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Webs N' ShotgunsMás de una vez, viendo el crepitar del fuego, mientras Waylon y Cordie dormían, sus pensamientos no paraban de fastidiarle, uno de los muchos motivos por los que prefería vigilar, al menos mantenía su mente ocupada en el pensamiento de dispararle a cualquier criatura que se cruzase en su línea de visión. Pero hoy, como si de un milagro (o una maldición) se tratase, esta excursión a los bosques no había despertado la ira de las criaturas que lo habitaban, de hecho, no se habían gastado ni una sola bala en todo lo que llevaban en aquel bosque, su escopeta (y revolver) no solían pasar tanto tiempo sin ser disparados, y la falta del peligro al... XenoFilia - IIEl motor era sumamente ruidoso, lo cual anulaba los sonidos externos de la naturaleza, el ulular del viento era ahora sentido como una brisa meramente, el viejo vehículo avanzaba lentamente por la carretera oculta por la vegetación boscosa, mientras los animales que se paseaban entre los árboles, o que habitaban en ellos observaban momentáneamente aquel objeto ruidoso que se movia a una velocidad constante, pero lenta. Dentro del vehículo, el conductor llevaba un buen rato silente, fijándose siempre en el camino, con un aspecto algo desaliñado, además de una chaqueta que había visto días mejores, decidió fijarse momentáneamente en su acomp... Seekers The Elvin War Chapter 3 (Rough Draft) Seekers: The Elvin War Volume I Written By Andrew McMahan Chapter III: The Burning Ace, a Windy Spade & a Conflicted Show Oregon, Corvallis, Willamette River, May 16, 2022, 9:40pm Back then I, Ace Sumato, didn't care much about anything. I didn't care about where I lived, where I was raised, or how people thought of me. All I cared about in those days was to be alone, watching the gentle currents, as well as the cloudy night sky, and smoking my cigar while I sat on the pebble surface near a calm fire that I ignited. That time, even if it was boring at times... was nice. Of course that time wouldn't last forever. I heard some f... M.E.: The Lady Defender Chapter 5 Preview
The Monster Empire:The Lady Defender Chapter 5:Ball and ChainByNorris Vaughn IIIAboard the Father-Ship, Dynamite Soldier was in the training room he and some of the other high ranking officers used. He was practicing his high kicks on a punching bag when he got a visiter. Soldier stopped mid-kick before he stood up straight and saluted the official, recognizing him instantly as the figure . Isaac stopped at the edge of the mat. It was Isaac the Heart Monster, Prime Minister of the Monster Empire. “The King wishes to see you about the other day’s events.” Isaac then explained. Dynamite knew what precisely he was talking about: being capture... The Lady Defender Chapter 6 Preview
The Monster Empire: The Lady Defender Chapter 6: Diary EntriesByNorris Vaughn III“Dear Diary, Sometimes, I just hate my life…” Aboard the Father-Ship, Dynamite Soldier was being briefed about his next mission against Alladornia and the Lady Defender. He stood tall and proud before the stairs which led up to the King’s throne. That idiot Woody’s plan failed miserably so of course the King and Prime Minister had to assign him to the job once more. He couldn’t help but have that smug smirk on his face, his triangular eyes gleaming with pride, as he knew he was the right monster for the job. Perhaps now he could finally have his fight against ... EscapismEscapismByNorris Vaughn IIIPeople often tell me that I have my head up in the cloudsTo them I say that they might have their heads too close to the groundWhen people tell me to face reality, do they mean that I am a knight?Do they mean that reality is a huge, snarling beast or dragon?Yet when I hear someone tell me to face reality, I do not, must not, think of reality asa a beast or a dragon to be defeated or slainNoReality is something to be tamed, to be made your ally in lifeSo, the next time someone tells me that I have my head up in the clouds, I’ll agree with themBut I’ll be saddled in, riding high on the wings of a dragon name Realit... Genji's New PuppyGenji’s new puppyThe train tracks stretched on for as far as the eyes could see. The tracks rode between the patches of farm fields in the open countryside until the green grass touched the horizon. In the center of the farmland was a raised concrete platform with a roof, a long bench, and small enclosed area which housed a single toilet.A man stood in the center of the station, hat, scarf, bandages, glasses, heavy coat and an earthy brown colored pair of trousers covering the man from head to toe, hiding his true form from the world. The only hint of Genji Shimada’s identity was his left hand, down at his side holding a leather suitcase n... The Lady Defender: Enemies and Rivals: part 1
The Monster Empire:The Lady Defender Chapter 3:Enemies and Rivals: Part 1ByNorris Vaughn IIIDynamite Soldier slowly opened his eyes to find that his world had been turned upside-down…LITERALLY. As he came too, he discovered he was suspended in the air above a river of molten lava, upside-down, and tied tightly against, who else, the Lady Defender. She had been calling out to him while he was unconscious, jostling him awake with her tugging against the binds. “W-what the…?” Dynamite exclaimed, “What happened!” “It’s about time you woke up, Sleeping Beauty!” Cassie yelled at him while facing away from him. “Oh, just skip the pleasantries and... The Lady Defender: Enemies and Rivals Part 2
The Monster Empire Vs. The Lady Defender: Chapter 4: Enemies and Rivals: Part 2ByNorris Vaughn IIIIn the dimly lit caverns of the Dark Alliance’s lair, the molten lava and torches as the only light source, Brutus and the Elven Princess were on the warpath, as they chased Dynamite Soldier and the Lady Defender. As they ran down the darkened passageway, they could see the light of the Defender’s torch getting smaller and smaller in the distance. Brutus’ rage-filled eyes narrowed, as he and the Princess followed the light down deeper into the labyrinth which made out the cavern system. As they ran off into the darkness, little did they know, ... 21st scent you read W.I.P. EnglishEnglish description Iambic Heptameter A love couple glancing at the 21st Century. The woman talks... Chapter 4 Bad luck"I know that this isn't the same as your world but once you see how Beach City is like, I think you'll like it here," Steven says as he and Connie were walking with Crona along the beach. As Crona follows them he stops and looks at the ocean. He stops and decides to take a good look at the whole scene."I-it's so c-calm," he though as the waves hit and just listens to the sound of the waves splashing the shore. The more he looks at the beach it reminded him of something but he couldn't remember what it was. As Crona continues to just stare at the beach until Ragnarok starts to pull on his lips and pokes his head hard."Crona? Crona! Quit sta...

