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EDIT:Hair fixed.
((Supposedly lol))
Anyway, I should be working right now. Commissions and stuff. Buuuuuuuuut, well, I was distracted. YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE.
Anyway, the actual story really wasn't that great, but I was actually just chilling on /tr/ when it was posted for the first time. Which I thought was pretty durn cool. Plus it was pretty visual; and I've wanted to draw Crys for awhile. Haha, now I just need a hack that stars Silver, eh?
...huh. Actually, that would be pretty cool. If you find one, please note me!!
((Also, this is the first art I've done on my new laptop!!!))
I was smart enough to copy and paste the story into word when it was posted. :3
With HeartGold and SoulSilver's release earlier this year, I tried looking for a copy of one of the original games, Crystal, to buy online. I hadn't played this game in at least 7 years. It strangely went missing when I moved house as a kid. I saw the cart eBay. There wasn't much information, or even a picture, but it had no postage and packaging price and only cost a dollar, so I was hardly losing anything if it didn't really exist.
When the game arrived, it wasn't in its original box, but instead, the cartridge alone was just wrapped up. It looked like a Crystal cartridge as it was shiny, slightly see-through and blue, but it lacked the sticker in which the game title is print on. However, I still put it in my pink Game Boy Advance SP. Pink as I am a girl, of course.
I switched the handheld on. There was a loud beeping sound, then the game began as normally. Once the menu screen was open, the only option was New Game, as it had never been played. The cartridge sure ddn't seem in that condition though.
So, I clicked new game. Instead of starting out with the Professor's speech, it skipped straight to somewhere that didn't exist in these games. Or at least, it looked like the place.
It was the Pokemon Mansion from the original games. The Pokemon Mansion on Cinnabar Island. The same Cinnabar Island that no longer existed.
I was the girl character, as I wanted to be, but I had no choice in this. On close inspection, her hair seemed a different color from what I originally remembered. It was a dark purple, and she also didn't have her hat any longer.
I walked around the building. It wouldn't let me up the stairs. The only other thing was a bed. I walked towards it and a scientist came along. He told me to rest, so I laid on the bed. The screen suddenly went pitch black. It stayed this way for a while. Before this transition, there was pure silence, but after, there was loud high pitched noises, which almost sounded like screams. It was hard to tell though, as the sound was in 8bit.
When my character woke up, the plase was covered in patches of red; blood. The character herself was drenched in it too. I tried to walk around, but I couldn't. The scientist seemed to have disappeared, also.
I pressed all of the buttons to try and get something to work, and on pressing select, my character walked out of bed. Only, she was still in the bed at the same time. And unlike before, instead of walking, she appeared to float.
I pressed start, and my character turned into a ghost pokemon's menusprite. This shocked me slightly. I walked out of the door, when I suddenly teleported into Lavender Town. There, in the middle of town, was a gravestone. I clicked the "A" button to check it. It said "R.I.P. CRYSTAL". I opened up my menu, and looked at my trainer card. The sprite of the trainer had turned into that of a Misdreavus', and as I though, the player's name was "CRYSTAL".
The scientist came up to the tombstone, and it suddenly disappeared. He seemed to run at twice the speed of a normal game character.
My character, without my control, floated after him. As soon as she entered a patch of grass, a random encounter appeared. Only, this encounter was hardly "random". The Pokemon was Mewtwo. Instead of attacking, a few lines were written.
"You let them get you, didn't you, CRYSTAL?"
There was a yes and no option, I just clicked no, as I was unsure of what was going on.
"Don't lie to me! I can see what they did! Look at yourself." After this, the game paused for a few seconds, then the "battle" continued. "You're just an object of science, like me. I'm not real, and neither are you. You were just made out of a tiny bit of DNA from something else, and when you weren't perfect, they killed you. Would you like to seek revenge?"
I clicked no again, and I was sent back to the field, with Mewtwo still following my character.
I walked until the scientist appeared again, and suddenly, my bag screen came up with the only item there being "Knife". I clicked it, and pressed use. Suddenly, the screaming noise appeared again, and the screen went black.
Suddenly, the screaming got louder and more frequent. When it stopped, I was in the radio tower. A text box appeared.
"Why did they destroy our home? We were meant to be here... Everyone who destroyed are home is gone. Everyone in the world is gone. We killed them all. We got revenge like you. Now all the world is gone."
Suddenly, the screen went white, with my character still there. "Everything is gone. You also killed us. You're the only one left. Why did we kill people? Why did you help? Now, you must get what you deserve!"
The character was replaced with a patch of blood, and then the game froze. I have never picked up this cartridge again. It gave me nightmares.
