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EshiSnu [2019-07-26 05:33:58 +0000 UTC]

Hi, I saw this in the Project Comment folder and I thought I would give you some feed back on this.

I think this is a neat looking creature design. It looks like it can be monster in a DnD world or a creature in a video game. It's design is versatile and I think it can work in lot of ways.

I don't know if you are familiar with Border Lands game but, this character kind of reminds me of the kangaroo dog like creatures you see roaming around in the open, throughout the game. I don't know if you know the game and if that had a influence on the design or if you had come up with this creature design from scratch but, it is a cool design non the less.

Your line work is really neat and clean. I don't see any eraser marks and smudges around the character.  You can see the crisp neat lines are all placed in the proper areas and connect where the are meant to. 

The proportions also look good. The size of this creature, I would imagine is somewhat on the smaller side? I think if it were "small sized" these proportion work to make the creature small and fast. Perhaps, even a creature that digs and burrows under ground?  The fun thing about designing a creature like this, is coming up with different looks and feature and figuring out what the creature can do and how it uses it's body.

I don't know if you have plans for colouring this but, I think you would have fun coming up with colour palettes for his. I think it would be interesting to see how this thing would look coloured. 

There one thing that I couldn't help notice about this, it looks like you took a picture of your drawing? It looks blurry or fuzzy. I don't know if you have a scanner or take photos of your art but, I would say either way, just make sure that your images are clear before your upload them. I think this is a cool looking picture but, the blurry look makes it hard to see.

Over all, I think you have a nice looking design for a creature here. I think it would look neat coloured in as well. 
Thank you for sharing your art.  Good luck on your future projects.

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JustALittleAmerican [2019-07-12 04:53:34 +0000 UTC]

Drawing is a little plain.
But the creature itself is still a cool idea. Makes me think of Ben ten.

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dudditsjan [2019-07-09 17:36:49 +0000 UTC]

глаз и т. д. рисунок очень живой и запоминающийся.

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dudditsjan [2019-07-09 17:30:41 +0000 UTC]

Всё великое начинается с малого. В этом маленьком эскизе, выполненном на небольшом листе бумаги, уже чувствуется желание  изобразить некое существо, которое передает авторскую мысль, и которая впоследствии творческих поисков, будет приобретать более совершенный, а может даже и реалистичный образ. Изображение выполнено на одном дыхании, ощущение передачи рисунка эскиза одной линией, притом у образа проявляется динамичность, ощущение, что существо задумалось, приостановившись в своем движении. Несмотря на несовершенство существа, отсутствие

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AbsolemJackdaw [2019-07-09 14:38:27 +0000 UTC]

Nice base. reminds me a bit of frogzards.
Lovely execution of pose and anatomy !

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