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[oh no! Kate and Krystal are captured by monsters! and how is Krystal handling the death of Fox?... how are you guys handling it? and why didn't the monsters just finish them off? lets see what happens...]Kate's Log:
I finally awoke. I was on the back of one of the monsters, we were running with a pack of them amidst the trees.
I remained quiet because I didn't want to draw attention to myself.
I looked over and saw Krystal, she to was tied around the neck of one of the monsters.
I was scared. unsure of what was to happen.
I was hoping Brady would come and save the day, like he had done before...
but he was gone... he abandoned us. abandoned me.
it began to grow dark. as I could hear more animal noises.
the pack began to slow down.
they were huffing and snarling.
I looked around the one I was on and they were standing in front of a group of smaller ones. without hair on their heads and had narrow yellow eyes.
"what have you to report?" the leader od the bigger monsters said.
the leader of the smaller ones sneered.
"we brought our catch." he said
the larger one looked behind him.
there were two... strange looking beings sitting on the ground. they looked like reptiles with hair. they kind of reminded me of the Lacerta back on the Planet Titania.
but one was purple and the other was a bright red. and their ears were long and pointed.
the larger monster snarled.
"I thought you said you had three." he barked
the little one looked at him wickedly.
"we did... but we got hungry and ate the other one." he said sinfully.
I cringed at the thought.
the boss of the big ones stepped up to him and grabbed him by the throat.
"you maggots keep on eating our profits! not to mention that if the Lord finds out it will be your skin." he snarled.
he threw him down.
"do not touch the others." he snapped
he looked back at our carriers.
"put them by the others." he growled.
they threw us by the two girls.
I sat there for a moment.
then I heard Krystal, she began to cry.
"...how could this have happened? we come here, and just that simple... Fox dies." she sobbed.
I began to think...
my father's... and my mortal enemy saved my life.
"we were... going to get married. but now he was killed by those savages! and now Brady up and left us. and Falco and Slippy are at the mercy in the hands of who knows what. why dose this have to happen?" she asked
I then spoke.
"I... don't know." I said
I looked over at the girls. the reptile like ones.
I saw, the purple one, had a blade on the tip of her tail.
she used it to cut the ropes she was tied up with.
I was shocked
then she cut the other one free.
"hey what about us!?!" I shouted.
but then I realized what I had done.
the monsters looked up at us.
"HEY STOP!" the biggest one shouted
the two lizard girls took off into the shadows.
"HEY come back!" i shouted
a few of the monsters ran into the woods after them.
I hegan to struggle.
then I saw one of the nasty smaller monsters standing over me.
"you are looking rather tasty." he said with slime drooling though his teeth.
he took out his sword, ready to strike me.
then all of a sudden, there were these noises comming from the trees.
shrieks from the monsters.
the little one looked up.
then there were these sounds of clicks and whistles coming through the trees.
then silence for just a moment...
then out of the shadows.
this massive theripod dinosaur came thundering itno the camp and used its narrow massive jaws to snatch up the small monster standing above me.
it crunched it and black blood splattered on me.
the dinosaur was a green sort and had two crests on its head.
then the hoots and whistles came again.
and arrows and blaster bolts came flying through the air.
the monster dropped its sword, so I cut myself loose with the chance I had.
I got over to Krystal and untied her.
"hurry, lets get out of here!" I said.
I helped her up and we made a break for the trees.
unknowingly, one of the monsters saw us and followed us in.
we made it into the thicket.... but only the true danger had just begun...
[oh wow! Kate and Krystal are free, for the time being... but what of Falco and Slippy? and what about Brady? where is he in all of this? and what are they going to do about Fox? I am sure his body is going to attract some unwanted predators...]
Kate and the name Lacerta belongs to
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Comments: 5
The-First-Ace [2008-08-30 08:07:26 +0000 UTC]
Oh noes! They have eaten one of the cute lizards! D: Bastards!
Oh, what's that?
"Lacerta back on the Planet Titania"
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RavarokJudge In reply to The-First-Ace [2008-08-30 15:08:41 +0000 UTC]
I had to do a double take. I realized that my Saurillians looked a lot like your Lacerta.
so I decided there will be some kind of connection. but the credit to yours will always be stated.
and yeah I had to add that for dramatic tension.
the one that ate the one Saurillian is after the girls...
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RandomArtGirl [2008-08-30 05:36:23 +0000 UTC]
First!
OH NOES!!!!! this is exciting! why am I almost crying? FOX! NOOOO! Wow...not many people can make me feel sympathy for Fox OR the whole Star Fox team anyway!
GOOOOOOOD JOB!!! WRITE MORE! or else... XD
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RavarokJudge In reply to RandomArtGirl [2008-08-30 15:11:38 +0000 UTC]
don't you worry. there are more pages on the way.
things are just going to be getting more intense as things go.
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