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Raspberry-Heaven — Naruto: Don't, Won't, Can't
Published: 2005-05-11 12:45:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 2564; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 41
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Description A blonde boy sat beside his team-mate, hands behind his head, casually looking upwards. Suddenly, he spoke up with a rather odd question.

"What would you do if I cried?"

"... You don't cry."

The blonde glanced at his friend, his black eyes emotionless in contrast to his blue.

"What would you do if I died?"

"... You won't die."

The blonde gave up, and with a shrug, turned over on his side. The next question was meant for himself. The black-haired boy wasn't even meant to hear it.

"What would you do if I left?"

The fox-boy was almost sure that his friend didn't hear him, because he did not respond. The blonde fiddled with a blade of grass in between his fingers.

Suddenly the shinobi felt a small weight on his arm. He looked up to find a familiar hand gripping his shoulder. A slight look of concern flashed through the normally stoic boy's eyes.

"You can't leave."
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Comments: 29

NitrogenFixation [2009-12-11 19:22:18 +0000 UTC]

I lost the game. >.<

AWW! While I'm not actually a big fan of SasuNaru as a romantic pairing (I have read it from time to time), I love strong friendship/brotherly love between them, and write it myself when I get inspiration (and even then some of mine can be interpreted as SasuNaru). Very nice. It's simple but very emotional, and can be interpreted either way. I like ambiguity. XD Good job!

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kirikazu In reply to NitrogenFixation [2010-06-10 14:49:36 +0000 UTC]

DDDDDDDDDOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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RATHS-JCv [2009-12-09 18:05:30 +0000 UTC]

<3 it!!!!!!!!!!
Ur words have a funny affect on me :/ First time i read thisd i nearly cried XD
but it was 1 in the mornig soo....

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LadyRWidow [2009-07-12 19:54:37 +0000 UTC]

so good! Continue please!

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doublechocolate [2008-08-19 10:55:50 +0000 UTC]

cutey cute cute goooooooooooooooooooooooo SASUKE!!

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AnyaFrib [2007-02-03 15:38:17 +0000 UTC]

I like it its cute!

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xxmistressketaxx [2006-02-01 05:18:14 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, ok I'm not able to write the 'w' the whole time. I think you understand though ne?
I love it! Even if it's short, it's touches the middle of the heart. ^^

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Puu-Puu-chan [2005-05-19 01:20:07 +0000 UTC]

Awww

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isis-amataeru [2005-05-12 00:08:45 +0000 UTC]

So short and simple but so very meaningful. You really have that talent with words, you can play with them and weave them into a simple conversation between two boys and make it really heart warming. It's so very sweet. Omg, why do I always feel so very weird when I read your fanfics and see your artwork *_* I really like how Sasuke just simply refrained his answers based upon the questions but I guess that's why it makes it all the meaningful. awesome work! omg I feel like a mother lol me so proud of ya!

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to isis-amataeru [2005-05-12 00:16:32 +0000 UTC]

Heheh. I thought it kind of stunk when I first read it, but it grew on me. And it's weird. Y'know when you said that you feel weird when you read my fanficts or look at my art? Gyakuten said the same thing. On this same fic. O.o I geuss I have that effect on people (Hope that's a good thing...)

*glances at last sentence*

"omg I feel like a mother lol me so proud of ya!"

...

MOMMY!



Ahhh, bad joke, sorry XD

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isis-amataeru In reply to Raspberry-Heaven [2005-05-12 00:38:33 +0000 UTC]

LOL XDD it's okay

well it does! You are like the numero fanfictress in DA for meh~!

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to isis-amataeru [2005-05-12 00:41:55 +0000 UTC]

*eyes water up* R-really?

*sniffle*

*insert sunset-backround*

UWAAAAH!

GAI SENSEI!!!

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isis-amataeru In reply to Raspberry-Heaven [2005-05-12 01:43:36 +0000 UTC]

BEAR HUG!!! XDDD

Lee: O_O ehhh?

Gai:

sorry couldn't resist!

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to isis-amataeru [2005-05-12 22:04:30 +0000 UTC]

Lee: Gai sensei, they're stealing our bit!

Gai: It's the explostion of youth, lee!

Lee&Gai: GOOD GUY POSE!

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isis-amataeru In reply to Raspberry-Heaven [2005-05-14 15:11:29 +0000 UTC]

XDDDD yay!

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yaoi101 [2005-05-11 23:15:27 +0000 UTC]

WAI!!! you made me grin real big again^_^ You have a habit of doing that. This is just too damn cute to not make you grin.

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to yaoi101 [2005-05-12 00:18:15 +0000 UTC]

Heehee. That does happen a lot, I noticed. Judging by people's comments and stuff.

Thank you very much. ^___^

(Although I tend to smile a lot when I read comments like this. So we're even!)

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yaoi101 In reply to Raspberry-Heaven [2005-05-12 03:46:49 +0000 UTC]

yaya!!! even!!!

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SangoChan56 [2005-05-11 21:20:43 +0000 UTC]

as short as that was it was SUPER good Just like verything else of your works !!!!!

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to SangoChan56 [2005-05-11 21:49:59 +0000 UTC]

*chuckle* You're embarrassing meeeeeee XD XD XD I'm grinning even as I write this. ^__^

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CeeKari [2005-05-11 21:18:42 +0000 UTC]

Aww, that is cute! Good work!

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to CeeKari [2005-05-11 21:50:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

And I saw some stuff in your gallery, it's nice ^___^

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CeeKari In reply to Raspberry-Heaven [2005-05-12 02:19:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^_^ Hey, mid if I watch you?

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to CeeKari [2005-05-12 22:03:14 +0000 UTC]

No, I don't mind at all!

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UsagiPrince [2005-05-11 18:55:23 +0000 UTC]

Uwaaaa~~~~~!! <333333 >w< Kawaii!!

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ZelgadisG [2005-05-11 17:15:44 +0000 UTC]

That's a sweet! It's all like awwww! And then ooooo and then AWWWW~1!!

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to ZelgadisG [2005-05-11 21:58:32 +0000 UTC]

*nods solemnly* words of wisdom.

...

XD

*snickers... not so solemnly*

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gyakuten [2005-05-11 13:37:57 +0000 UTC]

>_> why does you art and story and words have this weird effect on me? that's effin sweet. that's really cute. you can consider the shounen ai just really strong friendship though >_< which is great, but stuff like kissing is great too ._.''.

sounds familiar to that little quote i remember..? uhmm when the girl was speaking to her boyfriend asking him question and he would always answer like he didnt care but then when she said she hated him, he pulled her back and told her that her the answers in a more specific way. Really sweet. Like when she asked him if she liked him, he said no. but then he told her 'he didnt like her. he LOVED her.'
ah well what's this babble i'm going on about?!

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to gyakuten [2005-05-11 20:23:07 +0000 UTC]

I've never read that fic before. It sounds cute. And I geuss it is more of a strong friendship, you're right. ^__^;;

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