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Family ties - Chapter 5Home. She was home now, sitting on her bed, in her room. The same room she had always slept in from as far as she could remember and as clean as ever. The sheets were fresh, the blanket was neatly spread on her bed, light blue to match the sheets and pillowcase, with a blue feline embroidered on it. The same blue feline she had a plushy of on the shelf near her desk. It was so old, but she couldn’t just imagine getting rid of it. This stuffed Pokemon was the only thing she had kept from her childhood. Now, everything she looked at was simply efficient and useful. Just as the Pokegear she had in her hand and couldn’t get herself to use.The ... Heartache by the NumbersHeartache by the Numbers One foot in front of the other. That was all that Angela could keep her mind on. In the dying cool of the morning, the only thing she was thinking of was her foolishness for not taking a rest before making the final haul to Junkertown. Her stomach was empty, eyes were burning, and judging from the distance, Junkertown looked to be two miles away. Why didn’t she stay with those two for another day, find a meal in that stash, or at least close her eyes for an hour or two? Of course she had to overestimate her strength, after all, having a successful procedure always made her feel like she was on top of the world... Mercy Experiments on HerselfMercy “Experiments” on HerselfThe locker room was quiet, the white and occasionally red tiles lined the floor in a repeated pattern from one end of the locker bank to the other. The green lockers of the changing room combined with the tiles in what looked to be an attempt at continuing the motif of the College’s school colors. Such a sparse layout of a room would normally be quite loud, be it from the mass of people using it, or even so much as one person causing enough noise that the echoes would make it seem like ten, but that was not the case for today. There was no special reason for the absence of pedestrians in the Locker room at thi... Reality IIReality is like a mirror — It’s all a matter on perspectiveIf reality is warped, its like a funhouse mirror, twisting and conforming your image of realityWhen are clear, reality is crystal clear like an untainted reflection EternityEternity Written by: DancewithknivesDescription: Tracer takes a second to contemplate mortality.“Will the circle be unbroken? By and by, by and by Is a better home a-waiting In the sky, oh, in the sky?”8:35:39 Dr. Ziegler exited her office. Her sandals snapped at her heels with every step, foreshadowing her approach down the hall to the male research staff to find busy-work for themselves as she passed. The only hint of the one-piece swimsuit that she wore were the heavy elastic straps on her shoulders and the long cut down the side of her bright yellow sun dress, showing the smooth, snow-white legs peeking out with every step.She walked ...

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Thank you to all participants! Winners will be announced in our Monthly Newsletter on December 1st.

ProjectComment is hosting a glorious contest featuring a prize of a 3-Month Core Membership (or the equivalent of 1,200 ), but only for the next two weeks! Take part now, or forever miss out! We are fast approaching the end of the year, so there's not a lot of time for us to close the year with a

Here's how to take part in this contest...

