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I'll post it here.....Damn, you know I love you guys too much!Related content
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be careful stacking your panels on the left. like you did in panels 2-4, it can confuse the read flow. otherwise nice work.
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Yeah, it's pretty bad IMHO. Honestly, I never liked the layout on the page. It's weak storytelling. The only thing I was satisfied with was the line work, really.
Thanks for the comment, though. It shows you know your stuff and I appreciate that a lot.
-Ray
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Good style, but kind of hard to read, as far as sequentials go that is
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hey... I like this paneling, is good, and the pencil-trace is very, very good.
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i like the drawing
check out my gallery
leave some criticism
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Now that's what I'm talkin' bout...Wicked Awesome Ray!
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Ciao! I'm very impressed by your arts, expecially the comic pages. See you soon...
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Couple of little perspective problems, but overall these are really strong man. Nice BG's, good spotting of blacks, good anatomy, and cool style!
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I love the art page. After looking at the sequentials I can say for sure you've added a touch of the "summer blockbuster" feel to your personal storytelling style. Considering some of our pass coversations though I thought you weren't into "Tech" people.
To add a comment from what AmericanNinjaX said earlier. From the last shot it reminds me of a 1/4 angle pan up of the main star (Villian this time around) from Terminator 2. From that angle he'd be pointing at roughly mid-sternum area. Lethal and painful. That's what Shocker has always been.
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i would love to paint all ur work ray-man!
this is dopee!
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ricochet? since wen does he have a solo title?
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More Ray goodness! So I take it we'll be seeing some Marvel work from you in '07.
- D
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NIce.. little issue with panel 6.. should Shocker be more in shadow? I think his being more revealed takes away from the power of panel 7. What think you, eh?
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ooooh is a great page ray!! is excellent!!
fav right now
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Great clean lines. Solid use of your black/dark areas. Be sure to not lose your page composition for the sake of your panel compositions. Hope that makes sense, and if not here's another way to put it--Establish your panel borders.
Damn this is amazing stuff, RA!
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too godly dude, cant wait till i see this finished
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it looks great. i cant find the right words so you must accept just such words like amazing, really damn cool or something else.
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way to pull though, man. looks sharper than chedda.
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now thats a page you can see alot of work in . great work
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That's how ya do business. Excellent work, and good luck!
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very nice work... and screw *AmericanNinjaX ... you can't say shit about that last frame, it's a great pose. maybe he is gonna shock some peepee!
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Damn Ray, really rockin it out with the sample work. Good luck to you mang! Just a thought before you submit though. The victim there is standing up, slouched but still standing. Then in the last panel shocker's in a hard core angle pointing down. So either he's gigantical or he's going to shock that dude's peepee.
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Really nice as always. I remember the slingers. Not sure why you aren't already doing Marvel work, other then the fact that only want realistic looking art. To me your style is far more acceptable to this medium then the realistic stuff they are trying to push down everyones throat. Good stuff bro. I hope you get a gig from it.
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Panel 1 and 2 I'm digging the most Ray great job.
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Wow, mighty impressive work here! Best of luck my friend, let us know how things turn out
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Amazing art work you got here, man?
If I was an editor at Marvel I'd be calling you up!
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thanks for sharing man! do you use any reference for your drawings? they're completely awesome to see
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oooooooohhhhhhh yes, it looks very good - the inker will have fun 
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hey!!! its spark man!!! hehehe.. i have just colored some pages with his appearance.. nice line art... i love it!!! hope you got its ink version so i could have a try coloring it... hehehe
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we love you tooooooo
very nice stuff
greets Soulrailer
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Rockin' the sequentials hard, man!
Love that last money shot of the Shocker.
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awesome work master‘‘‘‘‘ good luck‘‘‘‘‘‘‘‘‘‘‘‘
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holy molasses, sweet christmas, jumpin Jehosaphat, my stars and garters.....
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Kick Ass... I love Shocker(even if he could use a redesign)
Great Stuff. Did you do stuff for Mutants & Masterminds?
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i love your drawings.. have for quite some time. this one is by far the best to my eyes! the shading, combined with the fabulous linework and the individual faces of the character in such great detail just makes my jaw drop.
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Nice to see Shocker lookin' so bad. And by bad I mean rockin', not bad as in bad looking.
I don't think anyone would misunderstand me on that one, though!
Great work. One of my favorite Spidey villains!
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