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Published: 2011-08-12 09:05:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1527; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 9
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Second to last page done
This took longer then it should have with a combination of procrastination, Minecraft, IT and the fact that I colour things better when I do it bit by bit |D. BUT it's done now.
Just one more page to go which has the big reveal.
I really like the top panels
but I really don't like how the final panel's background came out, it looks a bit off . Also perspective in that panel too.Credit goes to and for help with the panels and revising them
Kaden, Isabelle (c) Me
Fawns (c) people
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More please! Lol. I found one of these (not this one, I forgot which page) on TEFc, and just couldn't get enough. Glad I found it on here too! I love the second panel, that point of view is just awesome!
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Also do you mind linking me as to where you found it?
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...how did you find them on the Community Site? They aren't supposed to be on there (yet). I don't even visit that site anymore to put them there.
The only other place they're supposed to be is the TEF Forum.
I don't mean to sound mean, I'm just a bit concerned.
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Well, I looked through everything I went through before, and then some.. I don't see it anywhere. Sorry for the scare, I could have sworn I did see it on there though. I guess I was wrong. Again I am sorry.
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"And just to clarify, www.endlessforest.org <-- this is the community site, not the forum, yes?" Yeah you're right.
Ooh ok, thanks for having a re-check too. I'm relieved.
It's all good, don't worry about it. 8]
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Also, I MAY be mistaken.. I will look for it on TEFc, but I have my morning routine of going through TEFc and DeviantArt. I could have mixed up which site I saw it on..
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This one isn't on there, but I saw another one, I'll see if I can find it again. And just to clarify, www.endlessforest.org <-- this is the community site, not the forum, yes?
Also, don't worry about sounding mean. 
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Love it! Colpletely awesome (Yes, I have been following your comic XD)
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Waaah! I have to say I love the top panels too!! I'm a sucker for pretty skies... x3
Lol Minecraft is made of epic xD Procrastination ftw/ftl
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really good looking page, love the top panels with the sun and the moon. interesting perpective on the second panel. cute deer family!
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Ghost gave some pretty good tips.
I can't remember the input I gave... |D;; But I like how you pulled off the time change with the top panels.
And it's a small detail, but I love how the one fawn's head is turned like that. Gives it more life and makes it just that bit cuter. 8D
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Yeah 8]
|DDD 8D; I copied and pasted it all to a notepad file.
"D: mummy can we stop for icecream?" |D *shot*
O: I was wondering if I should crop, copy and paste that middle panel out and then submit it separate 8o since I've seen some comic artist do that on here. People seem to like that panel
8] thanks for faving
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Oh yea, I remember now. |D Only thing I could recall before was not knowing how to show time passing on this page. |D
Post it separate if you want to.
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|D I spent a bit of time trying to decide on it, Trinket ended up giving input too |B
Hmmmm, I think I might at the end. When I post up the "behind the scenes" >_> <_< >_>
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Which is why it's good to get input from multiple people. 8D
That works too.
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I really like this page. Nicely executed. As for your concern about the last panel's perspective, I think that has to do with this softness of the ground. The closer objects are, the more detail. The further away, the softer they tend to be. Some of the foliage also seems to be "floating" since the surrounding grass appears much softer. That's the only reason I can see that would make it seem off.
BTW, I love the middle panel. I can actually hear them walking.
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Oh ok, that makes sense. Although I dunno how you'd detail the TEF forest floor, or moss XD. I'd have to look up pictures of it.
Thanks for the tips 
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Come to think about it, TEF floor never had too much detail. Then again, my settings were probably on the low side.
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Yeah, the floor isn't too detailed, even with graphics set at max. The things that get toned down are the grasses, trees, leaves, plants etc. The floor seems to stay the same.
Quamar and I used to turn it all down and play "The Endless Desert" XD
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