1. Post one (or as many as you like) new constructive comment on a piece featured below. (What is a Constructive Comment? )
2. Reply to this journal with the link(s) of the piece(s) you commented on.

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Webs N' ShotgunsMás de una vez, viendo el crepitar del fuego, mientras Waylon y Cordie dormían, sus pensamientos no paraban de fastidiarle, uno de los muchos motivos por los que prefería vigilar, al menos mantenía su mente ocupada en el pensamiento de dispararle a cualquier criatura que se cruzase en su línea de visión. Pero hoy, como si de un milagro (o una maldición) se tratase, esta excursión a los bosques no había despertado la ira de las criaturas que lo habitaban, de hecho, no se habían gastado ni una sola bala en todo lo que llevaban en aquel bosque, su escopeta (y revolver) no solían pasar tanto tiempo sin ser disparados, y la falta del peligro al... XenoFilia - IIEl motor era sumamente ruidoso, lo cual anulaba los sonidos externos de la naturaleza, el ulular del viento era ahora sentido como una brisa meramente, el viejo vehículo avanzaba lentamente por la carretera oculta por la vegetación boscosa, mientras los animales que se paseaban entre los árboles, o que habitaban en ellos observaban momentáneamente aquel objeto ruidoso que se movia a una velocidad constante, pero lenta. Dentro del vehículo, el conductor llevaba un buen rato silente, fijándose siempre en el camino, con un aspecto algo desaliñado, además de una chaqueta que había visto días mejores, decidió fijarse momentáneamente en su acomp... Seekers The Elvin War Chapter 3 (Rough Draft) Seekers: The Elvin War Volume I Written By Andrew McMahan Chapter III: The Burning Ace, a Windy Spade & a Conflicted Show Oregon, Corvallis, Willamette River, May 16, 2022, 9:40pm Back then I, Ace Sumato, didn't care much about anything. I didn't care about where I lived, where I was raised, or how people thought of me. All I cared about in those days was to be alone, watching the gentle currents, as well as the cloudy night sky, and smoking my cigar while I sat on the pebble surface near a calm fire that I ignited. That time, even if it was boring at times... was nice. Of course that time wouldn't last forever. I heard some f... M.E.: The Lady Defender Chapter 5 Preview
The Monster Empire:The Lady Defender Chapter 5:Ball and ChainByNorris Vaughn IIIAboard the Father-Ship, Dynamite Soldier was in the training room he and some of the other high ranking officers used. He was practicing his high kicks on a punching bag when he got a visiter. Soldier stopped mid-kick before he stood up straight and saluted the official, recognizing him instantly as the figure . Isaac stopped at the edge of the mat. It was Isaac the Heart Monster, Prime Minister of the Monster Empire. “The King wishes to see you about the other day’s events.” Isaac then explained. Dynamite knew what precisely he was talking about: being capture... The Lady Defender Chapter 6 Preview
The Monster Empire: The Lady Defender Chapter 6: Diary EntriesByNorris Vaughn III“Dear Diary, Sometimes, I just hate my life…” Aboard the Father-Ship, Dynamite Soldier was being briefed about his next mission against Alladornia and the Lady Defender. He stood tall and proud before the stairs which led up to the King’s throne. That idiot Woody’s plan failed miserably so of course the King and Prime Minister had to assign him to the job once more. He couldn’t help but have that smug smirk on his face, his triangular eyes gleaming with pride, as he knew he was the right monster for the job. Perhaps now he could finally have his fight against ... EscapismEscapismByNorris Vaughn IIIPeople often tell me that I have my head up in the cloudsTo them I say that they might have their heads too close to the groundWhen people tell me to face reality, do they mean that I am a knight?Do they mean that reality is a huge, snarling beast or dragon?Yet when I hear someone tell me to face reality, I do not, must not, think of reality asa a beast or a dragon to be defeated or slainNoReality is something to be tamed, to be made your ally in lifeSo, the next time someone tells me that I have my head up in the clouds, I’ll agree with themBut I’ll be saddled in, riding high on the wings of a dragon name Realit... Genji's New PuppyGenji’s new puppyThe train tracks stretched on for as far as the eyes could see. The tracks rode between the patches of farm fields in the open countryside until the green grass touched the horizon. In the center of the farmland was a raised concrete platform with a roof, a long bench, and small enclosed area which housed a single toilet.A man stood in the center of the station, hat, scarf, bandages, glasses, heavy coat and an earthy brown colored pair of trousers covering the man from head to toe, hiding his true form from the world. The only hint of Genji Shimada’s identity was his left hand, down at his side holding a leather suitcase n... The Lady Defender: Enemies and Rivals: part 1
The Monster Empire:The Lady Defender Chapter 3:Enemies and Rivals: Part 1ByNorris Vaughn IIIDynamite Soldier slowly opened his eyes to find that his world had been turned upside-down…LITERALLY. As he came too, he discovered he was suspended in the air above a river of molten lava, upside-down, and tied tightly against, who else, the Lady Defender. She had been calling out to him while he was unconscious, jostling him awake with her tugging against the binds. “W-what the…?” Dynamite exclaimed, “What happened!” “It’s about time you woke up, Sleeping Beauty!” Cassie yelled at him while facing away from him. “Oh, just skip the pleasantries and... The Lady Defender: Enemies and Rivals Part 2
The Monster Empire Vs. The Lady Defender: Chapter 4: Enemies and Rivals: Part 2ByNorris Vaughn IIIIn the dimly lit caverns of the Dark Alliance’s lair, the molten lava and torches as the only light source, Brutus and the Elven Princess were on the warpath, as they chased Dynamite Soldier and the Lady Defender. As they ran down the darkened passageway, they could see the light of the Defender’s torch getting smaller and smaller in the distance. Brutus’ rage-filled eyes narrowed, as he and the Princess followed the light down deeper into the labyrinth which made out the cavern system. As they ran off into the darkness, little did they know, ... 21st scent you read W.I.P. EnglishEnglish description Iambic Heptameter A love couple glancing at the 21st Century. The woman talks... Chapter 4 Bad luck"I know that this isn't the same as your world but once you see how Beach City is like, I think you'll like it here," Steven says as he and Connie were walking with Crona along the beach. As Crona follows them he stops and looks at the ocean. He stops and decides to take a good look at the whole scene."I-it's so c-calm," he though as the waves hit and just listens to the sound of the waves splashing the shore. The more he looks at the beach it reminded him of something but he couldn't remember what it was. As Crona continues to just stare at the beach until Ragnarok starts to pull on his lips and pokes his head hard."Crona? Crona! Quit sta...

