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PrideAlchemist7 — .:AatR Round 2 page 1:.
Published: 2011-08-13 15:10:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 489; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 3
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Heya guys, this is for Round 2 of against hope you like it
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*done with a pencil and a fineliner*
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OH man Pride, you've gotten so much better since I was last on DA! GREAT JOB GETTING TO THE SECOND ROUND!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! I'm rooting for you! ^_^
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wow *O* !! Just a pencil & fineliner?! Thats really awesome!
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yep, just pencil and fineliner, also thank-you for this comment
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I'm always impressed with the sheer amount of linework you put into your pages.
However, since you use the same line weight for everything, there's really no main focal point and everything gets lost against each other. Try mixing it up with solid blacks, or using pens other then finetips, or using different weighted pencils. Try using different forms of shading then just cross-hatching, too--from a distance you can fake it, but once you get up close it's clear that nothing's being shaded according to the shape it is, and thus it gets flattened out.
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thank-you for the comment and also the advice Tofu, i really appreciate and i'm glad you like the amount of linework ^u^;
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