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PONYMAAN — The Equestrian/Human Manual - intro
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Argument and photoshop montage art by Invisibleguy Ponyman.Thanks to - wolfzoon and Katie Erickson by the grammar help! ^^
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This is cool in that I'm working on a fan fic that is like District 9 only with ponies called District 3 1/2
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District 3 1/2? Seems a good idea!!!
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The ponies have to figure out how to understand how to live with humans and the humans at the same time my home city doesn't know how to deal with becoming home to 20,000 ponies from a traveling space herd of ponies.
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"And eventually I can correct the words of an art." Does that mean we should put suggestions here? Well, I'm gonna.
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"So... you have been pulled through a portal and are now in Equestria"
"Learn how to behave to prevent mistakes, accidents and injuries."
A constraint is NOT being able to do something wrong. You constrain a toddler by putting him in a crib, you constrain a dog from biting by putting a muzzle on.
My guess is this was transliterated from something like 'straining', so injuries it is.
"...creatures, but they can behave unexpectedly to a human." At least that's what I think you meant.
[Since they[1] have strength, abilities and powers that might threaten their[2] fragile human structure, carefully read this manual.]
Both [1] and [2] refer to ponies. "your fragile human structure" instead?
"Because some day, it might just save your life."
"May Princess Celestia have mercy on your soul, should you choose to disregard this manual."
((somewhat related: Accidents happen anyway, mistakes are wrong choices. It's a mistake to wear pink to a funeral, but it's an accident to get a heart attack, noone made a decision there. So technically this won't prevent accidents. Noone will care if you put both "accidents" and "mistakes" in the title though. I'm a word nazi.))
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Thank you! This is the spirit! My english is low and the web translator don't help so much! I need help to correct the manual(this is the beta version, i can ever change it without difficulty) and all help is welcome!
(If you want to look for more errors of grammar and post them, I thank you, we will do a better manual!)
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