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Description Chapter 4- The Rise of Midnight Shadows

Back at the Crystal fair, a distant rumble echoed the sky, the crystal ponies were cowering in terror.
Shining armour defended his weak bride, Cadence, doing as much as he could to comfort her. “it couldn’t be thunder” he shuddered, “it seems... supernatural”.

“Where the hoof is Twa’light?” cried Applejack try to hide the false crystal heart. “The crystal ponies are getting’ antsie!”
Just then Spike came running from the palace, running as fast as his tiny legs could carry him. “Princess Cadence, Shining armour, anypony, help!”

“Spikey wikey” Rarity comforted him “what’s happening? Where’s Twilight? Has she found the heart?!”

Spike gasped trying to catch his breath “Twilight- crystal heart- King Sombra- help her -NOW”

“King Sombra is here?!” Shining armour gasped “What happened to Twilight! Is she alive!?”


Then the kingdom rumbled as if it was struck by lightning and black crystal tower ripped through the earth, slicing through the palace. The crystal ponies screamed as the sky became a dark and red as blood. A deep chilling voice echoed through the empire “Crysssstal slaves”

Breaking throught the sky of blood appeared a winged unicorn, the crystal ponies shrieked in horror, “Its King Sombra, run for your lives!” the ponies retreated in panic, trying desperately to escape.

“Hold on” Cadence peered at the shadowy figure, instead of a large black stallion stood a graceful purple unicorn. Shining armour stood in horror, “no, it cannot be..”

She removed her hood revealing her corrupted disfigured face. It was Twilight, black crystals spread through her face, all over her body the jems formed over her skin, becoming more crystal than flesh.

Her eyes were green and burning like flames from the underworld, a small thorn tiara sat above her horn. And in the center of her chest plate was the Crystal heart, softly glowing and pulsing as she breathed.

“SILENCE, PITIFUL SUBJECTS” bellowed Twilight. “Tremble, for you are all in the presence of the new ruler of the Crystal empire “

“Twilight” Shining armour came rushing towards his little sisters, “its Shining armour, don’t your recognize us ”

“Yes I remember, but that is irrelevant” Twilight turned away, “The Sombrian curse.. have you always known?"

“I’m your brother, don’t you recognize me?!”

“THE MARK OF BLACK MAGIC?" her eyes flashed "Did you know about it?”
Shining armour went silent, he couldn’t bear lying to his sister for too long, “…ever since you first got your mark... Celestia kept the dark arts a secret to avoid another uprising, like the Crystal empire.... We only did this to protect you.”

“I DON’T NEED PROTECTION, YOU FOOL. “ She snarled. “The Princess planned this my whole life, am I nothing but a mere pawn?”

The earth erupted with black crystals, her horn flashed and the Kingdom split in half.

“I’m through having secrets hidden away from me, I’m done being manipulated by everyone, nolonger will I hide my true powers”

Fluttershy quivered behind Rainbow Dash, “Twilight, stop. Are your insane?!” Rainbow barked back.

“Twilight, this is not who you really are” reasoned Shining armour.

“Twilight Sparkle is no more” her voice went hollow. “For this day you shall address me as… MIDNIGHT SHADOWS… mistress of darkness, Queen of Sombra, RULER OF THE CRYSTAL KINGDOM.”

A shadow grew from the earth taking the form of a large black unicorn, a twisted grin stretched across Twilights face.

“It is time for a new age in dark magic”, the disembodied voice declared “Like the phoenix, rising through the ashes will be a rebirth of a new empire”.

A wall of black crystals grew around the palace.
Spikes eyes widen in horror, watching his best friend disappear into the darkness.

“Twilight you are my closest friend," Cadence stepped towards the possessed deformed unicorn. "But I cannot let the Crystal empire fall again. I don’t want to hurt you but I can no longer let my subjects suffer.”

Cadence drew the first blow, a blast of blue light hit Twilights wing. “Don’t interfere, Cadenza,” Twilight gleamed
“ you are in the presence of TRUE magic”...

