudo In reply to ??? [2010-11-02 01:04:37 +0000 UTC]

That ghost face is gonna give me nightmares.

~Will read that creepy pasta once I get through the million I have to read~

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Polyhexian In reply to BlindKakudo [2010-11-02 04:27:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh, but it's so short!

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DarklessCross In reply to ??? [2010-10-27 22:08:33 +0000 UTC]

literally, fear of what the game draikinator

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Polyhexian In reply to DarklessCross [2010-10-28 00:27:00 +0000 UTC]

...pardon? : D

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DarklessCross In reply to Polyhexian [2010-10-28 00:29:17 +0000 UTC]

n.nU perdon, yo hablo espaΓ±ol
jeje mal intento de hablar contigo

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Polyhexian In reply to DarklessCross [2010-10-28 01:59:27 +0000 UTC]

... Yo no hablo espaΓ±ol. : 'D

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Shadonut In reply to ??? [2010-10-24 18:39:28 +0000 UTC]

this is an interesting story

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VanillKirsche In reply to ??? [2010-10-21 17:57:27 +0000 UTC]

So THATS why Kotone is in the new games..>>

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Polyhexian In reply to VanillKirsche [2010-10-21 20:02:08 +0000 UTC]

....lol, I love what you just said. XD

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VanillKirsche In reply to Polyhexian [2010-10-27 14:31:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh mai, thank you :'D

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Nintendogs4ever In reply to ??? [2010-10-10 23:10:31 +0000 UTC]

She didn't have a hat

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Polyhexian In reply to Nintendogs4ever [2010-10-11 00:27:22 +0000 UTC]

...yes she did.

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Nintendogs4ever In reply to Polyhexian [2010-10-11 17:08:15 +0000 UTC]

"I was the girl character, as I wanted to be, but I had no choice in this. On close inspection, her hair seemed a different color from what I originally remembered. It was a dark purple, and she also didn't have her hat any longer."

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Polyhexian In reply to Nintendogs4ever [2010-10-11 20:17:02 +0000 UTC]

....oh, shit.

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DuskanDawn In reply to ??? [2010-10-10 05:18:39 +0000 UTC]

So did she get raped then died...then went crazy? Seems like it...damn kreepy sientiest people...

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Polyhexian In reply to DuskanDawn [2010-10-10 05:36:09 +0000 UTC]

I dunno. :0 That would be cool, though.

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SilverSerpentineX In reply to ??? [2010-10-10 03:31:24 +0000 UTC]

oh, and the first thing that came to my mind wen that scientist dude said to take a rest, and then there wuz screaming wuz rape. XD

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Polyhexian In reply to SilverSerpentineX [2010-10-10 04:34:21 +0000 UTC]

XD
Oh my gosh, that didn't occur to me, but I like it!!

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SilverSerpentineX In reply to ??? [2010-10-10 03:30:39 +0000 UTC]

hey, do u make these up, or did u really find these? 8o i lieked the lost silver game story best. XD

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Polyhexian In reply to SilverSerpentineX [2010-10-10 04:34:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I didn't write any of them. ^_^ Just found them. Dug them out of the bowels of the internet, I did.

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SilverSerpentineX In reply to Polyhexian [2010-10-16 23:19:14 +0000 UTC]

hahaha, either way, it waz a nice pic. XD and hahaha, im serious, rape was wat that sounded liek. it sounded as though he raped her then killed her. XD sorrie, i just haz a perverted mind liek that, just liek EVERYONE else at mai skool. XD

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Polyhexian In reply to SilverSerpentineX [2010-10-16 23:20:27 +0000 UTC]

NO
NO THAT'S AWESOME

I love that theory. X3

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SilverSerpentineX In reply to Polyhexian [2010-10-17 00:25:33 +0000 UTC]

hahaha, im glad u liek it. XD

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Tibby-san In reply to ??? [2010-10-03 02:33:13 +0000 UTC]

that was a messed up story, but kinda cool, also, i love the drawing you made to go with it.

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