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Raspberry-Heaven — Naruto: Tears in Heaven
Published: 2005-03-02 03:36:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 6514; Favourites: 115; Downloads: 41
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Description A crack of thunder cascaded throughout the land, and a lonely boy felt water trail down the back of his neck.

'The rain is falling, Naruto. The tears of thousands of angels are sweeping the earth... Cleansing it of it's sins...'

(Would you know my name,
If I saw you in heaven?
Would it be the same,
If I saw you in heaven?)

Sasuke Uchiha, hands dug deep into his pockets for warmth, waited. He wasn't sure for what. All he knew was what was around him at that one moment. For in front of him, there was something he knew should not be. There was simply no sense in it. There was a simplistic gravestone, nothing spectacular, nothing unique. And yet, the stoic boy could not take his eyes off the sight. For it was not the stone itself, but what was carved within it.

Naruto Uzumaki
Died: Age 19
"No longer a demon."

'Idiots.' Sasuke thought, bitterly clenching his fists tighter. 'He was never your demon in the first place... He was just Naruto... That's all...'

"Hey, Naruto..." Sasuke said, his voice barely above a whisper, "Are you crying, Naruto? Is that what this rain is?"

He fell to his knees, suddenly feeling terribly weak. Sasuke leaned his head back, letting raindrops fall onto his eyelids. He let his head level, and the raindrops trailed down his face. "I can't cry on my own anymore, Naruto. I'm sorry, but..." He paused, and let more raindrops fall down his cheeks, resembling tears. "You're gonna have to cry for me now."

(I must be strong,
And carry on,
'Coz I know, I don't belong
Here in heaven.)

"I remember, Naruto, the day you.. you gave your life. For all of us. For everyone," He said, his voice giving an involuntary choke."And... And I wish I could forget it. But... at the same time, I don't. It's almost as if, if I don't keep that one memory of you, then you'll fade away completely." Sasuke paused, and let out a deep, shuddering breath. "I don't want that."

*Flashback*

"Naruto!" Sasuke screamed, voice hoarse and wracked with pain.

The images were swirling into focus now. Naruto was standing, hanging by a thread. Blood covered his entire body, swirling down cuts in his neck, his arms, his torso. Orochimaru only laughed. The blonde's breathing had become ragged and labored. He turned his head around, and let a bitter smile bloom across his face.

"Hey, Sasuke..." He said, clutching his heart. Crimson poured through his hands, onto the ground. A puddle surrounding him became larger with every drop he shed. "T-tell them I'm sorry, okay? Everyone..."

(Would you hold my hand,
If I saw you in heaven?
Would you help me stand,
If I saw you in heaven?)

Naruto turned to face the opposer, and said, "Even if I can't have my dream, then... then maybe I can protect the dreams of everyone else. Maybe that's just as good as getting my own dream."

And Naruto, straining to lift his arms, performed a series of seals Sasuke could not recognize.

And as quickly as Naruto said 'Goodbye,' a blinding light came from his body. As Sasuke helplessly watched, he saw the forms in front of him die. Naruto's suicidal move, bringing out all the powers of the Kyuubi at once. The power, however, is enough to overwhelm the body, causing an inevitable death. Sasuke stepped towards the body of his fallen comrade, and fell to his knees.

(I'll find my way,
Through night and day,
'Coz I know I just can't stay
Here in heaven.)

"Naurto..."

For the first time in years, Sasuke Uchiha cried.

During the funeral, so many of the adults in the villiage solemnly apologized for thier behavior towards the fallen shinobi. After the first few, Sasuke snapped. He, showing emotion like he had not in weeks, shouted only one thing, and ran away.

(Time can bring you down
Time can bend your knees
Time can break your heart
Leave you begging please)

"WHY DID YOU ONLY CARE FOR HIM IN HIS DEATH?!"

(Beyond the door,
There's peace I'm sure
'Coz I know they'll be no more
Tears in heaven)

And while he ran, Sasuke swore he heard the wind whisper, "Thank you."

(Would you know my name,
If I saw you in heaven?
Would it be the same,
If I saw you in heaven?)

*end flashback*

"Naruto... You were never a demon. But you were a dobe..." Sasuke said, and reached into his pocket. Inside was a small, simple flower. A white rose, representing purity. Wilted and wrinkled from being inside of his pocket, it wasn't much to look at. Sasuke placed it on the grave of his fallen friend, and smiled.

"Goodbye, Naruto. I hope you won't have any more tears in heaven," He choked out, a lumo in his throat.

Sasuke didn't need the rain to cry for him then.

(I must be strong,
And carry on
'Coz I know, I don't belong
Here in heaven)

('Coz I know, I don't belong
Here in heaven.)
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Comments: 39

lizupton1988 [2017-06-22 04:12:03 +0000 UTC]

I loved this!

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dmorgan123 [2015-07-31 07:17:12 +0000 UTC]

Yes,this was good,did you know Clapton wrote this song for his son
who died young from a fall.

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karashe [2014-07-18 22:15:29 +0000 UTC]

really sad but still good, i like it

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nightfury150 [2014-06-16 22:28:37 +0000 UTC]

No fanfics make me cry. REPEAT: NONE.

But this one did.

I cried so much.

So dam much.

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Tofu-samurai [2010-11-21 00:31:47 +0000 UTC]

This is an amazing peice here. Very sad, but at the same time inspirational. It displays sorrow and at the same time hope. I love it!! XD

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dinosaur-rawr13 [2010-10-30 23:47:24 +0000 UTC]

You're an amazing writer!!

