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Pyrox666xPheebs — Until It Stops
Published: 2008-06-04 22:50:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 1384; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 3
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Description Like always you push it from your mind.
Turn yourself blind to the pictures
Deaf to the words
Dead to the feelings

If you can make it like it never happened
The pain of it all can’t tear you up inside
And you don’t have to spend another night
Reliving the torture they say shouldn’t happen

They say if you accept it
Learn from it
It won’t happen again
  And again
        And again

But with every dream
  Every touch
         Every thought
You relive it

Until you don’t care anymore
Until it’s the only way you feel
Through the pain
Until each glance across a room
Is another drop of blood seeping from your dirty body

A Drip
Until there is nothing left
A Drop
Until nothing can touch you
A Drip
Until the nightmare stops.
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Comments: 35

insanity-streak [2008-07-06 00:18:10 +0000 UTC]

very personal and moving.

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to insanity-streak [2008-07-18 21:55:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks darling

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Phantasmagoria1318 [2008-07-01 18:30:48 +0000 UTC]

Your amazing.

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to Phantasmagoria1318 [2008-07-18 22:05:30 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you xx

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blue-strawberry [2008-06-07 07:13:46 +0000 UTC]

oh so powerful. Especially the end.
wow, that really got to me. great stuff as always

ps. I your sig. Macbeth ftw! woop woop

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to blue-strawberry [2008-06-07 11:54:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks darling ^_^

And for Macbeth ^_^

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RockerByBaby [2008-06-07 00:54:01 +0000 UTC]

Very moving, love.

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to RockerByBaby [2008-06-07 01:03:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks xxx

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RockerByBaby In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2008-06-07 02:20:43 +0000 UTC]

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something44 [2008-06-06 06:05:24 +0000 UTC]

This is what I missed Pheebz. Your heartlfelt poem are truly a wonder. Very nice work! ^_^

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to something44 [2008-06-06 12:33:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks darling

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carLitaaa [2008-06-06 02:42:30 +0000 UTC]

i love your poem,
and i understand it,
you never undestand mine...
well kiss



carLiiita

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to carLitaaa [2008-06-06 12:34:32 +0000 UTC]

Lol.. if only i could read different languages

And thank you darling xxxx

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bloodvayne [2008-06-05 20:40:46 +0000 UTC]

very well written, i especially favor the line "...Is another drop of blood seeping from your dirty body". A+!

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to bloodvayne [2008-06-05 21:13:14 +0000 UTC]

Wow Thank you muchly

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bloodvayne In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2008-06-08 20:01:33 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome.

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Kasabe [2008-06-05 19:09:49 +0000 UTC]

Really Deep Kim, Really Deep and i can so relate

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to Kasabe [2008-06-05 19:26:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you xxx
I wish you couldnt relate though
I wish you didnt have to go through this

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Kasabe In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2008-06-05 19:39:00 +0000 UTC]

Ditto and once your there it's very hard to get back

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xoover-rated [2008-06-05 03:49:02 +0000 UTC]

i love this
i can totally relate to it.
great job

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to xoover-rated [2008-06-05 12:09:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks darling xx

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xoover-rated In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2008-06-06 15:10:41 +0000 UTC]

your welcomes love

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Tenshi-Kurama [2008-06-05 02:35:48 +0000 UTC]

That was deep

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to Tenshi-Kurama [2008-06-05 12:12:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks x

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arata75 [2008-06-05 01:20:52 +0000 UTC]

Holy cow your poems are amazing! That's it, I'm totally watching you now! (In a non creepy way).

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to arata75 [2008-06-05 01:23:22 +0000 UTC]

Hehe Why thank you ^_^!!

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skell-cow [2008-06-05 01:09:48 +0000 UTC]

i know how that goes ... just got out of one of those situations myself.

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to skell-cow [2008-06-05 01:15:28 +0000 UTC]

I hope you're doing okay now

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skell-cow In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2008-06-05 01:17:21 +0000 UTC]

haha doing better ... like i said i just got out of it, still have a ways teh go. but i'm optimistic

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to skell-cow [2008-06-05 01:24:07 +0000 UTC]

All the best dear
And for optimisum ^_^

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skell-cow In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2008-06-05 01:27:42 +0000 UTC]

hehe yes and to you too ^ ^

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XImaginary-FriendX [2008-06-05 00:02:34 +0000 UTC]

I love this. It reminds me of so much.

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to XImaginary-FriendX [2008-06-05 00:09:59 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry xx

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XImaginary-FriendX In reply to Pyrox666xPheebs [2008-06-05 02:31:49 +0000 UTC]

You wrote it perfectly.

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Pyrox666xPheebs In reply to XImaginary-FriendX [2008-06-05 12:12:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks xxx

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