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Raspberry-Heaven — Naruto: Flying without wings
Published: 2005-05-02 02:21:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 4269; Favourites: 68; Downloads: 38
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Description It felt like there was darkness all around him. He didn't know where he was going, what he was doing. All he could do was keep running. What was happening? Where was he? And why was it so dark? There was no sign of anything familiar. He started to call out, though he didn't know why, "his" name. Maybe hoping in the back of his mind that he would come and save him.

"NARUTO!" The scream seemed to fade instantly. There was no echo.

He collapsed on to what must have been the ground. He couldn't tell. The black-haired boy started to shiver. It seemed too cold.

"I wish you were here..." He murmured, tears trailing down his face. "I wish you were here..."

He glanced up, his vision blurred by tears. He saw a small light, far off in the distance. Sasuke stayed put, it seemed to be coming towards him. In a blinding flash, a figure appeared in front of him. His blonde hair was curtaining a small part of his face. His eyes were filled with empathy, a sad smile on his face.

"Don't cry, Sasuke..." He whispered, and wrapped his arms around him. "I'm here."

Sasuke's eyes widened. It all felt so real, so authentic. But it couldn't be. Naruto was... he was dead. Wasn't he?

"Naruto..." He said, completely shocked. "Are you... Are you alive?"

Sadly, Naruto shook his head. And then, Sasuke saw them. Behind Naruto were billowing, beautiful wings. Feathers flowed upon him, throughout his wingspan. A small, circular halo was hovering above his head. He was an angel. The angel Sasuke always knew him to be.

"But Sasuke, I wanted to see you. And the only way I can is... Well, is through your dreams." Naruto explained. He smiled, holding him closer. "I'm so sorry... You've been suffering, haven't you?" He whispered soothingly in his ear. "I'm so sorry, Sasuke."

His eyes were so deep, so emotional. It was too much. Sasuke burst into tears.

He buried his face in Naruto's chest and cried. "Why... Why did you leave? I needed you. I still need you...!" He sobbed, clutching Naruto like a lifeline. "It's all my fault, if I was stronger you-"

Naruto put a finger on Sasuke's lips, silencing him. He placed a hand on Sasuke's cheek, wiping the tears away with his thumb. "It's not your fault, Sasuke. It's not anyone's fault. It's just the way things happened."

"B-but..." Sasuke stammered, breathing becoming more erratic, "I- I didn't want you to go..."

"I know," Naruto whispered, "I know."

"Will I see you again?" Sasuke whispered, arms wrapped even tighter around the blonde.

Naruto nodded. "I will always be there for you in your dreams. Just call for me."

The raven-haired boy smiled. "You could be here often."

Naruto entwined his hand in Sasuke's and said, "I don't mind."

Naruto reached into his pocket and finally found what he was looking for. He pulled out a small gold ring, and said, "Keep this. Think of it as a promise to each other, until I can truly see you again." He placed it in Sasuke's palm, and said, "I'll be seeing you... Sasuke."



Sasuke woke up suddenly, heart racing. What kind of a dream was that? It felt so real. His eyes darkened. He would be stupid to believe that. It was only a dream. He placed a hand on his face, trying to remember what had happened, when he felt something cool and metallic on his finger. His eyes widened in shock. He pulled off the ring, to make sure it was real. Someting, however, caught his attention. There was a small engraving on the inside of the ring that read:

"I promise."

Many years later...

"It's such a shame."

"Well, he was well into his old age."

"How old was he, anyway?"

"Hmm... I think he turned around 80 or so when he died."

"That long..."

"Well, it is Sasuke, after all."

"Of course. Is it true that he never married?"

Dozens had gathered at the funeral of Sasuke Uchiha. Some old friends, but others of which had passed on. Some only villagers who barely knew him were crying at his ceremony. Some were only there out of respect for his old honered clan. He was the last of the Uchiha. They mourned the death of a fallen and honored warrior.

