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Published: 2004-05-07 20:35:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 19962; Favourites: 759; Downloads: 398
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Eternal guardian of the forestWhose pale eyes glow from the shadows
Running with the wind, fluid and sleek
Your fangs alone make the law
With the stars reflecting off your coat
Of burnished silver fire
Your ears are alert and forward
As a howl echos in the distance
Standing alone, watching through the night
As the moon travels the path of the sky
Unknown, unseen, but forever needed
Wolf...protector of the forest
Protect the weak, join the strong
Pass the birthright to your young
Wolf...guardian of the forest
May you always remain eternal
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Astounding, vivid, and passionate! An absolute masterpiece!!
Well done!! 
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This is brilliant! I am particularly fond of the Wolf... it is my favorite of the many fauna and flora of our world. You captured its elements perfectly and I couldn't be more impressed! I like the final passage: "May you always remain eternal"... absolutely brilliant.
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Yeah but if you had one as a pet, it wouldn't be in the forest anymore
It's a pretty poem though!
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If this is longer, I wanna learn it for ShakespearsΒ΄day....
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A truer passage has never been written or spoken
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Love love LOVE the whole poem - but especially the last stanza. Wonderful!
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Oh my, what a pretty picture! & that poem! Its better than any poems Ive made! & mine r good!
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[link] Stole your picture. I just wanted to let you know because she's doing it on every other piece she "owns"
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I love this...every last word...
I read it to my wolves xD Who knows, maybe they understood it
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I am the wolf , have me ...........
fantastic writing
Thank You
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Yesh, wolves are near perfect creatures!
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Wolves are amazing, many of my poems I write in my journal are about animals but a majority are of wolves.
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Really good work, special touches make it powerful. Thanks for sharing your talent.
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i love wolves and you did a good job displaying one in the poem
some people do have wolf hybrids as pets. oh and there are foxes, people have domesticated foxes as pets.
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That was amazing......I am at a loss for words. I have goosebumps it was so beautiful. Keep on writing.
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I love wolves and you've got them exactly right. Good Job
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I love it!! I wish I could have a pet wolf too!!xD
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true majorly true wolves would be the best pet ever!!! i love ur poem i think it truely captures the wolf's meaning
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still though its very beautiful. Does reality have to ruin our imagination?Why do you think so many fantasy books sell? As humans we enjoy most what we wish could be real.
wow, my thoughts are deep at mid night...
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Hmmm...according to my patented Critiquer, while your poem isn't bad, it shows you have a very romanticized-and inaccurate- idea of wolves.
For one thing, wolves do NOT protect the weak. They eat them.
And they're NOT guardians of the forest. They're predators, preying on whatever they can find.
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Amazing poem! You did an awesome job! I have a question though........ how do you put literature entries on DA?
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oh gos this is the best thigh i heard about a wolf and yeah i would like having one for a pet to
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I am sooooooooooo going to move to Alaska and get one when i grow up.
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yeah they cool & cute can you please write about the soul???
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haha, i agree, i wish i could have one as a pet too, great writing too 
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haha, i agree, i wish i could have one as a pet too, great writing too
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*O* OMG THIS IS SO AWSOME AND VERY DEEP!!! im faving it wthout doubt!!
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*sniff* That is the MOST beautiful poem I've
ever read from the Internet... I just love wolves...
I would like to have a wolf-dog when I can...
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