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I realy like "aboveground", funny, but that's what it is. xD
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Well what a piece ye 'ave here, lad. I's like the time jumping ye have put here lad, as well as putting a good story into this here piece. Hope ye make more o' these.
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Thank you! 
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I's thought ye were that far on yer works. Also, just to give ye a little piece of information here, I's 'spect an action scene in yer works due very soon, probably in yer next two or three parts. Yer building a good base here, but I advise ye to not stretch it that far 'afore the action scenes arrive, otherwise ye just end up with a dragging bore fest. I look forward to seeing yer works lad.
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I don't plan on dragging it out too far, but it will be some time before actual fighting action arrives. However, there will be "action" so to speak in terms of the plot moving along; it's not going to just be exposition
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I knew I could trust a lad like yerself. It seems ye know what ye have planned and what ye want to happen, but as for now, ye can do whatever ye please. It be not like I can do anything to stop ye.
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Looks like Tygressa dove headfirst into the whole thing, sort of leaving Rusk behind unbeknown to her in her enthusiasm, while Ruskaer lagged behind, testing the shallows first, having unspoken reservations. But even Tyg’s satisfaction is tempered by her thoughts about Iyress. I like how it is all more nuanced than the simple black-and-white scenario of both saying ‘yeah sure, we’ll sign up’ *enthusiastic, happily-ever-after attitude* as it reflects the realistic complexity of things. I wonder how Tyg’s parents, Karissa and even Kither are all coping, or what information they have.
Also, this is quite a colourful page! Must make a nice change from the caverns background over and over. xD
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Basically, yes.
Karissa's probably freaking the f out, I can tell you that. Tyg's parents might be ashamed if they heard of the news of her running away, and Kither.. well, Kither's likely in the dungeon, regretting his decision. 
Yesss, I love the color <3
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I like the time transition you did and I can't wait for the next page.
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Thanks
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