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Published: 2005-12-14 23:30:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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I see nothing aboveNothing but hate
I came preaching love
Love can wait
It all seems so unreal
A man walking no path
Liquid, wating to congeal
A man cut in half
I tred no leaves black
I leave no footprint, no sign
I will never come back
Not even to have whats mine
Seaching for something new
Wanting something to abuse
Waiting for something old
For you, nothing but respect
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Comments: 8
Phreik [2006-01-25 12:17:26 +0000 UTC]
hey wow.
this is aws. the best i'v seen so far.
i'm guna fave it.
love the emotive.
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Pyrexea In reply to TheCorrupt [2005-12-15 10:52:05 +0000 UTC]
maybe its cause i'm cut deep. or maybe thats the point of them. you decide
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postaldude66 [2005-12-15 01:19:46 +0000 UTC]
I think you wrote this pretty well, and its pretty clear you have some good skills in writing poetry. Keep up the good work.
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Pyrexea In reply to postaldude66 [2005-12-15 10:47:23 +0000 UTC]
thanks, even though im not a writer nor a poet buy nature. I still try. Thanks again, it means alot
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