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Published: 2008-01-23 20:06:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 421; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 15
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Another two second ramble.Stock Used: [link]
Date: Wednesday 23rd January 2008
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Comments: 22
This is good! I would never have guessed it was a two second scribble...
Its interesting.
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Hehe
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I like this a lot it's cool
ok, I accidentally clicked the "request print" button or soemthing and i don't know what exactly i did but i'm sorry lol
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Lol don't worry
Thank yoou
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its a great two second ramble. the words fit so well with the picture. it's dark and ominous like the meaning and the ending is especially fitting...
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Aww thanks darling
Im actually pleased with the way the visual turned out on this one!
Not that i did much mind you
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Like the concept. I really adore how you group poetry with images. <3
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Short but damn spiffy. 
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Did i!?
i have to admit.. i havent read very many of his works at all..
Maybe one or two... The raven of course.. but not much
hehe i hang my head in shame!!!!!!
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Nah lol. The raven is what I was talking about anyhoo. Nevermore... ever more.... close enough lol
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hehe
Well being compared to the great Poe is definately a compliment indeed
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A two second ramble hey?
I like the way your mind works.
I think this would stand alone and strong even without the last stanza. Admittedly, that would change the meaning, in my perspective at least.
Some more great work from you
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it was originally without the last stanza... but i thought it'd be comical.
And the last time i did something comical was my 'Computer Abuse' thing on the generator...
And ever since i hate it
hehe... i dunno... Think i should change it?
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It's jsut one of those things I would do if I'd have done it.
Which obviously I didn't 
It's more... hard hitting, without the last stanza I think.
Leaving it in created a sense of longing, for me.
Depends what you were going for
but I didn't see it as comical.. either way.
You hate it but it has the most favourites? what madness!
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hehe
i'ts not poetry its just some .. crap
haha
I'll try and edit it and make it without the last stanza ^_^ and see what people think ^_^
Your opinion matters highly to me ^_^
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I do things like that a lot... they're called "scraps" in my next of the woods.
Because my thoughts are not crap, whereas yours are actually quite interesting.
Oooh-er, I feel like a leader!
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