~End
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Comments: 420
Chibigirl16 In reply to ??? [2010-10-02 18:53:50 +0000 UTC]
o__o that would probably m me neverpick up a pokemon game EVER AGAIN
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GengarGirlCat In reply to ??? [2010-10-02 00:10:46 +0000 UTC]
I KINDA REALLY WANNA PLAY THIS NOW EVEN THOUGH I WILL BE AFRAID OF POKEMON AND BE SUPER DEPRESSED. haha
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pikachu22101 In reply to ??? [2010-09-30 19:33:25 +0000 UTC]
OMG I would ask the seller, exactly "WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?"
i wanna try this. OR can you make a youtube video on this game? I would probly get nightmares, as I get them easily O.0 but hey, it isnt real!
my prediction, its A. Haunted B. Infested with aliens C. Hacked. Big time.
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Polyhexian In reply to pikachu22101 [2010-09-30 19:49:47 +0000 UTC]
I didn't find it. :U It's just copypasta. I copied+pasted.
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pikachu22101 In reply to Polyhexian [2010-09-30 20:08:38 +0000 UTC]
OOOHHHH... Okay. For a sec there I was really scared....
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Polyhexian In reply to pikachu22101 [2010-09-30 20:17:53 +0000 UTC]
Naw, s'kay, nobody ever reads the description. >_> I said I didn't write that.
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pikachu22101 In reply to Polyhexian [2010-10-02 02:48:05 +0000 UTC]
Oh im sorry I read it just probly didnt pay any attention... (my observations skills are awesome one hour then like im so oblivious the next...)
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BlackLatios In reply to ??? [2010-09-28 00:55:53 +0000 UTC]
I want that game. That sounded like a very interesting story in my mind, LOL. I'm creepy like that.
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BlackLatios In reply to Polyhexian [2010-09-28 01:07:58 +0000 UTC]
Where exactly did you get it, and is there more? I definitely wanna see this in person. And I know a bunch of friends who would be interested in seeing it too.
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Polyhexian In reply to BlackLatios [2010-09-28 01:18:01 +0000 UTC]
It's not mine. I just copied and pasted.
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BlackLatios In reply to Polyhexian [2010-09-28 01:59:40 +0000 UTC]
Aww damn, still sounds epic though.
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BlackLatios In reply to Polyhexian [2010-09-28 02:05:33 +0000 UTC]
Yes definitely. Makes me wish I could make ones as scary. But based off of my character's storyline.
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demonic36 In reply to ??? [2010-09-19 03:23:06 +0000 UTC]
mine went missing also and i got a glitched version from ebay also
...i havent played much yet
i lost my sp charger
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demonic36 In reply to Polyhexian [2010-09-19 03:33:07 +0000 UTC]
it was soo glitchy it was more than the save issue now that i think about it >> maybe i should get an ebay charger and play and see what happens...the game was worn and only new game appeared i figured it was the save glitch
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Polyhexian In reply to demonic36 [2010-09-19 03:36:38 +0000 UTC]
Save glitch? That's not a glitch, that's the internal battery dying. Glitching how badly? Was it a bootleg?
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demonic36 In reply to Polyhexian [2010-09-19 03:40:47 +0000 UTC]
half the shipments of the game had this was my second with that issue i had 3 of them but my good one got flushed i lost my adored pidgeot.
not that i know of it looked exactly like my others it would just glitch randomly so i had to go with caution the music was always messed up so i just played silently it seemed a little like glitch city half the time but like i said i didnt do much as my charger vanished and now im scared to play it again after reading this
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Polyhexian In reply to demonic36 [2010-09-19 03:43:53 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, battery died. That's a problem everyone is having with them now; the batteries only lasted a few years. The only people who still have playable copies replaced theirs.
DDDD: That's weird.
I wouldn't be frightened if I were you; this is just a pasta, and likely not on ethat actually happened. I think your game is safe. c:
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demonic36 In reply to Polyhexian [2010-09-19 03:53:03 +0000 UTC]
i got it like ...2 years after it came out i think. if i cant get this one to function im gettin another one it was my favorite game and i hate how they replaced kris i loved her so much it saddens me that kotone exists
i hope it is im reading all of the things and i know i cant sleep and i thought yume nikki was the scariest thing there was but i was proven wrong now
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Polyhexian In reply to demonic36 [2010-09-19 04:18:13 +0000 UTC]
You could always try replacing the internal battery, first. There are several fantastic tutorials online. ^_^
Also, I hate Kotone with a burning fiery passion. D:<
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demonic36 In reply to Polyhexian [2010-09-19 04:32:56 +0000 UTC]
ill try that
my school protested her XD the rep from nintendo was speaking and everyone was wearing old crystal gear and started yelling at him bout kotone
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Polyhexian In reply to demonic36 [2010-09-19 05:22:15 +0000 UTC]
OH MY GOD I WISH I WENT THERE
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Leggyre In reply to ??? [2010-09-12 03:23:29 +0000 UTC]
It's so sweet to read CreepyPastas at midnight
Now I can't sleep, YAY!