The game begins


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Comments: 50

DestroyerInTheDark [2018-04-30 05:08:15 +0000 UTC]

You can kind of understand her point of view, of in which she had been betrayed and the ones she trusted had been keeping secrets from her about everything. Her point of veiw was twisted by sombra and he even had evidence.
also are you doing part five, I hope you are, and is this on fanfiction because if not it would be brilliant to have downloaded on there. 
Otherwise brilliant story amazing plot and good luck, thanks.

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ColonelBSacquet [2014-10-26 16:38:37 +0000 UTC]

"“The Princess planned this my whole life, am I nothing but a mere pawn?”"

That is what you are to Sombra, you hare-brained numb-nuts!!

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EditAndCreateCF [2014-08-28 14:07:26 +0000 UTC]

+MLPBronysAreMagic she won't win Midnight Shadow will win, her special talent IS magic after all.

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QweenAshley [2014-08-27 08:24:52 +0000 UTC]

all hail midnight shadow

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QweenAshley [2014-08-27 08:23:58 +0000 UTC]

plz keep going

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MLPBronysaremagic [2014-08-20 18:10:13 +0000 UTC]

I HOPE CADENZA WINS

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biancaroseg [2014-08-04 20:26:03 +0000 UTC]

where part 5

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CANDYDONUT200 [2014-07-11 21:36:21 +0000 UTC]

30000000 cheers 4 midnight shadow!!!!!!!!!!!!

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QweenAshley In reply to CANDYDONUT200 [2014-08-27 08:24:27 +0000 UTC]

all hail midnight shadow

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Cornisch [2014-06-02 09:30:32 +0000 UTC]

Mooooooooooooore!

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PrincessCrystalSnow [2014-04-13 05:45:21 +0000 UTC]

nooooooooooo

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DarkNighFury [2014-03-25 20:38:55 +0000 UTC]

loooooooooooooooooooooool

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gumballkitty [2014-03-25 05:02:30 +0000 UTC]

Yikes! Twilight's been possessed by Sombra!

Get out! Get out you bad OC! The power of Faust compels you!  

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ColonelBSacquet In reply to gumballkitty [2014-10-26 16:39:37 +0000 UTC]

Yes! What you say, man! THE POWER OF FAUST COMPELS YOU, FOUL BEAST !!!!

Come on, scream with me, will ya? ^^

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Sup-Gurl [2014-02-21 22:59:33 +0000 UTC]

MAKE MORE I WANT TO SEE MORE!!

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WildKnight215 [2014-02-17 03:43:09 +0000 UTC]

Celestia VS Twilight

WildKnight VS AntiKnight

Rest of Mane 6 + Luna + Shining + Cadance VS Sombra


Background theme: m.youtube.com/watch?v=cvFoy7Hm…

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titanicdragon [2014-02-17 01:55:21 +0000 UTC]

whoa

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Twily469 [2014-01-06 01:58:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh...my...gosh....THIS IS SO BUCKING AWESOME

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masterbiff [2013-11-27 01:11:04 +0000 UTC]

There better make part 5

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Voltaradragoness [2013-10-17 16:51:35 +0000 UTC]

Me LOVE!!!

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kkgothgirl [2013-08-20 18:54:48 +0000 UTC]

oh wow im loving this so much  

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MsAestheticc [2013-06-30 05:31:40 +0000 UTC]

That's so awesome I love it's so amazingly evil! Lolz but nice job on it >:3

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midnightshadows2013 [2013-05-14 21:13:08 +0000 UTC]

OK this is my new account i was talking about . lol but it wouldn't let me use my email again.this is how much i love midnight shadow and king sombra. lol midnight shadows is my user.

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raggyrabbit94 In reply to midnightshadows2013 [2013-05-14 23:04:54 +0000 UTC]

aww, thank you, this means so much.
i didnt realise you like midnight shadow so much, glad i could inspire you. ^^
(i'm working on the next chapter soon)

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midnightshadows2013 In reply to raggyrabbit94 [2013-05-29 22:20:58 +0000 UTC]

well your welcome see i always a fan of sombra. and ok thats awesome keep up the good work.

