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PWRof3D — The Face of Fate
Published: 2013-02-22 05:40:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 31474; Favourites: 226; Downloads: 0
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Run. Trip. Fall. Turn around. There it stands before you: your fate. Staring down at you. Hungry. Placing a leg on a nearby car, boasting its round shape. Soon to be your home. Soon to be your world. One way in, no way out. The entrance to infinite darkness opens above you. Liquid drool dripping. Tongue moving like a snake. Teeth made of knives. Behind the teeth, behind the tongue, behind the drool, is the hole. The place everything enters, but only sound escapes. Its deep. Too deep for light. Too deep for rescue. Through the mouth, through the hole, through the neck, awaits an unimaginable torment. Flesh longing for your arrival. Your fate, content with your fear, draws near. The face of fate filling your field of vision. Closer, closer. Heated stench bathing you. Maw opening wider. Drool dripping. Tongue beconing.Snap.
Fear grips tight. As tight as the teeth. Your feet become weightless, while the weight crushes your body. Thrusting. Jerking. A violent set of motions. Sending you down the mouth. Passed the teeth, passed the drool, passed the snake for a tongue, you reach the entrance. Another powerful bolt. It has you. Invisible fingers hold you. Grasp you. Take you. Muscle flexes around your shape. A perfect fit. A decent now. Slow. Fast. Slow. Fast. Jumping down the fleshy path. Tightness of wrapped muscle squeeze every known measurement of your skin. A horrid ride. When is it over?
Freedom hits your head. Soon your arms. In seconds you are free. Free in a much different sense. Free inside your fate. As free as a cage. Light cant find your eyes, but you dont want it to. The fingers on the hands become overloaded with touch. New textures. Ones you never want to feel. Your fate is not just yours. It was theirs. And it wants more. The cage moves with life. All surfaces give motion. You sway. In all directions, you sway. Fate finding another victim.
That was a fun little typing thing.
Not sure what I was doing. "Lots of description in as short as sentence as possible"? Maybe........Raw Render [link]
I wanted to be a fast setup. It took me 70 minutes to set the scene and render. Maybe 30 more minutes to type this description.
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Comments: 26
Umm....... good story, now can he please let me out?
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its too late, the dino is prey for my poison
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lol. want to do that with a dragon some time. exept with a way out... most of the time. oh wait. nvm "Midnight! Here Boy. GTG
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With that huge sagging gut of his coming towards me I would assume hes too full to even fit in any more.... id probably be wrong in that assumption. <3
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i like it, love ur description as it is nicely writen.
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The drooling effects are awesome! I would like that this T-rex with a huge belly full of preys and he can't move for his heavy belly. Is only a idea that I arrived to me in my mind... Great work.
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He is going to have one really funny walk for a few days.
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It looks hungry. I wonder how much it want's to eat before it decides to rest?
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I'd say this human is gonna be one of the last he enjoys for the day.
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Do you rp, by chance, because I would love to meet this rex! ^w^
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That is one greedy-looking rex... Very full, but also still appears incredibly ravenous!
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One of your best yet
And that description :3
Sucks to not have acid resistant scales
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Yes, I bet he wishes he had some scales right now. Or knew they existed, so then he could wish he had some.
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Haha well he'd still need something to get him out of there 
I may be acid resistant but I'm not acid immune sadly. Plus there's always that pesky oxygen and breathing problem 
My magic helps with that (Having biiig lungs also helps.), but there's not much I can do about the acid ><
Heh, I'm willing to bet that the Trex and Aquadon are used to squishy and easy-to-digest prey, so if they find I'm still wiggling about inside them after a day or two, they might think "This isn't edible" and spit me out
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I bet the Aquadon wouldnt mind, or feel, anything moving around longer than it should. A rex on the other hand.... Spit it out, find out if its still alive, and if it still look good, eat it again......
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Yeah I doubt the aquadon - being as large as it is - would even feel something moving around longer than it should. But a big wyvern or a trex squirming long after it should have digested miiiight catch its attention.
Heh, well if a Trex spits me out that gives me a split second to escape. Even if I don't manage to get moving in time, at least I can refresh my lung's supply of air before I am once again thrust into its churning stomach
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Getting fresh air is definitelly a bonus. Let just hope the rex does it again. It might think squirming for a day is normal and not spit you back out.
Ehh, your neck is long, just pop your head out its mouth for air. Even if you only get a nostril out of the throat you will benefit.
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I'm strong enough to crawl back up its throat, unlike its usual prey of choice, so I don't have to worry too much. Even if it tries to swallow me back down, it's throat muscles aren't strong enough to keep me down. I'm in its belly because I want to be >:3
Aquadons on the other hand... Their throat muscles are strong enough to keep me put
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