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Published: 2005-10-16 06:01:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 86; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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A scathing bunch of narrow stringDepicts a bee, with biting sting
for knowing what we could never know
is not quite half the battle.
This cocky, yellow, glaring gasket
Tries its best to call your casket
for knowing what we could never know
is an instinct not possessed.
A tenacious organ pierces skin
To end something it did not begin
for knowing our limits is a rightful risk
not worth taking.
Bewildered, how it once had ruled
And has become some driveling drool
for not knowing our limits is a
virtue uncontained.
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Comments: 9
The third line of each stanza adds alot of voice to this. Great poem
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Creative combination of words. Very good ability in poetry.
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That's pretty good and I'm not one to read something then trash it because I believe in this.. why put someone's work down just because you don't like it or your jealous; so with that.. good job!
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I will agree with you because I think poetry, and in fact art in general, is purely subjective. A thousand different people will interpret a single work in a thousand different ways.
Anyhow, thanks for commenting.
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i like the way the stanza's end,
for knowing our limits is a rightful risk
not worth taking.
is a really true line. cool stuff
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Thanks for checking it out, and giving me some honest feedback. Glad you liked that line in particular.
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Well, honesty is something in it's own category i think. Meanwhile your avatar is great hahaha
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