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abandon-ware [2019-03-31 13:17:13 +0000 UTC]

Hello I'm from , sliming's critique coming ! (Yeah sorry for this bad word playing...) :

I think it's better to begin with negative points for finish with good ones. So first that about the background, I see it's a minimalist artwork you did. I like this style too, but maybe it could be better to add a little something to give more personnality on your picture, maybe some assets in the same style and playing with more darker blue for playing with proportions. The second and last negative point, that about 2 details. I think it could be better to put eyes on the human, for the same style you can draw all in white with no iris. And on the left you have three slimes, the green in the middle could be a little more at right.

Well no that about good points ! It's colorfull and expressive ! Even it's a minimalist one, all slimes have their own expressions which give them a personnality. You made a good representation frow the original game. And also for the human, you put a lot of details on his clothes and I appreciate this. When we look your work, I would say it's cute and fresh and things like that can give energy. So in conclusion, you did a good job on your work. Just be carefull next time on some details like eyes and also for the background, good luck for yours next projects !

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Snowlily32 [2019-03-24 07:40:32 +0000 UTC]

Hello! Commenting from :

Man I've got to say ever since I got this game I've loved literally everything about, and your artwork basically highlights all of it! From the slimes to Beatrix herself, this piece basically encapsulates the whole game, and the style you drew it in is absolutely adorable! The simple background also helps highlight the slimes, and doesn't detract from the focus of the image. Great work! *( = v = )*

One thing which I noticed was that although most of the lines are drawn very well, there are some lines, most noticeably on the puddle slime, which seem a bit jagged, and not as smooth. This is an easy fix, as you can just touch up the lines to make them look more smooth. There are also a couple more lines which are a bit messy, which can be seen on the puddle slime again as well as Beatrix's belt. These are also easy fixes.

I would also like to say that although the slimes work very well in the simple style, by using this style on Beatrix it can make things a bit complicated. Since you didn't use lines, a lot of the details, especially the gun, are a bit ambiguous and a little hard to make out. One way that might help fix this could be to add a simple outline to her, like what you did with the slimes. This could help show off the details more, and can also make her stand out a bit more too, as right now she's kinda lost in the background. I'm not sure if that was what you were intending, but I guess it's just a suggestion for future reference.

All in all, this was an adorable piece, and I hope you keep up the good work!

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mrburns123 [2019-03-24 02:29:12 +0000 UTC]

Cute!

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LittleEvo [2019-03-07 09:05:26 +0000 UTC]

Great artwork for a great game!

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DemonicPirate [2019-03-06 00:39:32 +0000 UTC]

*screams* love this game
Very excellent piece 😁😁😁

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