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moxieteenz731 In reply to raggyrabbit94 [2013-05-19 02:05:59 +0000 UTC]

Well make it sooner my brother is getting antsy please make it fast before I have to dress up like Midnight Shadows...hurry!

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jingerthechiwawa [2013-05-14 20:55:06 +0000 UTC]

well im gonna make a new account ttyl

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jingerthechiwawa [2013-05-14 20:54:22 +0000 UTC]

this is soooooooooooooooo awesome!0.0 its toatly awesome please write more ?????????????? i love this.

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RPCcrystalsummer [2013-04-19 22:40:24 +0000 UTC]

this is just..wow....i wanna read so much more

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katherine-artgirl [2013-02-14 15:44:21 +0000 UTC]

amazing work, can't wait for the next part

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kiinastar [2013-02-02 20:20:07 +0000 UTC]

Poor Twilight!!!

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midnightshadows2013 In reply to kiinastar [2013-05-14 21:15:55 +0000 UTC]

Well i guess it is kinda sad for her. But her and king sombra are way awesome and cool together. sombra and midnight rule!lol

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kiinastar In reply to midnightshadows2013 [2013-05-16 19:10:20 +0000 UTC]

True, and they do make an interesting couple.

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midnightshadows2013 In reply to kiinastar [2013-05-29 22:22:57 +0000 UTC]

YES, YES THEY DO. lol srry caps

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kiinastar In reply to midnightshadows2013 [2013-05-31 16:25:30 +0000 UTC]


That's ok

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PrincessDragonSoul [2013-01-26 15:30:01 +0000 UTC]

Merp O_O. I need more its so awesome!!! Cant wait for the next one X3

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mesalo [2013-01-22 21:11:37 +0000 UTC]

Midnight Shadows... I like it, I can´t wait to the next part

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The-Midnight-Gothic [2013-01-22 08:05:01 +0000 UTC]

If any pony should be corrupted first it should be either Rarity or Shining Armor.

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Goosebumps-Fan57 [2013-01-20 05:08:46 +0000 UTC]

This is impressive to bad the chapters arn't longer i would love to read more ^^

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raggyrabbit94 In reply to Goosebumps-Fan57 [2013-01-20 05:21:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks, glad u like them. i'm kinda in a writers block, i'm not sure if i'll write more.

thanks for the fav.

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Goosebumps-Fan57 In reply to raggyrabbit94 [2013-01-20 08:28:05 +0000 UTC]

your welcome and if you don't want to write more that's fine, its a great base and maybe you could find someone to hand it off to or leave it and come back to it later. But it really sparks the imagination of what might have happened if things went differently.

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raggyrabbit94 In reply to Goosebumps-Fan57 [2013-01-20 09:37:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks, i think i'll come back to it later when i come up with something.
right now i am kinda working on a duet between sombra and twilight...i dont know anything bout songs but i love villain songs.

anyway, thanks so much glad you like it.

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Goosebumps-Fan57 In reply to raggyrabbit94 [2013-01-20 18:11:48 +0000 UTC]

and epic villain song sounds awesome!! and you are very welcome

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Dragondash98 [2013-01-16 00:42:51 +0000 UTC]

Also corrupt the other 5 make them like her guards or something just saying not original i know but i always like the idea of heroes having dark sides.

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raggyrabbit94 In reply to Dragondash98 [2013-01-17 09:30:37 +0000 UTC]

lol, sounds cool. right now i have abit of writers block. interesting suggestion.
glad u like my fan ic thingy

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Dragondash98 In reply to raggyrabbit94 [2013-01-17 12:21:50 +0000 UTC]

No prob.

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Dragondash98 [2013-01-10 02:42:27 +0000 UTC]

Shit just hit the fan and got real at the same time my friend!

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raggyrabbit94 In reply to Dragondash98 [2013-01-11 07:02:22 +0000 UTC]

lol, thanks.

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AngelMeerkat2 [2013-01-09 22:37:18 +0000 UTC]

Shit just got real.

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raggyrabbit94 In reply to AngelMeerkat2 [2013-01-11 07:01:34 +0000 UTC]

um, thanks... i think

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