Creepy thing is Creepy /shot
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SasuSaku--NaruHina In reply to ??? [2010-09-11 01:10:18 +0000 UTC]
Not as freaky as the others... But still pretty creepy.
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RaInBoWkAt123 In reply to ??? [2010-09-09 23:17:29 +0000 UTC]
Epic~ I totally would have gotten revenge! That would be funnnnn
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Liisukas11 In reply to ??? [2010-09-09 20:43:49 +0000 UTC]
Instant fav since that story creeped me out!
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YourBiggestFan156 In reply to ??? [2010-09-08 01:05:57 +0000 UTC]
You can play original Crystal on vizzed.
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Polyhexian In reply to YourBiggestFan156 [2010-09-08 01:10:02 +0000 UTC]
Wazzat, like a VBA?
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YourBiggestFan156 In reply to Polyhexian [2010-09-08 01:13:43 +0000 UTC]
It's a website. You can download a VBA there, or just play original GBC games. Here's the link: [link]
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Polyhexian In reply to YourBiggestFan156 [2010-09-08 01:17:00 +0000 UTC]
I already got a VBA. Thanks, though!
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YourBiggestFan156 In reply to Polyhexian [2010-09-08 02:31:43 +0000 UTC]
I wasn't trying to advertise a vba, I was telling you where you could play the original Crystal if you were still interested.
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GirriLee In reply to ??? [2010-09-06 23:05:58 +0000 UTC]
there should be games hacked in a better meaning way.. instead of scarring peoples minda why not make them feel confident by hacking it in a way that would support more king thoughts...
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Polyhexian In reply to GirriLee [2010-09-06 23:11:29 +0000 UTC]
Well, there are. There are some really inspiring ones out there.
We just don't care about them, because the scary ones are SO MUCH COOLER.
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GirriLee In reply to Polyhexian [2010-09-06 23:30:43 +0000 UTC]
i want to get ahold of a hacked game... it sounds fun to get one, i dont care what the story is! i do love the scary ones too! my friend droppwd her old gameboy one time while she was battling a dudrio and when she picked it back up the dudrio had a bloody nose... not sure if this is true though. pokemon games are mysterious games! i want to read moooar about these games!
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Polyhexian In reply to GirriLee [2010-09-06 23:32:15 +0000 UTC]
DDDDDD:
That would be AMAZING OMFG.
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GirriLee In reply to Polyhexian [2010-09-06 23:46:45 +0000 UTC]
my cousin also got a game from gamestop with an arceus on it. if only arceus could have eggs, lol. it still is pretty origional to have a arceus now though. i just cant get to any events for the darn pokemon nor get it traded (that'll never happen) nor can i afford the hack cartrige for it.
im really stupid about old games, my sister ate the charger to my game boy so i cant try to play my gold game any more, i also used to have silver but it got taken by someone who said they could "FIX" it, guess i shouldnt have trusted em.
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Polyhexian In reply to GirriLee [2010-09-06 23:53:16 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I have a friend who brought both her DS cards to an event. She gave me her spare.
D: That bites. You shoulda given it to me, I've had to fix half a dozen busted carts before.
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GirriLee In reply to Polyhexian [2010-09-06 23:57:18 +0000 UTC]
how do you charge its battery anyway? do you have to unscrew it?
Polyhexian In reply to GirriLee [2010-09-06 23:59:08 +0000 UTC]
You gotta change it. >:T
First thing you do is you remove the cap, then you careful remove the battery and replace it wit a new one. It includes sautering though.
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CRASHANOMICS In reply to Polyhexian [2011-08-21 11:29:47 +0000 UTC]
GRAMMAR NAZI TIME
it's "soldering." I know, it makes as much sense as "colonel."
my mom used to make circuit boards. :l
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Polyhexian In reply to CRASHANOMICS [2011-08-21 17:48:56 +0000 UTC]
HNNNNGH IT'S FUNNY BECAUSE I KNOW THAT
I JUST DIDN'T WRITE IT
AUUGH
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GirriLee In reply to Polyhexian [2010-09-07 00:04:18 +0000 UTC]
what kind? im super stupid now
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Polyhexian In reply to GirriLee [2010-09-07 00:11:41 +0000 UTC]
Don't feel stupid, it's a complex process, Um... I forget the specific name, but it's time ad round and silver.
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