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Pyrox666xPheebs — Set Yourself Free
Published: 2008-02-12 14:17:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 647; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 6
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Description Come sit with me angel.
Just lay here in my arms… safe.
You need not say anything,
         I can feel your thoughts.
And I know you couldn’t speak if I asked you to.


That’s it my darling.
Cry into my shoulder,
          It was reserved just for you.
Don’t worry about staining it.
It can be washed.


Don’t hold back sweetheart.
I can feel your fists gripping my shirt.
You don’t need to keep it in any longer.
Scream,
       Shout,
              Cry it out.
Release the disease.


Let me wipe your tears baby.
You still look beautiful.
With streaks down your cheeks.
I know I can’t stop the memories,
         Clouding your eyes.
So fall into mine, visions of love fill them.


You can do it honey.
I can feel the words on your lips.
Those words will set you free.
                                                        
                                               “I was raped”
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Comments: 39

Anchimaru [2011-12-15 13:57:36 +0000 UTC]

this made me cry. and im at work. It's beautiful, thank you <3

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Yarn-Kitsune [2010-08-03 04:12:37 +0000 UTC]

very touching.. i wish i had someone like that in your poem too

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Soul-Reader [2009-02-07 19:26:20 +0000 UTC]

I totally understand what you mean by this darling...rape is a monstrous thing..and shouldn't happen to anyone, whether they are a child, or grown up.
The people who do this are just sick people and they need to be stamped out. I had a bad experience once..I know how it leaves you

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FreeTigress [2008-02-23 17:55:31 +0000 UTC]

OMG.....I'm crying from this......

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to FreeTigress [2008-02-26 11:12:08 +0000 UTC]

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FreeTigress In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2008-02-26 15:04:53 +0000 UTC]

It was very powerful......beautifully written. You touched my soul with this one

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to FreeTigress [2008-02-26 17:21:57 +0000 UTC]


Thank you darling... im glad it touched you... and if i were near you... i would be that person... and i would make sure you are/were okay and hold you in my arms

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AllAlone1056 [2008-02-20 02:40:28 +0000 UTC]

I really liked this poem a lot. I love the way it all goes together. I hope everything is getting better for you. Hang in there and keep up with the awesome poems and stuffs

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AllAlone1056 In reply to AllAlone1056 [2008-02-27 02:02:00 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to AllAlone1056 [2008-02-26 11:14:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you darling
And i'll try my best

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insanity-streak [2008-02-19 22:29:26 +0000 UTC]

beautiful and touching

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to insanity-streak [2008-02-26 11:12:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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thebadkitty [2008-02-19 02:04:56 +0000 UTC]

Very sweet poem. I like the second verse best.

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to thebadkitty [2008-02-26 23:38:57 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you

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something44 [2008-02-13 05:12:38 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful, yet quite painful to read. I know what you're going through is hard. I just hope that you'll be strong enough to handle this ordeal. But know this, you'll always have friends who you can depend on. If there's anything you need, you can talk to me about anything. Take care pheebz! BTW, good work! I like the piece. Lovely work. ^_^

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to something44 [2008-02-16 19:01:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you darling

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pid-murderer [2008-02-13 01:33:39 +0000 UTC]

you write real well...
that really touched me

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to pid-murderer [2008-02-16 19:03:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you darling
My greatest wish is to touch at least one person with my writings

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pid-murderer In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2008-02-17 03:08:31 +0000 UTC]

its definitely touched me *again* hehe
so you're doing a great job

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RockerByBaby [2008-02-13 00:23:32 +0000 UTC]

Such beauty and creativity from such monstrosity.

You do write well.

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to RockerByBaby [2008-02-13 15:40:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you darling

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MagicalJoey [2008-02-12 21:39:46 +0000 UTC]

You can do it
You have people who are there for you...who are your shoulders-to-cry on because they chose to be

Lobe you

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to MagicalJoey [2008-02-13 15:40:17 +0000 UTC]

I know i have them.. if i called them... well... i dunno... in a way it feels i dont... I dont know...
I know im making no sense.. im sorry.

I lobe you too

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MagicalJoey In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2008-02-13 16:00:39 +0000 UTC]

you make perfect sense.

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ninja-pirates [2008-02-12 21:27:17 +0000 UTC]

such anguish.
i feel helpless and angry at myself that i cannot do anything.

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to ninja-pirates [2008-02-12 22:27:58 +0000 UTC]

You shouldnt. it's okay

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ninja-pirates In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2008-02-12 23:52:04 +0000 UTC]

it's not okay when i know you fear meeting new people, eating right, and even fucking going outside.
somethings are not okay. not even when you think it is.

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to ninja-pirates [2008-02-13 15:39:18 +0000 UTC]

Im sorry

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ninja-pirates In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2008-02-13 17:40:18 +0000 UTC]

feel not sorry, it is i who should be feeling sorry for you,
but i can not bring my self to such lows.
i know of your anguish,
but i do not know your pain,
and i do not know of your struggles,
but if i did,
i would not speak to you,
i would not acknowledge you,
i would cry.

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to ninja-pirates [2008-02-13 18:46:56 +0000 UTC]

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ninja-pirates In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2008-02-13 19:05:16 +0000 UTC]

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Tifeh [2008-02-12 20:25:58 +0000 UTC]


I'll always be here for you.

I really like this piece... in face, I need to fave this.

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to Tifeh [2008-02-12 22:28:18 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou

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Tifeh In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2008-02-14 02:24:30 +0000 UTC]

Mhmm [[:

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Tifeh In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2008-02-14 02:24:13 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. <33

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Windra [2008-02-12 16:56:17 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.
Did you tell your father yet?

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to Windra [2008-02-12 17:48:05 +0000 UTC]

No

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Windra In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2008-02-12 18:12:01 +0000 UTC]


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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to Windra [2008-02-13 15:38:50 +0000 UTC]

This is just... i suppose what i wish someone would do for me.. just something i imagined.

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