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Published: 2004-03-28 01:37:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 110; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 18
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Description My overflowing shallowness
climbs beneath the depths
of incandescent darkness
to gather with the void // of blackened souls.

Your atheistic prayers
call silently toward on opening departure.
Seize this nowhere-journey.
Identity // conform.
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Comments: 11

earlbecke [2004-03-28 02:08:20 +0000 UTC]

This is cool! I don't have the attention span or motivation to do anything creative when I'm drunk... Although I'm sure the result would be interesting if I could manage.

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random-monkey In reply to earlbecke [2004-03-28 03:06:22 +0000 UTC]

Heh, I wasn't /that/ drunk to be honest, I'd only had 5 or 6...
I was sitting in my room alone too, so I had to find /something/ to keep me occupied, and without getting too innuendo..ish, I thought this would be a cool way.

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escapionist [2004-03-28 01:51:01 +0000 UTC]

i like, i think it's very deep and the preview pic is such a beau-ti-ful one and it was a join to click it!
i think drunkeness just increases some creative free-falling so that you (at least it is so which me) don't censorship your thoughts as much as you would sober.

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random-monkey In reply to escapionist [2004-03-28 03:01:40 +0000 UTC]

I think that's what it is, instead of being all sober and thinking "Hey, this is crap" you think "Holy monkeys, this shit is the bomb"

and when you're sober, you (atleast, I do) tend to go "What rhymes with cat? ... bat, cat, dat, e-att, fat... fat? ...
I once had a cat
He was very fat...

Next line? ... eeerm"

Hehe, whereas when you're drunk, it tends to flow more.

Maybe that's why poets are alcoholics (stereotypically)

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DokuHaku In reply to random-monkey [2004-04-21 07:19:54 +0000 UTC]

you are fucking outta control man GAH! I gotta watch you. Youre gonna be my seamonkey for a while. "Bat, cat, dat, e-at...." I shoulda peed myself. its a wonder i didnt. Seamonkey, amuse me.

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escapionist In reply to random-monkey [2004-03-28 11:36:20 +0000 UTC]

oh that is such adorable way to put it. i know a few different sort of "artists" indeed that have problems with subtances. when the problems are that bad, or are in the begiing, their work can be g-r-e-a-t. then later that starts to depress them that they can't do anything "on their own"

oh that very fat cat poem sounds like a masterpiece, work on that *i just recently woke up, don't judge*

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random-monkey In reply to escapionist [2004-03-28 11:41:02 +0000 UTC]

...

I once had a cat
He was very fat
He sat on the mat
OH NO! There's blades underneath!
Die kitty die.
Dead.
Alone.
Dark.

...

Hehe, gotta love it.

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escapionist In reply to random-monkey [2004-03-28 11:54:52 +0000 UTC]

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hidden8707 [2004-03-28 01:39:15 +0000 UTC]

lol, yep, that's a drunken piece alright. It was well-written though. Seems like it is saying a lot.

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random-monkey In reply to hidden8707 [2004-03-28 02:58:33 +0000 UTC]

Cheers hidden dude - I was rather dubious about wether this would work, especially with it being the first dev-poetry piece I've submitted. Maybe more shall come, who knows...

Thanks!

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hidden8707 In reply to random-monkey [2004-03-28 08:36:18 +0000 UTC]

Sure, try out some lyrics. Maybe next time, though, you should be sober. THAT would probably help out a lot

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