Far above, as far as anyone could geuss, there was a figure in the clouds. He was a young man, no older than nineteen. The feathers on his wings tickled his cheeks, his halo glinting in the sunlight. He sat cross-legged, looking down from the skies, as if he was waiting for someone. The boy's blue eyes were intent, and he seemed somewhat impatient. All of a sudden, his face brightened, happier than he had ever been. In the distance, there was another man, much, much older coming towards him. His hair was grayed with age, his face wrinkled. But for some reason, the boy recognized him, flying into his embrace.

And then, what you might call a miracle occured. The man seemed to be going back in time. His fair skin was smoothed. His hair regained it's familiar jet-black hue. Now, he seemed to be no older than the blonde, though he was slightly taller. He encircled his arms around the young man before him.

And there was only one thing he could say then.

"I missed you."

And in each other's arms, they would cry.

You're the place my life begins,
And you'll be where it ends.
I'm flying without wings.
And that's the joy it brings,
I'm flying without wings.
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Comments: 31

Wolfstarlo12 [2012-04-20 16:49:00 +0000 UTC]

Extremely sad

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redbluepurplesilver [2011-05-05 02:26:23 +0000 UTC]

Why are u doing this to us????? This is beautiful and awesome, but so sad!!!!!!!!!

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juarezmaiya [2011-04-20 02:26:50 +0000 UTC]

so...flipping...sad.

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kirikazu [2010-06-10 14:19:33 +0000 UTC]

perfection thats all i can say...well i guess thats it i love your story ...i love the ending thought. i love all of your writing ^^ keep writing please

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LadyRWidow [2009-07-12 19:17:13 +0000 UTC]

I loved it! In your story how did Naruto die anyway?

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kirikazu In reply to LadyRWidow [2010-06-10 14:21:42 +0000 UTC]

he self destucted to kill orochimaru. He let out all of the kyuubi's energy at once thus....destroying his foe and losing his life in the process ,...i am not the writer but theres you answer

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hinatakaname [2009-06-10 11:52:54 +0000 UTC]

it was great... altrough i like better sasu hina.or sasu saku....

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kirikazu In reply to hinatakaname [2010-06-10 14:24:47 +0000 UTC]

no affense but sasuhina? now where does that show up in the story at all...dude...the are pretty good though..but still..and i dont really like sakura but sasusakus are pretty good.and so far sakura is (a whore) switching between men

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hinatakaname In reply to kirikazu [2010-06-10 17:19:28 +0000 UTC]

I said i LIKE IT BETTER.
How about read my comment twice before you say something?

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kirikazu In reply to hinatakaname [2010-06-10 22:36:19 +0000 UTC]

SPEAK FOR YOURSELF JACKASS I SAID I LIKED THEM TOO NOW LISTEN SHERLOCK I NEVER SAID SOMETHING WAS FRICKIN WRONGE WITH WHAT YOU LIKE I JUST DONT KNOW WHERE PEOPLE GOT THE SASUHINA ONES AND BY THE FRICKIN WAY I HAPPEN TO LOVE THOSE! SO NEXT TIME YELL AT SOMEONE FOR SOMETHING THEY DID OR MAKE SURE YOU DIDN'T MAKE THE SAME DAMN MISTAKE!on a different note(im adhd) i dont kno whitch one i prefer more sasuhina or sasusaku which do you like? ^-^

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swordbunny4486 [2008-01-10 06:16:20 +0000 UTC]

beautiful!* applauds*

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AngelOfDiscord [2007-07-03 07:14:31 +0000 UTC]

I love you stories, the are so sweet, You've inspired me to write of an old memory that tugs at the heart

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Isadaliana [2007-04-24 11:48:20 +0000 UTC]

Wow you're soooo good not everybody can pull off writing sad fics but you're really good. Thank you! It was a pleasure reading your work!

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Sha-chan69 [2007-03-08 00:47:03 +0000 UTC]

GAH!!! how do you write something so sad!!! T_T i think i was tearing!!! I LOVE IT IT WAS SO CUTE!!!
poah Naru-chan!!!

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gummy-bear-power [2007-02-11 13:43:47 +0000 UTC]

wow........ i've been in a big angsty mess with a "friend" and was in the mood to indulge in some well written angst. these were just perfect.

