HOME | DD
poundforpoundcake — Helix rough sketch scene
#bbw #fat #feedee #wg
Published: 2014-09-21 06:32:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 3875; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 19
Redirect to original
Description
A rough and abridged sketch of a possible scene in Official Space Girl issue 4. I really like this scene, but I'm not sure if it has a place in the story, or any of the alternate versions of this scene I have tried.I usually prefer to keep projects mostly to myself until they are finished, or nearly finished. But the writing of this issue is taking way longer than it should (freakin' years, what the hell?) and it's become really confused and complicated in my mind, maybe it would be helpful to get some outside perspective on it.
Most of the problems I've been having with it is just deciding on things, like which of the numerous ideas to include and where and how to put them in the story. The first three issues were such simple, fun things. What have I done?
Related: Writing Process comic
Related content
Comments: 3
Looks good so far, I guess she's using the little sex homunculus as a spy?
If it's outside perspective you want, I'd be happy to discuss plots and story ideas with you anytime!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
It's nice of you to offer, and I might just take you up on it. I get too nervous to approach people for help, but staying alone in my own head is making things worse.
Yeah, in this scene Helix is using the pleasure device to generate little sexual partners and adapting them as spies and probably also to scout around to find her way through the bandit's ship.
The problem I seem to be having with this scene is that it fits bets after Helix puts on a disguise to avoid notice but before she ends up in the middle of busy area, and I'm not sure there's a good reason for her to go into hiding between those times. The scene could potentially go before Helix puts on a disguise, but it also messes with some important development between Helix and the bot.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
