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The second chapter begins! Chapter 1 was rather short chapter 2 will be longer.

Well not much to say about it as you can read everything there is to know. This page took long though... I really didn't feel like drawing the past several days but now I feel like it again

I really hope you'll like this page If you have any questions or critique please feel free to ask or tell I really love to write but I know I'm still very amateurish and English isn't my first language so I'm sure I can improve in a lot of ways.

Story, characters & drawings: Me ~paardjee
Reference panel 1: [link] by: *ChildOfAtlas
Reference panel 2: [link] by: *Chunga-Stock
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Comments: 50

Skerppla [2012-12-25 19:28:06 +0000 UTC]

asdfghjkl I really like dis story! Ā°uĀ°

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Paardjee In reply to Skerppla [2012-12-25 22:34:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!
I hope to make a new page either this or next month c:

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Skerppla In reply to Paardjee [2012-12-25 22:38:55 +0000 UTC]

ohhhh I very much hopes so!
It's an incredible story! I couldn't stop reading till there was no more to read actually xP

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Paardjee In reply to Skerppla [2012-12-25 22:43:05 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it's been on the backburner for a long time but I plan on finishing this thing.... sometime.... xD It's a very long story that I only have the first 4 chapters written of

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Skerppla In reply to Paardjee [2012-12-25 22:47:43 +0000 UTC]

I like the sound of that. It seems I have a lot looking forward too
I can't wait! I hope you find the powers to fight your way trough the story and end it
with a gooooood ending haha

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Sumarr [2011-10-17 23:29:07 +0000 UTC]

great story! i like the mysterious stallion!

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Paardjee In reply to Sumarr [2011-10-17 23:58:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!
I'll submit the next 3 pages to the group tommorrow

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Sumarr In reply to Paardjee [2011-10-17 23:59:02 +0000 UTC]

whoo hoo! can't wait!

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KeleeWarren [2011-09-28 14:11:23 +0000 UTC]

recalicitrantly?

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Paardjee In reply to KeleeWarren [2011-09-28 14:34:49 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I wasn't too sure about that word
I didn't want to go with reluctantly again so I tought I'd use recalicitrant which means pretty much the same but I guess you can't make recalicitrantly from that xD
Remember, my first language is Dutch ^^

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KeleeWarren In reply to Paardjee [2011-09-28 15:23:49 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I remember, that's why I was like... I wonder if that is supposed to be a different word altogether... but I looked it up after XD

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dandyhorse [2011-02-10 15:02:58 +0000 UTC]

dawww new page! And very cool as always I think the is the best page!

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Paardjee In reply to dandyhorse [2011-02-10 15:51:41 +0000 UTC]

Yay for new page
Thank you very much dearie I'm glad you like it!

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dandyhorse In reply to Paardjee [2011-02-10 17:20:44 +0000 UTC]

I want that! Your welcome

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Chunga-Stock [2011-02-09 13:37:15 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful as always! Thankyou so much for using my stock

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Paardjee In reply to Chunga-Stock [2011-02-09 13:39:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! And no problem your stock is always so useful!

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skikkie94 [2011-02-08 20:29:38 +0000 UTC]

Goed!!! Wel proberen, hoor! Je schrijft hartstikke goed! En dan ook nog eens in het Engels! Super!

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Paardjee In reply to skikkie94 [2011-02-08 20:51:20 +0000 UTC]

Ik ga het zeker proberen En nogmaals bedankt!

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mona1995xx [2011-02-08 17:28:58 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! nieuwe pagina! En zo leuk beschreven En die tekeningen zijn erg mooi geworden vooral de tweede kan niet wachten wat er verder gaat gebeuren

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Paardjee In reply to mona1995xx [2011-02-08 20:08:11 +0000 UTC]

Jeej! Ik ben blij dat je het leuk en mooi vind Bedankt voor je lieve comment!

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mona1995xx In reply to Paardjee [2011-02-09 16:08:34 +0000 UTC]

Graag gedaan!

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Britsykitty [2011-02-07 22:54:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh I absolutely hate thunder and lightning as well. I go into panic mode and hide.

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Paardjee In reply to Britsykitty [2011-02-07 23:02:27 +0000 UTC]

Thunder is indeed very scary! I hide in my bed.

