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Howdy folks!I'm currently working on some Gen13 sample pages for Wildstorm this week and didn't see the harm in posting them as I go. I am having SO much fun with these pages because I have been a BIG fan of Gen13 since issue #1 volume #1.
Here's the third and final page of the sample I'm doing. I was going to do 4, but have to catch up on my Marvel Masterpiece 3 Sketch Cards to hit my deadline. Besides, page 4 is just a massive explosion. No figures, just BOOM!...Hahaha. Hi-Res for this one is also available. Hope you guys have liked these so far. They have been a blast to do!
Later!
-Ray
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I'm gonna be honest these pages are cool but I think there are a few little mistakes that bug me with some of the hands.
I think you should practice drawing a lot more hands.
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Strong pencils and layouts. Taking new chances, I see.
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Very nice! I like your use of conflicting angles to get that sense of chaos and movement.
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Damn Ray I think this is my fav page out of all of them so far
I love it some of your best work so far
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wow! amazing! i must learn to draw hands as good as you do...i feel so ignorant
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Wow, this looks so awesome and well done.
Don't mean to disagree with the other poster up here, but I think this is starting to surpass Michael Turner. No disrespect to the man, God rest his soul, of course. Your style is a lot more fluid and felixible. You're sure to get the job!
That being said, I think you put a little more emotion in the faces. I think they look a tad flat, but that's just me. Why don't play around with some grins, meaner eyes, and such? Your style really lends to that.
Keep up the great work!
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Wow!! that is an awesome compliment! Thank you!
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LOL! He's a favorite of yours too? You're welcome.
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Wish I could take credit for adding Devin in there, bud....But she came with the sample script they gave me. Guess their doing something right over there
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I think the expression of the character in the last panel needs to be exaggerated a little bit more -- mostly the mouth. The details on the rest of the page are great though.
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I totally agree. Hell, that was my first notion, but I guess I got kinda psyched out and thought it would over do it. Hindsight is 20/20 I guess.
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It would totally help the facial expression 
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