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Ragnarok222 — First Tablet Drawing redo
Published: 2014-01-22 02:33:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 6242; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 9
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I worked off of the advice of couple of people gave me and fixed the most noticeable anatomical errors in the girl and reworked her shadow against the tree. If you see any please point them out, I want to get a little better before I start working on anything else I may upload.
Also I still haven't thought of a name for these two.
EDIT: Thanks to MiniBobini minibobini.deviantart.com/ I've got names for these two.
Sarrl is the snake, and the girl is name Kirsta
I'm off to start practicing.
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Do you plan on writing a story for these two?
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Yes! I've actually been writing a bit of it but hitting trouble with the dialouge.
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I'm glad to hear that you're writing a story about them. Do you plan on keeping it similar to what you originally planned?
Hitting some trouble with writing is a pain. I understand how that feels. However, I'm sure you'll overcome it. Would you like any help with that? I've never written a story like this, but I've written a fair number of stories before.
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It's pretty similar yeah. I've built on it and fleshed out their characters as I've had more time to come up with everything.
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I'm really excited to finally read this story. I've been looking for a potential story between these two ever since I first saw these drawings. Do you plan on maintaining the names for this? Do you have any idea when there might be a release date?
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The snake doesn't look too bad. A few of the bends in his body are a bit odd, but nothing too weird. The female 'victim' could use some work. Her arms feel a bit too long. Her face around her nose looks a bit odd.
Otherwise, the lines seem rough. Very edged, this is especially noticeable around her legs and the tree limbs.
If you want - try tracing a few things for practice. There's no shame in that. Get a feel for the movements of your tablet pen and how things should flow a bit better. Then once you've traced a couple of times and you got that feel down, try free-hand again and see how it turns out. Practice is everything.
You're on a good start. Keep practicing and continue share ^^.
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Nicely done. Looking forward to more with these two!
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Hey, whoa, I got mentioned in this comment! :'D I feel so special~
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