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YinKiraraYan [2006-06-22 14:55:21 +0000 UTC]

wow... I readed all three.. your amazing...
this was so sweet...
and the two angst pieces..I cried... thank you.

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to YinKiraraYan [2006-06-22 20:07:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank YOU! ^_^

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SessKagluvr [2006-02-26 01:19:27 +0000 UTC]

5 stars! It was so sad. I LOVE SasuNaru!

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to SessKagluvr [2006-02-26 02:05:32 +0000 UTC]

*laugh* Thank you!

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SessKagluvr In reply to Raspberry-Heaven [2006-02-26 03:11:22 +0000 UTC]

Youuuuuuuuu are welcome!

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xxmistressketaxx [2006-02-01 05:30:59 +0000 UTC]

ok....*sniffle* I read the other two as well. The first one made me sniff a bunch but the 2nd made me cry and this one just made me burst. DAMN YOUR IMAGINATION! I love'em to death. gah death X.X
m(-.-)m

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Sakura-Tora [2005-11-08 06:50:12 +0000 UTC]

(I just read the first comment posted here. Deathfics rock!)
Ya know what's funny about anime? I can never imagin the younge characters of anime to grow old... or at least grow up. I can only imagin them to grow younger.

That's so sweet, Naruto and Sasuke are reunited! (I'm more into depressed endings though, no offence, but still awesome story!) lmao. I can imagin Naruto as an angel, waiting for Sasuke to come up to heaven.

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Puu-Puu-chan [2005-06-23 18:17:40 +0000 UTC]

O....M...G!!!
That...was...The best....thing....ever...
i never did like "happy ends"...but..that was so cute..and sweet....made me...wanna...cry.....
plzz dont make fun of me!))

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to Puu-Puu-chan [2005-06-23 18:26:22 +0000 UTC]

Ah, why would I make fun of you? XD Thank ya muchly.

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Puu-Puu-chan In reply to Raspberry-Heaven [2005-06-23 18:27:59 +0000 UTC]

OO yay...most people would...your welcome....it was so sweet

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UsagiPrince [2005-05-03 03:49:52 +0000 UTC]

Kawaii!! So good! I'm so glad it was a happy ending this time! Tho I still cried! xD I'm such a sad individual--what can I say, I have a secret sensitive side under all the blood and gore. You're so good at doing songfics! ^__^

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isis-amataeru [2005-05-03 02:10:59 +0000 UTC]

aww that's beautiful. *sniff* Such a creative way to end a story, with the awesome touch of Naruto as an angel, and the ending is great. Finally Sasuke isn't hurting anymore and can join his beloved. Hard to find a story I can really get into that isn't humorous and just randomness, death fics have this effect on me too tho. I totally love this series, you really captured the pain of loss and make the reader feel the emotions and actually be there. ^^ Great work Raspberry-chan~!

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to isis-amataeru [2005-05-03 02:54:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm a bit of a sap for a happy ending, though I have mentioned that before. I just couldn't stand to leave the "Tears in Heaven" and "My Immortal" fics alone. And the way I came up with it was I wanted to make a sequel anyway... And then this commercial with the song "Flying without wings" Came on... And the rest is history. ^___^;;;;

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isis-amataeru In reply to Raspberry-Heaven [2005-05-04 00:59:07 +0000 UTC]

Ur welcome~! yes and that sequel totally wrapped up the story beautifully ^^

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gyakuten [2005-05-02 03:42:11 +0000 UTC]

THAT'S STILL SAD! >_> Do you just like writing Death-Fics or what ._.'' Really sad, with a tinge of happiness, really touching :], your stories always make me depressed *sigh* in a good way I mean u_u;; it's really rare that a story affects me this much x_x.

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to gyakuten [2005-05-02 11:30:32 +0000 UTC]

Well, I geuss I do kinda like writing deathfics, heheh. But I will try and make stuff happier in the future. I just thought "Tears in Heaven" wasn't developed enough. To me, it screamed "SEQUEL!" and... erm, a third sequel, too, apparently, but that's besides the point. I'm finally done with the story. XD Woot. Thank you!

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