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HowlingWhiteRose [2011-02-07 22:15:03 +0000 UTC]

Aw man, I can totally relate to her fear of thunderstorms XD

Thunder is scary I mean, the lightning is really neat, but I HATE the thunder

N-e-who, I can't wait for the next page

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Paardjee In reply to HowlingWhiteRose [2011-02-07 22:46:07 +0000 UTC]

Her fear of thunder is actually based on my own fear of thunder so I gues we can both relate to her I hate the thunder I always hide in my bed when I hear it.

Next page will take a little while as I feel like I'm neglecting my other charries so I'm gonna draw a few of them before starting the next page

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skikkie94 [2011-02-07 19:14:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow, mooi bedacht! Ben je van plan om een compleet boek te maken over Sinta? Wow, wat goed!

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Paardjee In reply to skikkie94 [2011-02-07 21:34:42 +0000 UTC]

Dankjewel!
Het is inderdaad de bedoeling maar ik denk niet dat het me gaat lukken om 200 pagina's vol te schrijven Ik ga het wel proberen ^^

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Ister [2011-02-07 16:21:04 +0000 UTC]

En weer pakt het mn adem weg... Heb het al gezegd maar ik vind het echt geweldig wat je hier doet. Alweer, prachtig!

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Paardjee In reply to Ister [2011-02-07 16:56:37 +0000 UTC]

Wow heel erg bedankt!
Ik ben heel blij dat je het zo goed vind

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Ister In reply to Paardjee [2011-02-07 17:12:46 +0000 UTC]

je verdient het

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SomersetRaven [2011-02-07 15:38:27 +0000 UTC]

Oooh... I wonder who the voice belongs too... Love it so far though

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Paardjee In reply to SomersetRaven [2011-02-07 16:03:53 +0000 UTC]

You'll have to wait till the next page to find out
And thank you very much!

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SomersetRaven In reply to Paardjee [2011-02-07 16:44:46 +0000 UTC]


You're very welcome

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jannaphia [2011-02-07 15:29:01 +0000 UTC]

yay, new page I wonder what happens next...
and I love her pose in the upper picture

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Paardjee In reply to jannaphia [2011-02-07 15:47:05 +0000 UTC]

Yay! You shall have to wonder a bit longer
And thank you very much!

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jannaphia In reply to Paardjee [2011-02-07 15:47:50 +0000 UTC]

xD
welcome

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DikkeBobby [2011-02-07 06:32:15 +0000 UTC]

I love it echt leuk verhaal

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Paardjee In reply to DikkeBobby [2011-02-07 11:11:04 +0000 UTC]

Dankjewel! Ik ben blij dat je het nog steeds leuk vind

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DikkeBobby In reply to Paardjee [2011-02-07 17:29:21 +0000 UTC]

geen probleem je schrijft echt goed

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Rorelse [2011-02-07 04:21:27 +0000 UTC]

Yay for great new page! Sounds sooooo good so far, can't wait to read more!

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Paardjee In reply to Rorelse [2011-02-07 11:10:46 +0000 UTC]


Thank you so much hun! I'm really glad you like reading it

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BloodBriar [2011-02-07 00:48:45 +0000 UTC]

ugh sorry for posting twice blame it on the pc he he

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Paardjee In reply to BloodBriar [2011-02-07 00:56:35 +0000 UTC]

No problem I have that too sometimes

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BloodBriar In reply to Paardjee [2011-02-07 01:02:50 +0000 UTC]

he he

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BloodBriar [2011-02-07 00:48:26 +0000 UTC]

Yay!!!another page cant wait for the next one now lol i love it so far one of the best

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BloodBriar [2011-02-07 00:48:24 +0000 UTC]

Yay!!!another page cant wait for the next one now lol i love it so far one of the best

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Paardjee In reply to BloodBriar [2011-02-07 00:56:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it! The next page will be better, in my opinion at least xD But I'm gonna draw a few other charries of mine before starting on the next page

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BloodBriar In reply to Paardjee [2011-02-07 01:03:48 +0000 UTC]

i have been waiting for more art from you for a while so i will be glad to see them

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Paardjee In reply to BloodBriar [2011-02-07 11:35:53 +0000 UTC]

It probably won't be long till my net drawing cause have 3 days off from school

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BloodBriar In reply to Paardjee [2011-02-07 23:29:21 +0000 UTC]

YAY! i will glady look out for them

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