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Pyrefly74 — The End
Published: 2006-01-16 00:01:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 137; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description It is the darkest hour; the end of everything.
The full moon glistens, its color crimson,
Against the dark sky it shines bright.
In the last moments, when earth is invaded
By inhabitants of hell and heaven
And spirits are unprepared to fight,
Angels and demons wage war;
Battles are fought for the price of your soul.
You could be dead tonight.
Bloodstained hearts enter the gates of an infinite flame,
But in the sky there is a man dressed in white.
He is clad in armor and carries a sword with no blade.
Protecting the innocent and defending the guilty,
He comes like a thief in the night.
Powerful words are spoken, hearts are cleansed;
The chance for redemption.
While the moon glows red, souls grow white.
The earth crumbles, spirits rise and fall.  
The time is desperate.
The world plunges into an eternity of night.
It is the darkest hour; the end of everything.
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Comments: 6

Fallen-Raven13 [2006-06-03 06:52:40 +0000 UTC]

Truly dark and depressing...with a tone of hope. That is what the world is right now...and that's a pretty cool way to end. Love every part of this poem.

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Yazzy [2006-01-30 16:30:37 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is pretty good!! I really liked reading this. ^_^ This is gonna sound strange but your poem sounds familiar to me. In my religion, we believe in afterlife, and before the afterlife begins, there's a Judgement day, where the world ends and people go up to God to be Judged to go to heaven or hell. Ok rambling. XD Anyway, I loved the detail in this, awesome job!

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Pyrefly74 In reply to Yazzy [2006-02-27 02:11:35 +0000 UTC]

I must have missed this comment when u posted it. sorry. Actually, this poem is based on judgement day. Though I don't consider myself "religious", I do believe in and love God with all of my heart. Well, anyway, thank you for the lovely comment.

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Electroblood [2006-01-16 05:15:42 +0000 UTC]

YESSSS you aren't a lame poet like most people your age who have shown me their poems to read (which I reluctantly do). . . .this is very deep and amazing!! i adore it. You are completely talented and gifted by God indeed. wow. I hope you can continue to write like this in the future.

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Pyrefly74 In reply to Electroblood [2006-01-17 01:02:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!! I appreciate that so much. ^_^

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Kliban-Katz [2006-01-16 05:01:21 +0000 UTC]

Very nice! Nice and descriptive. ^^

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