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tmmdeathwish [2010-09-24 22:03:06 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwwwwwww so sad

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shadowdriver3 [2010-08-20 23:00:18 +0000 UTC]

AWWW *crys* this is so sad....*sniffles* Great story.

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Link-Zelda-lover [2010-06-18 23:37:05 +0000 UTC]

its very good I love it!

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ThorgilSilverhand [2010-06-12 00:27:58 +0000 UTC]

I cried

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kirikazu [2010-06-10 13:51:27 +0000 UTC]

damn it stop writing such good fafnfics no! wait! keep writing them i love them enjoy them they are great i love your writing!

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Chocolate-Kunai [2010-02-28 18:29:03 +0000 UTC]

This was a really good fic. I enjoyed the emotion... I almost cried at how sad and beautiful it was, and listening to 'Tori no uta' guitar version doesn't help.

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cutekaching [2009-10-30 16:08:28 +0000 UTC]

I felt random and clicked this and dude. . .


. . .this is the first fic that made me cry in years

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Tree-Huger [2009-08-19 08:22:57 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!! so sad! and yet so beautiful!! i wish i could write as good as u!!!

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Dark-Werewolf91 [2009-06-26 15:31:36 +0000 UTC]

Great fanfiction, really
I liked it, sad stories always have this special something.
That's worth the fav.
Nice idea as well, and you arranged the fanfiction and the song very fine, was great to read.
Well done.

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Edward-mein-GOTT [2009-03-17 20:12:37 +0000 UTC]

woe it's great but sooo sad i really cried in the end ^^

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xxxfallenskyxxx [2009-03-08 23:56:11 +0000 UTC]

So sad...I almost cried. Amazing writing here, keep it up!

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thebratt [2008-11-11 22:26:40 +0000 UTC]

OMG I almost cried, so very sad.

P.S. I do NOT cry very easily...

Gosh I love it!

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akino227 [2008-10-26 21:17:23 +0000 UTC]

[link] .
that was the most depressing yet one of the most beautiful things i have ever come across

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XxwintersolsticexX [2008-10-11 20:18:18 +0000 UTC]

ive been reading alot of sad ff today, one of urs almost made me cy but this is the 1st onhe ive evr read to make me cry.

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derdimant [2008-09-29 23:38:01 +0000 UTC]

omg i was so close to tears * snif*!! and i dont cry that easily ,loved it u write fanfic so well !

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hayley101 [2008-08-25 00:12:54 +0000 UTC]

ohh man thats just sad *crys * other then that it was prety good

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lonewolf-girl [2008-07-04 11:29:01 +0000 UTC]

kool i love your stories and i've only read 2
i shall give you a clap *clap* contine writing plz

--
i don't own any naruto charature... besides Gaara
----
i'm the wolf runing wild and free
why do you hunt me

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scweetey [2008-05-12 13:51:03 +0000 UTC]

That's soooo good..!! TAT
I liked so much, I want mooooore....-.-

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BunniStarr [2008-05-04 16:15:32 +0000 UTC]

That was beautiful and very sad. It made me cry!!!

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gaaragirl8 [2008-03-04 00:01:31 +0000 UTC]

man, that was so awesome and sad at the same time when i read this the second time i turned on the song it's a pretty good song

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Not-worth-it [2007-05-27 07:18:37 +0000 UTC]

thats so nice and sad i the same time . . . i cried . . . .

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blue-mirage [2006-09-29 22:18:15 +0000 UTC]

Right now I'm crying sooo hard ...and my cold isn't helping
beautiful piece

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Insanitys-Tragedity [2006-07-27 20:54:03 +0000 UTC]

That's sad.... I cried....

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Serielle [2006-05-14 10:36:29 +0000 UTC]

OMG so sad! T_T And I sooooo love this song!!! I wrote a story to this a while ago too but diffrent pairing! ^^ Awesome story!

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MadamBlackRosedFox [2006-04-14 01:56:29 +0000 UTC]

NARUTO! NO! WHY'S YOU DIE! Your making me cry, that made me cry.. I''m not used to crying.... It was very well writen.

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Sakura-Tora [2005-11-08 06:44:33 +0000 UTC]

Now, I read it... Now, your making me want to cry!!! +gulps down coke to hold tears back+

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Kupo-chan [2005-05-19 04:52:02 +0000 UTC]

Chuuuuuu
That's fantastic

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Puu-Puu-chan [2005-05-18 22:09:46 +0000 UTC]

MG:That's AWESOME!!!!

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SangoChan56 [2005-04-13 02:19:26 +0000 UTC]

i'm crying again..... you need to lighten up a bit you DARK SCARY GIRLL HAPPINESS!! I'm kidding XD

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gyakuten [2005-03-02 04:54:47 +0000 UTC]

damn that's effin sad :/..you're now one of my favorite fanfic authors that's really deep and nice. not much grammatical erros as far as i can see, except for the lumo part ^^..sort of threw me off, but i realized it was 'lump in his throat.' you inspire me that's a really good story, makes me think alot ^^.

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to gyakuten [2005-03-03 19:12:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh, god, I just read the story with Tears in Heaven in the backround.... Wauuuughh.... Now I'm sad... XP My own freaking story... XD

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to gyakuten [2005-03-02 17:33:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. RIGHT when I submit it, I saw lumo, but I had already clicked submit and I was just like "DAMN!"

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bacone [2005-03-02 03:47:57 +0000 UTC]

so sad...

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