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Family ties - Chapter 5Home. She was home now, sitting on her bed, in her room. The same room she had always slept in from as far as she could remember and as clean as ever. The sheets were fresh, the blanket was neatly spread on her bed, light blue to match the sheets and pillowcase, with a blue feline embroidered on it. The same blue feline she had a plushy of on the shelf near her desk. It was so old, but she couldn’t just imagine getting rid of it. This stuffed Pokemon was the only thing she had kept from her childhood. Now, everything she looked at was simply efficient and useful. Just as the Pokegear she had in her hand and couldn’t get herself to use.The ... Heartache by the NumbersHeartache by the Numbers One foot in front of the other. That was all that Angela could keep her mind on. In the dying cool of the morning, the only thing she was thinking of was her foolishness for not taking a rest before making the final haul to Junkertown. Her stomach was empty, eyes were burning, and judging from the distance, Junkertown looked to be two miles away. Why didn’t she stay with those two for another day, find a meal in that stash, or at least close her eyes for an hour or two? Of course she had to overestimate her strength, after all, having a successful procedure always made her feel like she was on top of the world... Mercy Experiments on HerselfMercy “Experiments” on HerselfThe locker room was quiet, the white and occasionally red tiles lined the floor in a repeated pattern from one end of the locker bank to the other. The green lockers of the changing room combined with the tiles in what looked to be an attempt at continuing the motif of the College’s school colors. Such a sparse layout of a room would normally be quite loud, be it from the mass of people using it, or even so much as one person causing enough noise that the echoes would make it seem like ten, but that was not the case for today. There was no special reason for the absence of pedestrians in the Locker room at thi... Reality IIReality is like a mirror — It’s all a matter on perspectiveIf reality is warped, its like a funhouse mirror, twisting and conforming your image of realityWhen are clear, reality is crystal clear like an untainted reflection EternityEternity Written by: DancewithknivesDescription: Tracer takes a second to contemplate mortality.“Will the circle be unbroken? By and by, by and by Is a better home a-waiting In the sky, oh, in the sky?”8:35:39 Dr. Ziegler exited her office. Her sandals snapped at her heels with every step, foreshadowing her approach down the hall to the male research staff to find busy-work for themselves as she passed. The only hint of the one-piece swimsuit that she wore were the heavy elastic straps on her shoulders and the long cut down the side of her bright yellow sun dress, showing the smooth, snow-white legs peeking out with every step.She walked ...

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