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Published: 2008-01-24 04:13:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 270; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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When the curtain is drawn and the spotlight shines downIt is our queue to act like a clown
With a song and a dance and blood on the floor
We knock on a chair and sit on the door
The rule book - conveniently - thrown in the trash
Signifying another stock market crash
Laughing, hysterics; βClean up on aisle twoβ
The tears start forming and our skin turns blue
The children are working, the adults play ball
A drama production until the rail falls
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It's great, it made me smile! 
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No problem, hun! 
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Aw! I helped!
Did I tell you dictionary.com or wordsmith?
The first one is the better one.
I thought it was really good, it seemed to swerve in my mind.. for some reason
One thing: queue, I think you meant cue.
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Dictionary.com ^_^
And im glad ^_^
and hehe yeah 
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I get a word of the day tooooo!
This made me giggle hehe, its topsy twisty turvey - love it!
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HEHE
Ooh you know yesterdays word... Nolens Volens!
That is so WEIRDDDDDDDDD!
I dont know what to do for it! ><
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Maybe skip that one... gehehe, be naughty
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nolens volens \NO-lenz-VO-lenz\:
Whether unwilling or willing.
After all, I'm not sure that I'm so angry with them, for it means that now you've got to remain here indefinitely -- nolens volens.
It's freaking weird
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oh ok, I get it.
hm, yah tis a bit! maybe ermm... a poem about someone stuck in a dead end job... and whether they are willing or unwilling makes no difference, they still need money... thats pretty crap, I don't know!
is a tough one. you could just get another word from the dictionary and pretend it was the word of the day
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Haha at least its something
i'll start writing when i finish getting ready ^_^
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yay, I helped
cool
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Thanks darling
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hehe thankee ^_^
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nice rhyming scheme and the flow is great except i cant help thinking the second line is missing a sylabble no idea what it is... or what could be done but otherwise its reaslly good, quirky, i like it
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Aww thanks darling ^_^!!!
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Nice imagery and rhyming scheme. Good job!
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Good good good great!!
This is fun, has nice imagery, is unique, and it rhymes! 
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hehe
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Hah! Very cool idea. Neat poem too. I like the 'knock on the chair and sit on the door' line.
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hehe
Thats my fave line too >hehehe
i dont really know what im talking about in that poem
But it was two late to go on a proper surrealist ramble >π: 0 β©: 0