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Qvi — TDC Round 1 pt 1
Published: 2012-05-01 14:45:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 2120; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 29
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Part 1 of my Round 1 entry, hope you like it :3
Part 2: [link]
Digimon (C) Bandai
Tatoskmon etc. (C) TheDigitalCore
Tiamath, Hades (Q) Qvi
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Oo! This is what I get for not checking on your DA page for so long. I didn't know you were doing a comic series! It looks really cool! Must catch up now
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I'm participating in two digimon themed OCTs (Original Character Tournament) for real prizes like cash, plushie and a brand new graphics tablet (could really use one now that mine is kind of dead). TDC is just one of them, most of my entries are for DWC thus far (I used the same characters for both so it might be easy to get the storylines confused :s ). Hope you will enjoy them though ^^
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Nothing like a little incentive to get one to produce, is there?
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FMP
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You will definitely be a tough contender. plzdropoutlol
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Love this as it FEELS like something from the digital world. I have just a couple of comments on the design if its okay.
The first pannel made me think they were in a greenhouse at first until I saw the digivice. I'm not sure how to alter that as it is the digital world so it should have those lines in the sky. Maybe a cloud or two? But its a very minor detail and makes sense in the context of the comic.
Very small point about writing. At the point where Tiamath steps on Hades' trap she's just begun to say his name. It might give a better sense of speed if it went something like: HaaaOLY SHIAARGG! It would mean a linked speech bubble across pannels however which isn't always helpful or easy to do.
Beyond that this is a great beginning. Both characters are established quickly and we start to get devlopment from the outset. Hades is a trickster and Tiamath is practical. It also shows the relationship very neatly and encourages people to keep reading. A really strong introduction
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Nice first page! the story looks interesting. hmmm All done with pencil?
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Yup, drawn with pencils, background and text added in photoshop. c:
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cool. hmmm do you use different kind of pencil?
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Just wondering how you did the different level of black. So just pressure? Pretty impressive
I have just 3 levels of pressure: not touching the paper, touching the paper and "hole in the paper" XD
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Try to practice shading like this: [link] Once you have done it enough on a random paper, you will be able to use multiple shades with a single pencil :3 I hope this helps!
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oh thanks ^^ my college notes will be all "shaded" 
I'll practice too the shading with lines
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