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Pyrefly74 — Of Water Sprites
Published: 2008-05-04 00:57:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 275; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description Of water sprites, no man should wish,
for though they love (and love the best),
they turn their lovers into fish
and keep them captive, nice and fresh.

And when the meat is tender most,
and when the flavor savors best,
they give them chase, these men-turned-fish,
and feast upon once human flesh.
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Comments: 5

Electroblood [2008-05-16 17:17:39 +0000 UTC]

it's way cute and makes me feel all giddy and happy. haha I laughed at the end. now i want to eat fish. am I a sprite?

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Teague-Drydan [2008-05-06 18:41:58 +0000 UTC]

gruesome. but nice. the rhyme scheme works very well for this.
good job

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Pyrefly74 In reply to Teague-Drydan [2008-05-08 00:00:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you!! It's too short though... T.T

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Teague-Drydan In reply to Pyrefly74 [2008-05-08 00:05:00 +0000 UTC]

no. I think it works. It tells the story & wraps it up nicely.

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Pyrefly74 In reply to Teague-Drydan [2008-05-08 15:38:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks^.^

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