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random-monkey — Never Let Go
Published: 2004-05-28 17:06:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 92; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Wars were fought,tears were shed.
Battles lost.
Emotions, dead.
Fun was had,
best of her life.
The time has come,
to say goodbye.
Although Franky,
you are free.
Inside her heart
is where you'll be.
Look on forward
to times ahead,
but still hold on
and don't forget.
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Comments: 5
hey that is damn good.
a. commenting on the photo (big mistake)
b. and you did a poem!
wau.
and i like the picture AND the poem. much.
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a) Hey now, the photo is yours - any credit here should be going to /you/
b) Heh, I did
I'm glad you liked it though
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I agree with you on most of the comments. However this is a "poem to a friend", and not really one "for the public". Sure I don't mind people reading it, and I wouldn't have submitted it if it was /only/ for Marjo. However the point in making it was for /her/, and the content within it, although it may be vague to everyone else, makes perfect sense to her (And I.). Cheers for the comments though. My poems can often take on structures like this, so I shall keep them in mind when I write more.
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you have some nice rhymes in there,thats a good poem i like how its short..you've done a good job making it effective
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I have a habit of making short poems in less than 30 minutes, but I'm quite pleased with this one, thanks for your comment.
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